yoindians Weds My feelings "Rahi"

by Rahi2001 on August 21, 2010, 06:56:40 AM
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maine apne sabhi yoindia ke mitron ke naam ko use kiya hai
kuch ke naamon ko mai nahi use kar paya jiske liye chamaprarthi hu
aur aap logon se ummed karta hu ki ye rachna aap logon ko pasand aayegi


badal dun roop mitti ka aisa kalaskar hu mai
tere husn ka aisa talabgaar hu mai

nahi hai koi khwaish ab mujhe e-sanam siwa tere
tere pyaar ko pane ki chahat me bekarar hu mai

uthi haai aaj sine me ek *kasak*...dil ki
tere sath me jine ka intajaar hu mai  

nahi hu mai koi kal bita hua tera
tera aaj hu abhi hu dildar hu mai

bhut suna hai maine giton ko gaty hue sab ko
teri koyal si boli ka diwana har baar hu mai

mere ishk ka parwaaz kuch is kadar hua
tanhai me baitha akela bejaar hu mai

tujhe pane ki meri ab tammanna hai is kadar
tere pyaar ke shabdon ka ishtehar hu mai


meri manjil bhi tu hai meri duniya bhi tu hai
mai hu "Rahi" tera , tera panahgaar hu mai



aap sabka "Rahi"


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«Reply #1 on: August 21, 2010, 07:04:18 AM »
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bahot bahot umada aur nek khayal hai aapke rahi ji...

aur kya khoob likha hai sab ke naamo ko milate huve...
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«Reply #2 on: August 21, 2010, 07:05:36 AM »
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bahot bahot umada aur nek khayal hai aapke rahi ji...

aur kya khoob likha hai sab ke naamo ko milate huve...

ji shukriya rancho ji

maine bhut koshish ki aap ke naam ko b yahan set karne ki but...........

thoda chota hu na sikh jaonga

hahahahaha
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«Reply #3 on: August 21, 2010, 07:09:58 AM »
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aree rahi ji aisa keh ke to aap mujhe sharminda kar rahe ho

naam ka kya hai mere dost, woh to bas sil me hona chahiye,
kaagaz pe likho ya na likho bas dil me rakho yehi bahot badi baat hoti hai dost...


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«Reply #4 on: August 21, 2010, 07:12:20 AM »
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aree rahi ji aisa keh ke to aap mujhe sharminda kar rahe ho

naam ka kya hai mere dost, woh to bas sil me hona chahiye,
kaagaz pe likho ya na likho bas dil me rakho yehi bahot badi baat hoti hai dost...




 ji ha sahi kaha aapne
par sach me mai kuch namon ko na likh pane ki wajah se is rachna ko adhuri maan raha hu jise agar koi poora kar de to uska shukra gujar rahunga
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«Reply #5 on: August 21, 2010, 07:14:26 AM »
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ji hamare parivar me bahot saare HEERE bhare pade huve hai jo iss rachana ko aage badhayenge aur usse aapki soch ke mutabik pura karne ki koshish karenge aur woh jaroor puri hogi aisi meri bhi tamnna hai... and at last Aal Izz Well.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: August 21, 2010, 07:21:46 AM »
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ji hamare parivar me bahot saare HEERE bhare pade huve hai jo iss rachana ko aage badhayenge aur usse aapki soch ke mutabik pura karne ki koshish karenge aur woh jaroor puri hogi aisi meri bhi tamnna hai... and at last Aal Izz Well.. Usual Smile

 ji han sahi kaha aapne
aaaaameeeeeeeeeen
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«Reply #7 on: August 21, 2010, 07:25:50 AM »
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bht mast likha hai rahul tumne aur jis tarah sabke naamo k hisab se likha hai wowwwwwwww..superbbbbbbbb hai ye.......mastam re mastam
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«Reply #8 on: August 21, 2010, 07:30:16 AM »
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bht mast likha hai rahul tumne aur jis tarah sabke naamo k hisab se likha hai wowwwwwwww..superbbbbbbbb hai ye.......mastam re mastam

yepiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

intajaaaaaaaaar khatam huaaaaaaaa
 meri di ne padhaaaa
aur pasand b kiyaaaaaaaaaa

hammmmmm mai to shayar ho gaya re
ehehehehehehe

aap ko to thanx b nahi bolonga diii..........
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«Reply #9 on: August 21, 2010, 10:24:32 AM »
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shukriya Rahi ji....
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«Reply #10 on: August 21, 2010, 10:27:19 AM »
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shukriya Rahi ji....

sirf shukriya se naam nahi chalega isme aage kaam baki hai

meri help kijiye aap log baden hai na

maine jitna bana so kiya ab aap logon ki bari jo naam chout gaye hai unko jodiye
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«Reply #11 on: August 21, 2010, 03:11:33 PM »
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    Sabse pehle to shukriya sir ji humare naam ko apni poem me jagah dene k liy, aur bahut saadgi or khoobsurti se sabhi naamo ko shaamil kiya hai aapne. Very nice. icon_thumleft icon_thumleft 
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«Reply #12 on: August 21, 2010, 03:19:39 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Shukriya raahi ji Jo Apane Humein Apni poetry Mein Sharik kiya..Aur Aapne Bahut Pyaare Dand Se Sab ke naam jode hai iss Kavita mein..

Bahut Ache.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #13 on: August 25, 2010, 06:20:04 AM »
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    Sabse pehle to shukriya sir ji humare naam ko apni poem me jagah dene k liy, aur bahut saadgi or khoobsurti se sabhi naamo ko shaamil kiya hai aapne. Very nice. icon_thumleft icon_thumleft 


tammanna ji shukriya kahne se kya hota hai

aap janti hain ki mai jo acha lagta hai wahi karta hu

ab aap ko b kuch karna hai is poem me hamare kai sathi chhut gaye hai unko isi kram me jodna hai aap sabko
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«Reply #14 on: August 25, 2010, 06:21:09 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Shukriya raahi ji Jo Apane Humein Apni poetry Mein Sharik kiya..Aur Aapne Bahut Pyaare Dand Se Sab ke naam jode hai iss Kavita mein..

Bahut Ache.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


sirf shukriyaaaaaaaa 

khwaish ji aisi ummed nahi thi aap se

kam se kam aap to aagy jari rakh sakty hai
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