sharmaarunkumar
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« on: October 08, 2004, 12:12:12 AM » |
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Dil le hi chuke Naaz se, Shokhi se, Hansi se!
Ab Unki Balaa Aankh Milaati hai Kisi Se!
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Celmira
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« Reply #1 on: October 08, 2004, 05:36:02 PM » |
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Wah! Arunji..
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sharmaarunkumar
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« Reply #2 on: October 09, 2004, 12:00:30 AM » |
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Shukriya Talat ji!
Un Rasbhari aankhon mein Haya Khel rahi Hai!
Do Zahar ke pyaalon mein Kazaa Khel rahi Hai!
(Akhtar Sheerani)
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Pooja
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« Reply #3 on: October 09, 2004, 12:03:13 AM » |
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wah!!!!! bahoot khoob.....AKS JI.....KAMAL..KA LIKHA HAI.....!!!
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« Reply #4 on: October 09, 2004, 01:12:21 AM » |
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Thanks a Lot! Pooja ji! to Inspire us!
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Celmira
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« Reply #5 on: October 09, 2004, 09:53:41 AM » |
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Wah! Arunji...
aankh ko jaam samajh baitha tha anjaane main
saaqiya hosh kahaan tha tere deewaane main (NM)
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« Reply #6 on: October 09, 2004, 10:04:19 AM » |
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Wah! Talat ji! Khoob Kaha! Aapne!
Chhalakti Hai jo tere Zaam se Us may ka Kya kahna,
Baat Tere Shadaab Hothon ki Magar Kuchh aur hai Saaki!
(Mazaaz)
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« Reply #7 on: October 09, 2004, 10:13:23 AM » |
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Wah!
saaqi par ilzaam na aaye
chaahe tujh tak jaam na aaye!!! (NM)
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« Reply #8 on: October 09, 2004, 10:31:54 AM » |
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Wah talat ji! Very Nice!
Ek saagar Bhi Inayat na hUa yaad rahe!
Saqiya jaate hain Mehfil teri Aabad Rahe!
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Qutubuddin
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« Reply #9 on: October 09, 2004, 02:59:37 PM » |
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"
Unkee Aakoo kaa na Puchyaa..
Kuchnaa kahsakay gay hum..
Dekkaaa thau unkoo phchlee baar..
Dupkaa cashmaa pahnay huway.
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Ques....
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« Reply #10 on: October 09, 2004, 03:06:14 PM » |
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"
Dil Day hee cukay tay hum tayray aatay baar paay..
Aataybaar kaa bhee aab aataybaar na raha..
Aab Tayraa humkoo intayzzar naa raha..
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« Reply #11 on: October 09, 2004, 03:11:24 PM » |
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Nice lines! Qutubuddin ji!
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« Reply #12 on: October 23, 2004, 03:54:16 AM » |
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WAH!!! BAHOOT KHOOB AKS JI AND TALAT!!!!
Nice one Qutubuddin ji!
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