Aurat - Husn ka paikar

by Naziya Tahera on January 08, 2009, 08:03:57 PM
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Aurat
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Raah-e Safar me.n ham teri jageer ki tarah
Ham hain khilona haath ki tasweer ki tarah

Shab m.n jale.n , saza ye mili meri nafs ko
Sozaa.n hai dil ye Shamma-e tanveer ki tarah

Husn-o jamal dekh kar larzaa.n hai zamana
Maen huu.n kisi ke khwaab ki taabeer ki tarah

Zulfon se meri tujh ko shikayat hai kis liye
Saya hain , na samajh isse zanjeer ki tarah

Aurat Gul-e naazuk hai magar waqt jab pada
Ubhri Fiza me.n shola-e Shamsheer ki tarah

Aao banayen ishq me.n Aurat ki yaadgaar
Kar len ye kaam Taj ki tameer ki tarah

Na jane kab ho Naziya ye zindagi tamaam
Padh len Ghazal ye naghma-e aakheer ki tarah

by me --Naziya
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«Reply #1 on: January 08, 2009, 08:08:23 PM »
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...awesome one Naziya...really liked it...i came to know some good words from this one...thanks...
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«Reply #2 on: January 08, 2009, 08:48:48 PM »
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ek ek line kamaal ki hai ... bahoot khoob likha hai... yah do line magar dil ko ander tak chu gai

Aurat Gul-e naazuk hai magar waqt jab pada
Ubhri Fiza me.n shola-e Shamsheer ki tarah

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Good work!! Yoindia main apka sawagat hai Naziya Tahera ji
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«Reply #3 on: January 08, 2009, 08:55:19 PM »
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wah, kya baat hai Naziya, bahut khoob

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«Reply #4 on: January 08, 2009, 09:09:14 PM »
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Aurat
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Raah-e Safar me.n ham teri jageer ki tarah
Ham hain khilona haath ki tasweer ki tarah

Shab m.n jale.n , saza ye mili meri nafs ko
Sozaa.n hai dil ye Shamma-e tanveer ki tarah

Husn-o jamal dekh kar larzaa.n hai zamana
Maen huu.n kisi ke khwaab ki taabeer ki tarah

Zulfon se meri tujh ko shikayat hai kis liye
Saya hain , na samajh isse zanjeer ki tarah

Aurat Gul-e naazuk hai magar waqt jab pada
Ubhri Fiza me.n shola-e Shamsheer ki tarah

Aao banayen ishq me.n Aurat ki yaadgaar
Kar len ye kaam Taj ki tameer ki tarah

Na jane kab ho Naziya ye zindagi tamaam
Padh len Ghazal ye naghma-e aakheer ki tarah

by me --Naziya


Subhan Allah,.
Subhan Allah,.

Bohat Hi Badhiya Hai Naziya Ji,.
Yunhi Likhte Rahiye,.

May Allah Bless U, Me And All,.
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«Reply #5 on: January 08, 2009, 11:29:34 PM »
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Bahut Khoob Naziya Ji
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«Reply #6 on: January 09, 2009, 04:25:55 AM »
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Bohat zabardast Andaze bayaan kismat hain hamari jo itna khoobsurat kalam padhne ka mauka mila. Very good naziya very good specially this sher

                  aurat gul-e-nazuk hain magar waqt jab padha
                  ubhri fiza me shola-e-shamshir ki tarah

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«Reply #7 on: January 09, 2009, 11:28:17 AM »
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Shukriya

Just hate -Love ji

Rajesh ji

Pooja ji..
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Tareef ke liye aapka bahot shukriya
 Aur kuchh ash-aar aapke dil chhoo gaye tu mehnat hamari wasool ho gayee..
Ek Shayer / Shayra ko kya chahiye..waah wa.. bas.
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Shukriya Jasbir  Bir ji
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 khush rahiye bhaaii.
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«Reply #8 on: January 09, 2009, 11:30:31 AM »
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Shukriya Sajid bhaaii.( Ghayal ji )
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«Reply #9 on: January 09, 2009, 11:34:30 AM »
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Quote from: Naziya Tahera on January 09, 2009, 11:28:17 AM
Shukriya

Just hate -Love ji

Rajesh ji

Pooja ji..
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Tareef ke liye aapka bahot shukriya
 Aur kuchh ash-aar aapke dil chhoo gaye tu mehnat hamari wasool ho gayee..
Ek Shayer / Shayra ko kya chahiye..waah wa.. bas.
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Shukriya Jasbir  Bir ji
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Azeem..
 khush rahiye bhaaii.

U Are Always Welcome Didijaan,.
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«Reply #10 on: January 09, 2009, 02:12:45 PM »
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V. Nice Naziya Ji...  this reminds me a poem writeen by Prem Warbartoni...  "Kabhi to khul ke baras abr-e-mehrbaan ki trah .... Mera wajood hai jalte huye makaan ki tarah".  kucch ash-har pesh-e-kidmat hai !!


Iss jahaan ki nai lagti, tum kis jahan se aayi ho?
Bhikri julfe, Surkh ankhein, Aasmaan se chayi ho

chan-chan chan-chan payal karti, heerni jasie chaal
Roshni chand jasie aur taajgi phoolon ki laayi ho

Hairaan hota hai khudaa bhi dekh kar tujh ko
Goya, ke usne nahin kissi aur ne banayi ho !!



HumTum  hello
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«Reply #11 on: January 11, 2009, 02:27:19 AM »
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Bahot khoob bahot khoob ..

Aurat gule Naazuk hai magar waqt jab pada
Ubhri fiza mein shla-e shamsheer ki tarah..

waah lajawaab sher.
Na jane kab ho naziya ye zindagi tamaam
Padh len ghazal ye naghma-e aakheer ki tarah
bahot umda sher..
par sister...
Aesa kyoon likhti hain,..
Allah aapki umr daraaz kare..
kayakallaah.
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«Reply #12 on: January 11, 2009, 03:18:25 AM »
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Quote from: Naziya Tahera on January 08, 2009, 08:03:57 PM
Aurat
..........
Raah-e Safar me.n ham teri jageer ki tarah
Ham hain khilona haath ki tasweer ki tarah

Shab m.n jale.n , saza ye mili meri nafs ko
Sozaa.n hai dil ye Shamma-e tanveer ki tarah

Husn-o jamal dekh kar larzaa.n hai zamana
Maen huu.n kisi ke khwaab ki taabeer ki tarah

Zulfon se meri tujh ko shikayat hai kis liye
Saya hain , na samajh isse zanjeer ki tarah

Aurat Gul-e naazuk hai magar waqt jab pada
Ubhri Fiza me.n shola-e Shamsheer ki tarah

Aao banayen ishq me.n Aurat ki yaadgaar
Kar len ye kaam Taj ki tameer ki tarah

Na jane kab ho Naziya ye zindagi tamaam
Padh len Ghazal ye naghma-e aakheer ki tarah

by me --Naziya


Wah wah Naziya sis..., maine aapka kalam pehle be
pada hai.. wakayi aap bahut accha likhte hai... and
aap ek ek kalam lajawab hai... Yu hi likhte rahiyega..
Accha lagta hai padkar.
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«Reply #13 on: January 11, 2009, 04:11:53 AM »
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Quote from: Naziya Tahera on January 08, 2009, 08:03:57 PM
Aurat
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Raah-e Safar me.n ham teri jageer ki tarah
Ham hain khilona haath ki tasweer ki tarah

Shab m.n jale.n , saza ye mili meri nafs ko
Sozaa.n hai dil ye Shamma-e tanveer ki tarah

Husn-o jamal dekh kar larzaa.n hai zamana
Maen huu.n kisi ke khwaab ki taabeer ki tarah

Zulfon se meri tujh ko shikayat hai kis liye
Saya hain , na samajh isse zanjeer ki tarah

Aurat Gul-e naazuk hai magar waqt jab pada
Ubhri Fiza me.n shola-e Shamsheer ki tarah

Aao banayen ishq me.n Aurat ki yaadgaar
Kar len ye kaam Taj ki tameer ki tarah

Na jane kab ho Naziya ye zindagi tamaam
Padh len Ghazal ye naghma-e aakheer ki tarah

by me --Naziya



Wah Wah Kya bath hai Naziya Ji !! Jahan aisi Aurten Bahoth Kam baqi rahe gayi hain jo apna martaba jaanti hon !! Masha allah kya kubsurath tariqe se aurth ko Ghazal ka roop diya hai likhna to bahoth chahata tha magar apke is kalam ne bolti band kar di !!maine bhi eak bhi eak ghazal likhi hai aur ki hasti per bahoth jald ap log pad sakenge usko !!

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«Reply #14 on: January 11, 2009, 04:21:19 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause
Wah wah Naziya bohat khoob ... Thumbs UP

HumTum bohat khoob wah wah... Thumbs UP
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