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MAIN JAANTA THA YE HAAL HOGA
BICHHAR KE USKO MALAAL HOGA
SUKOON KAISE REHEGA QADIR
JO DIL KE SHEESHE MAIN BAAL HOGA
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«Reply #1 on: January 30, 2010, 04:16:43 PM » |
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Nice !
But whats meaning of Baal in the last line ? hair ? or something else ?
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«Reply #2 on: January 30, 2010, 04:29:14 PM » |
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nice.
i agree with divya di..
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riyaz106
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«Reply #3 on: January 30, 2010, 10:35:08 PM » |
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Niyaz ji bade achhe sher likhe hain. Isme bal ka jo matlab hai wo is tarah hai:
Jab sheeshe mein bareek sa crack aa jaata hai to dekhne mein bal(hair) jaisa hi lagta hai. Isi crack ko sheeshe mein baal aana kahte hain. Iski ek misaal dekhen:
Hamne hasraton ke daagh aansuo mein dho liye
Aapki khushi huzoor boliye na boliye
Ab isme apni soorat-e-raana na dekhiye
Ab dil ke aaine mein kai baal aa gaye
(soorat-e-raana = Beautiful face)
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«Reply #4 on: January 30, 2010, 11:33:00 PM » |
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very nice niyaz ji......
Shukriya riyaz ji....samajhna aasan kar diya aapne
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«Reply #5 on: January 31, 2010, 12:29:21 AM » |
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«Reply #6 on: January 31, 2010, 12:35:05 AM » |
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MAIN JAANTA THA YE HAAL HOGA
BICHHAR KE USKO MALAAL HOGA
SUKOON KAISE REHEGA QADIR
JO DIL KE SHEESHE MAIN BAAL HOGA
Bahut khoob...Thanks for sharing  |
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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #7 on: February 01, 2010, 07:51:03 PM » |
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Nice
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qadir niyaz
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«Reply #8 on: February 04, 2010, 05:55:38 PM » |
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Nice !
But whats meaning of Baal in the last line ? hair ? or something else ?
Hello dear sophi thanks for the cute complement on my poem YE HAAL HOGA thanks a lot (the meaning of BAAL i've mentioned as crack, broken sign in mirror)is that clear..keep in touch my e-mail is qadirniyaz@gmail.com |
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qadir niyaz
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«Reply #9 on: February 04, 2010, 06:09:48 PM » |
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Nice
thank my email is qadirniyaz@gmail.com |
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qadir niyaz
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«Reply #10 on: February 04, 2010, 06:10:42 PM » |
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Bahut khoob...Thanks for sharing Thanks for the complement |
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qadir niyaz
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«Reply #11 on: February 04, 2010, 06:11:21 PM » |
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Great! thanks dear you are real admirer |
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qadir niyaz
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«Reply #12 on: February 04, 2010, 06:12:21 PM » |
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very nice niyaz ji......
Shukriya riyaz ji....samajhna aasan kar diya aapne
bahut shukriya aapne mera klaam padha aur taarif ki shukriya |
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qadir niyaz
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«Reply #13 on: February 04, 2010, 06:13:33 PM » |
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Niyaz ji bade achhe sher likhe hain. Isme bal ka jo matlab hai wo is tarah hai:
Jab sheeshe mein bareek sa crack aa jaata hai to dekhne mein bal(hair) jaisa hi lagta hai. Isi crack ko sheeshe mein baal aana kahte hain. Iski ek misaal dekhen:
Hamne hasraton ke daagh aansuo mein dho liye
Aapki khushi huzoor boliye na boliye
Ab isme apni soorat-e-raana na dekhiye
Ab dil ke aaine mein kai baal aa gaye
(soorat-e-raana = Beautiful face)
Dear Riyaz Bhai aapne klaaam ko samjha shukriya kabhi mail karo mera email id hai qadirniyaz@gmail.com |
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qadir niyaz
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«Reply #14 on: February 04, 2010, 06:14:46 PM » |
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nice.
i agree with divya di..
Hello h r u thanks for the complement keep in touch qadirniyaz@gmail.com |
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