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by Dr.Saira999 on March 31, 2007, 01:12:30 AM
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Zindagi ne kaha muskuraate huwe

 Mil toh jao kabhi aate jaate huwe 

 Woh bhi shayad pasheman tha meri tarhan 

 Mudd ke dekha toh tha uss ne aate jaate huwe

 Aadmi ki hain bahut si majbooriyan 
 
 Yeh kaha uss ne mujh ko sunaate huwe 

 Apne vaade pe jin ko bahut naaz tha 

 Unko dekha baatein banate huwe

 Yaaron hum bhi manzil pe aa hi gaye

 Ladkhadaate huwe... Dagmagaate huwe.....
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«Reply #1 on: March 31, 2007, 10:08:59 PM »
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Dr. ji

Kya badhiya kalaam likh gayi aap AATE JAATE HUWE =D> =D> =D>

Very nice. Keep it up :D

Bas aap yun he likhti rahiye AATE JAATE HUWE :wink:

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«Reply #2 on: March 31, 2007, 10:10:54 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya bhaiya ji.....

Bilkul aise hi likhti rahungi AATE JAATE HUWE Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: April 01, 2007, 03:15:14 AM »
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 sign12 Woh bhi shayad pasheman tha meri tarhan sign12

 sign10 Mudd ke dekha toh tha uss ne aate jaate huwe sign10

 sign12 Aadmi ki hain bahut si majbooriyan sign12

 sign10 Yeh kaha uss ne mujh ko sunaate huwe sign10

 sign12 Apne vaade pe jin ko bahut naaz tha sign12

 sign10 Unko dekha baatein banate huwe sign10

 sign12 Yaaron hum bhi manzil pe aa hi gaye sign12

 sign10 Ladkhadaate huwe... Dagmagaate huwe..... sign10
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Waaah saira ji!! bahut Khoob!!! Behtareen Likha hai aapne!!! waaah!!!

Tera Ashiq tha woh na Tujh se Taqrar mangta tha!
Baton hi baton mein, Tujh se tera Pyaar mangta tha!

chheen liya tha jo tune kaatil adaon se apni,
Woh to apna woh Dil ka  karar mangta tha!

Kaid tha jo Gulshan Tere Dil ki Zidaan mein,
Woh to usi bageeche ki bahaar mangta tha!
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«Reply #4 on: April 01, 2007, 05:16:27 AM »
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bahoot khoob Dr. Saira and AKS JI!!
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«Reply #5 on: April 01, 2007, 05:21:54 AM »
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bahoot khoob Dr. Saira and AKS JI!!



 :D  :razz: Shukriya Pooja ji!!!
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«Reply #6 on: April 01, 2007, 01:39:58 PM »
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sign12 Zindagi ne kaha muskuraate huwe sign12

 sign10 Mil toh jao kabhi aate jaate huwe sign10

 sign12 Woh bhi shayad pasheman tha meri tarhan sign12

 sign10 Mudd ke dekha toh tha uss ne aate jaate huwe sign10

 sign12 Aadmi ki hain bahut si majbooriyan sign12

 sign10 Yeh kaha uss ne mujh ko sunaate huwe sign10

 sign12 Apne vaade pe jin ko bahut naaz tha sign12

 sign10 Unko dekha baatein banate huwe sign10

 sign12 Yaaron hum bhi manzil pe aa hi gaye sign12

 sign10 Ladkhadaate huwe... Dagmagaate huwe..... sign10
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 love7  :flower:  :flower:  :flower:  :flower:  :flower:  :flower:  :flower:  :flower:  :flower:  :flower:  :flower:  :flower:  :flower:  :flower:  :flower:  :flower:  :flower:  :flower:  love7


Waaah saira ji!! bahut Khoob!!! Behtareen Likha hai aapne!!! waaah!!!

Tera Ashiq tha woh na Tujh se Taqrar mangta tha!
Baton hi baton mein, Tujh se tera Pyaar mangta tha!

chheen liya tha jo tune kaatil adaon se apni,
Woh to apna woh Dil ka  karar mangta tha!

Kaid tha jo Gulshan Tere Dil ki Zidaan mein,
Woh to usi bageeche ki bahaar mangta tha!
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Bahut accha likha aapne bhi sharmaarunkumar ji :thumbleft:
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«Reply #7 on: April 01, 2007, 01:41:16 PM »
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bahoot khoob Dr. Saira and AKS JI!!


Thank u so much Pooja di Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: April 01, 2007, 04:33:01 PM »
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very nice Dr.Saira999

manjil pe to pahunch gaye, ladkhdate huwe...
par ye ishk ki baaji kaise jeetein aate jaate huwe...

zindgi bin unke adhhori si lagti hai...
jinko sunaya hai haal dil ka batein banate huwe...

wada to nahin kiya usne kabhi saath chalne ka...
par dekha hai use aksar wada nibhate huwe..

kar lein shayad wo ikraar mere pyar ka...
bas yahi sochta hoon aate jaate huwe...

manjil pe to pahunch gaye, ladkhdate huwe...
par ye ishk ki baaji kaise jeetein aate jaate huwe...
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«Reply #9 on: April 01, 2007, 05:09:32 PM »
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Bahut khoob Dr.ji and Pushp ji
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«Reply #10 on: April 01, 2007, 07:43:05 PM »
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very nice Dr.Saira999

manjil pe to pahunch gaye, ladkhdate huwe...
par ye ishk ki baaji kaise jeetein aate jaate huwe...

zindgi bin unke adhhori si lagti hai...
jinko sunaya hai haal dil ka batein banate huwe...

wada to nahin kiya usne kabhi saath chalne ka...
par dekha hai use aksar wada nibhate huwe..

kar lein shayad wo ikraar mere pyar ka...
bas yahi sochta hoon aate jaate huwe...

manjil pe to pahunch gaye, ladkhdate huwe...
par ye ishk ki baaji kaise jeetein aate jaate huwe...


Thank u so much pushp ji aur bahut accha likha aapne :thumbleft:

Jab manzil per pahunch gaye hain ladkhadaate huwe,
Toh Ishq ki baazi bhi jeet lenge haarte haarte huwe.....

Zindagi se kya shikwa woh toh hamesha dagmagaati hai,
Jab bhi khushi mili toh de jaati hai dukh sunaate huwe.....

Waada karke toh woh log bhi badal jaate hain,
Jo dete the kabhi saath haste hasaate huwe.....

Ikraar-e-Mohabbat ab woh karein ya na karein,
Hum toh apna dil chodd aaye raahon mein aate jaate huwe.....

Manzil tak toh apni ab hum pahunch hi gaye,
Kyunke mil gaya hai humsafar yunhi AATE JAATE HUWE..........
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«Reply #11 on: April 01, 2007, 07:43:54 PM »
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Bahut khoob Dr.ji and Pushp ji


Thank u so much badnaam shayar Usual Smile
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«Reply #12 on: April 01, 2007, 09:52:35 PM »
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bahoot khoob Pushp and Dr. saira ji
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«Reply #13 on: April 01, 2007, 10:06:35 PM »
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Thank u Pooja di Usual Smile
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«Reply #14 on: April 02, 2007, 02:25:04 PM »
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thanks badnaam shayar or pooja ji...
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