Aisi Natkhat Si Meri Jaan Hai...~Shihab~

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          Zara  Si  Bholi , Aur  Zara  Si  Shaitaan  Hai
          Haan Aisi Nathkhat Si , Woh Meri Jaan Hai.
 
          Yun Sarapa Rangon  Mein Hai Dhali Si Hui
          Jaise Sari Qudraten Uspe , Meharbaan Hai.
 
          Is Qadar Aata Hai Lutf, Sunke Baaten Uski
          Ki  Koyal Se Bhi  Mitthi , Uski  Zubaan Hai
 
          Aur Bhi  Badi Hi Pyaari, Lagti  Hai Mujhey
          Sab Janke Bhi  Jab Woh , Banti Anjaan Hai.
 
          Kabhi Rooth Ti Hai To Kabhi Manaati Hai
          Thodi Si Saiyani Aur Thodi Si Nadaan Hai
 
          Zara  Si  Bholi, Aur Zara  Si  Shaitaan  Hai
          Haan Aisi Nathkhat Si, Woh Meri Jaan Hai.


                       ~Shihab~

 
 
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«Reply #1 on: August 01, 2010, 12:13:31 PM »
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wowwwww.......shihab ji......mastam poem....kitna pyar se describe kiya h aapne apni jaan ko.....bht hi pyari peshkash
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«Reply #2 on: August 01, 2010, 01:08:35 PM »
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Nice creation Shihab Bhai. Allah aapko khush rakhe.
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«Reply #3 on: August 01, 2010, 04:52:29 PM »
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humesha Ki tarah bahut Khoob Majid Bhai..

Bahut Khoobsurat Ehsaas!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: August 01, 2010, 05:49:36 PM »
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Waah ji waah bahut hi khoob shihab ji..badi hi pyari kavita likhi hai...Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: August 02, 2010, 03:54:51 PM »
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Wah wah Shihab ji bahut baddiya,hamesha k tarah bahut khoobsurti se likha aapne,great work. icon_salut Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: August 04, 2010, 03:16:23 AM »
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Wah Shihab ji wah... bahut khoobsurat peshkash hai aapki ye... bahut khoob... aisa lag raha hai ye koi geet hai aur main bas ise gungunaata rahun... bahut sundar likha hai aapne...!!!
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«Reply #7 on: August 05, 2010, 03:37:53 PM »
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Oh Wow Kya Baat Hai Yar Bohat Hi Khubsurat Hai
Har Lafz Maano Muhammabat Mein Dooba Hua Sa Hai
Bohat Hi Badiya Peshkash Hai Mere Bhai.
Par Ek Baat To Bata Yeh Jaan Hai Kaun?
Jis Se Abhi Tak Main Anjaan Hoon.?hmhmh

Allah pak Tujhey KLhush Rakhe Ameen.[b/]
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«Reply #8 on: August 05, 2010, 03:52:35 PM »
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 Clapping Smiley Applause   Applause  Applause  Applause  Applause  Applause  Applause  Applause  Applause  Applause  Applause  Applause  Applause  Applause  Applause  Applause  Applause  Applause  Applause  Applause  Applause  Applause  Applause
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«Reply #9 on: August 05, 2010, 03:59:05 PM »
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ahaa Shihab sahab..sirf wah wah kehen ko jee chahta he..

unke pehlu se nikalne ko jee nhai karta,
kya kare khuda se milne ko je nahi karta,
mujhse naraZ na hona khuda bas is bar bakhs de,
ki mere khuda wo he tujhe khuda kehne ko jee nahi karta~
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«Reply #10 on: August 09, 2010, 12:16:24 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Shukariya Janaab Abhi Saheb Himmat Afzaii K Liye
Aapka Tahe Dilse Mashkur Hun Ki Aapne Pasand Farmaya Aur Apna
Kimti Waqt Diya Bahut Shukariya...[b/]

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Yeh Jo Sirq-o-Bid'at Tum Aey Yaar Kar Rahe Ho
Mat Bhoolon Apni Hi Jaan Pe Waar Kar Rahe Ho

Ek Napak Qatre Se Paida Hue Insaan Ko, Aap Q?
Us  Paak Zaat Ke Saath,  Shumaar Kar  Rahe Ho.


aji sahab, waqt ka kya he har kisi ke l;iye kimti hota he..or aap jaise manje huye shayar ko padhne ka mauka mila ye to hamare upar us uparwale badshaah ki meherbani he~
kuchh mere labzo me~

itni acche kalaam par agar hamari kalam na chalegi,
"Abhi" fir kya shayari ki shamma tune dil me jalayi he....
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«Reply #11 on: August 09, 2010, 05:08:23 PM »
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hmm behetareen shihab saheb...

kabhi ye line khud ko pesh karne ke liye likhi thi aaj sochta hun galat tha aap jaise hi kuchh insaanon ke liye hi mujhse uparwale ne likhne kaha hoga---

kehen ko to dil "bejubaan" seene me dhadakta he yaron,
"Abhi" shayar wo he jo mehfil me dil ko jubaan deta he~
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«Reply #12 on: August 11, 2010, 11:13:00 AM »
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sahi bat heee jiii..

waise to dil ki bat kabhi ansuni nahi hoti...par gar dil ki awaz bhi na suni jaye to fir ek hi dua nikalti he sahab...

me tere dar se bhi khali hath lauta hu e khuda sun le,
tera karam bhi na hua mujhpar mujhe ab maut hi de do~~
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«Reply #13 on: September 12, 2010, 05:41:55 AM »
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           Zara  Si Bholi  Aur Zara  Si  Shaitaan  Hai
          Haan Aisi Nathkhat Si Woh Meri Jaan Hai.
 
          Yun Sarapa Rangon Men Hai Dhali Si Hui
          Jaise Sari Qudraten Uspe Meharbaan Hai.
 
          Is Qdar Lutf Aata Hai Sunke Baatein Uski
          Ki Koyal Se  Bhi  Mitthi  Uski  Zubaan Hai
 
          Aur Bhi  Badi Hi Pyaari Lagti  Hai Mujhey
          Sab Janke Bhi Jab Woh Banti Anjaan Hai.
 
          Kabhi Rooth Ti Hai To Kabhi Manaati Hai
          Thodi Si Saiyani Or Thodi Si Nadaan Hai
 
          Zara  Si Bholi  Aur Zara  Si Shaitaan  Hai
          Haan Aisi Nathkhat Si Woh Meri Jaan Hai.


                       ~Shihab~

 
 


Bahut khoob Shihab Ji
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«Reply #14 on: February 11, 2011, 08:36:57 AM »
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           Zara  Si Bholi  Aur Zara  Si  Shaitaan  Hai
          Haan Aisi Nathkhat Si Woh Meri Jaan Hai.
 
          Yun Sarapa Rangon Men Hai Dhali Si Hui
          Jaise Sari Qudraten Uspe Meharbaan Hai.
 
          Is Qdar Lutf Aata Hai Sunke Baatein Uski
          Ki Koyal Se  Bhi  Mitthi  Uski  Zubaan Hai
 
          Aur Bhi  Badi Hi Pyaari Lagti  Hai Mujhey
          Sab Janke Bhi Jab Woh Banti Anjaan Hai.
 
          Kabhi Rooth Ti Hai To Kabhi Manaati Hai
          Thodi Si Saiyani Aur Thodi Si Nadaan Hai
 
          Zara  Si  Bholi  Aur Zara  Si Shaitaan  Hai
          Haan Aisi Nathkhat Si Woh Meri Jaan Hai.


                       ~Shihab~

 
 


Meri Bhi Jaan Kuch Kuch Aisi Hi Shihab Ji
Bohat Hi Badiya Aur Pyara Wala Likha Hai Aapne

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