" Tanhayi " ( feelings ).....

by sweet_raabii on March 16, 2006, 05:38:58 AM
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woh raatein mousam sarma ki
woh baatein mousam garma ki

woh tere sath hi sab kuch tha
woh lamba bhi ab beeit gaya

woh dar dar ke jab milte the
woh mil mil ke jab darte the

woh milne ki kasmey kha kha kar
hum jeetey the hum marte the

ab yaad dilaye koi humhe
yeh saal bhi aakhir beeit gaya

woh saard hawayien ab bhi hai
rangeen fazayien ab bhi hai

woh bheegey bheegey paani ki
pur shor sadayien ab bhi hai

hum ab bhi udhar jate hai
aur apna dil sulgathe hai

jab tum nahi hote sath mere
hote hai khaali hath mere

pur shor sadayien pochti hai
woh sardh hawayein pochti hai

woh kahan gaya saathi tera
kiya phir yeh zamana beeit gaya

hum mile gay ek din phir kahin
is baat ka yaqeen ab bhi hai.....
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ammna
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«Reply #1 on: March 16, 2006, 08:12:55 AM »
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Zabardust,,,,,
GR8
Excellent.....

ab kya kahon rabbi G !!!!

Can i have the poet name........ M lo'in it
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«Reply #2 on: March 16, 2006, 08:16:33 AM »
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Bohat achi...Rabbi G

Aik poori prem kahani ke baad bichardne ka manzar aur.......
Is it your own creation?Huh?

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«Reply #3 on: March 18, 2006, 05:21:38 AM »
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Thanks alot both of you
Aamna & Nawabian

And yes its my poem.....
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«Reply #4 on: June 26, 2006, 08:49:22 AM »
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woh raatein mousam sarma ki
woh baatein mousam garma ki

woh tere sath hi sab kuch tha
woh lamba bhi ab beeit gaya

woh dar dar ke jab milte the
woh mil mil ke jab darte the

woh milne ki kasmey kha kha kar
hum jeetey the hum marte the

ab yaad dilaye koi humhe
yeh saal bhi aakhir beeit gaya

woh saard hawayien ab bhi hai
rangeen fazayien ab bhi hai

woh bheegey bheegey paani ki
pur shor sadayien ab bhi hai

hum ab bhi udhar jate hai
aur apna dil sulgathe hai

jab tum nahi hote sath mere
hote hai khaali hath mere

pur shor sadayien pochti hai
woh sardh hawayein pochti hai

woh kahan gaya saathi tera
kiya phir yeh zamana beeit gaya

hum mile gay ek din phir kahin
is baat ka yaqeen ab bhi hai.....
BAHUT KHUB
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