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by monamithiya on April 09, 2010, 06:20:28 AM
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dear all friends of yoindia,
agar aap log zyzda busy na ho,
thodha extra time ho agar aapke pass,
i need a help
meri best friend khyati ka birthday next month hai,
she will b 22 in nxt month,
i want to gift her best peom,
koi kavita jo dil ko chu jhay,
kya kisi k pass koi idea hai,

suggestion are heartly invited

kind regards to all
mona
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«Reply #1 on: April 09, 2010, 09:01:06 PM »
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Mona ji,

agar aap khud se likhenge to unhe jyada pasand aayega. aapke feelings unke liye kya hain aapse behtar kaun samajh sakta hai. aap khud se kuch words jodke kuch likhiye unhe. Unko bahut pasand aayega. bas itna keh dena aap unse ki apne unke liye specially compose kiya hai.

Bas isse behtar aur koi gift nahi ho paegi unke liye.

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«Reply #2 on: April 10, 2010, 05:27:32 AM »
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thankxxxxxxxxx
i will try my best
par mujhe itna khasss nahi ata
maine kabhi likhne ka try nahi kiya
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kind regards
have a nice time
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«Reply #3 on: April 10, 2010, 05:30:12 AM »
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Mona jee,

 Bahaut sahi kaha Kapil dost ne...Khud likhein...Aur haan, yahan bahaut helpers hai...Kisi se bhi madad le lein about writing...Ap koshish toh karein...Lavz apne ap jhudte jaenge...Give it a try...U have a month...
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«Reply #4 on: April 10, 2010, 06:28:10 AM »
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Apni friend ke birthday par aap khud hi koshish karein to achha hoga. Example ke liye do lines :

Sab nazar utha kar dekhein aisi ek parwaaz ho
Teri meri dosti par saari duniya ko naaz ho
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«Reply #5 on: April 10, 2010, 06:39:07 AM »
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Mona ji Aap Likhne Ki Khud Koshish Kijiye.. Likhna Itna Mushkil Nahi hai.. Jo Bhi Aap likhe usme Unki Pasand, Unki Khubsoorati.. For Example Jaise Unki Aankhen Acchi hain Ya Zulfen Yani Ki Kuch Bhi Uska Zikra Karen...!  icon_thumleft

Unki Koi Aisi Aadat Jo aapko Subse Zyada Pasand Hai Uska Zikra Karen.. Wo Aapki Zindgi Me Kitna Mayane Rakhti Hain.. Yeh sab Us Rachna Me Piro Ke Likhe... dekhiye Behad Khubsoorat Kavita Ban kar saamne aayegi..!! Usual Smile

isse Keemati Tohfa aur Kya ho sakta hai aapki Dost Ke Liye..!  love4



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«Reply #6 on: April 12, 2010, 07:58:46 AM »
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hellooooo all my friends
i hope every1 is fi99999 n having nice time
yaha peh kuch lines mili hai
dedicated to my best friend
aap sablok bahut achha likhte ho..
mujhe itna acha likhna nahi aata
suggestions are heartly invited



Khyati Or Mani K Sath Men Hanste Hanste
Kaise Beete Din Aur Hafte
Dheere Dheere Sal Bhi Guzra
Sath Men Ik Aur Sal Bhi Guzra

College Ke Naam Par Canteen Jana
Roz Naye Bahane Dekar Lecture Na Jana
Yaro Se Zjagadana Aur Mana Na
Unki Choti Si Taklif Ko Bi Dil Se Lagana

Haste Haste Wo Mastiya
Attendence Na Hone Par Teacher Ki Galiya
Exam K Time Suru Karna Padhai
Result Na Aane Par University Ki Karni Buray

Haste Haste Waqt Bitate
Saath Mei Sai Kripa Jate
Grill Sandwich Aur Coke Mangate
Aur Teeno Saath Mei Khate

Haste Haste Gapeh Lagate
Aur Saath Saath Ravindra Jate
Pav Bhaji Aur Wahi Coke Mangate Te
Aur Teeno Jam Ke Khaate

Haste Haste Sadak Par Chalte
Prakash Mei Chale Jate
Kuch Gol Gappe Lagate
Aur Teeno Ek Hi Plate Mei Khate (Bhale Hi Khyati Jyada Thikha Khaye)

Haste Haste Ghumne Jate
Phir Achanak Movie Ka Plan Banate
Ek Saath Baith Interval Mei Popcorn Lete (Mani Ne Bav Bhave)
Aur Boring Movie Ka Bi Khoob Maza Lete


Tina Or Mani K Khatir Naye Tofhe Kharidna
Usi Dost K Khatir Pankaj Se Ladhna


Sunday To Der Tak Sath Mei Hi Guzar Te
Monday Ko Jaldi Uthne Ki,Mushkil Se Koshish Karte The
College Jana To Jaise Ek Choti Mulakat Thi
Phir Se Class Bunk ,Aaj Movie Jaane Ki Baat Thi

Mauj Karte Huwe Din Jaldi Se Guzarta Tha
Ghar Aane Mein Jane Kyun Late Hi Hota Tha
Bekhauf Se Jeete The,Khud Me Khoye Rehte The
Kabhi Ladte Bhi The,Aur Der Tak Rote The

Lunch Se Pehle Hi Canteen Chale Jaate The
Waha Se Class Phir Shayad Hi Laut Pate The
Do Dosto Ka Woh Saath,Kitna Yaad Aata Hain
Wo Guzra Haseen Waqt,Aankhe Nam Kar Jata Hain

Masti Hum Sab Milkar Karte Hian
Aik Dhojha Ka Sarh Kha Jaate Hain

Kabhi Kabhi Mujhse Bohat Pakate Hain
Parh Phir Bi, Mujhe Gale Lagate Hain

Khyati Or Mani Ke Sath, Muskan Lub Per Aa Jaati Hai
Unn Sabki Choti Se Choti Baat Bhi, Dil Ko Chu Jaati Hai

Khayal Mera, Mujhse Bi Zyada Rakhte Hain
Meri Haar Ghalati, Nazar Andaz Karte Hain

Tina Or Mani Ka Jab Bhi Naam Ayya Hai
Khud Ko Bahoot Khushkismat Maine Paaya Hai
Mila Hai Be-Intihan Pyar Mujhko
Her Ek Ne Mera Ek Ek Naaj  Uthaya Hai
Her Zid Karwai Poori, Her Ek Ko Maine Rualaya Hai
Phir Bhi Dekhon Kabhi, Apne Dosto Ke Chehre Per, Ek Shikan Nahi Paaya Hai

Tha Wo Kaya Jamana, Raani Ban Ghooma Karati Thi
Jo Chahti Thi Manwati Thi Tina Or Mani Se, Her Ek Dil Per Raj Kiya Karati Thi
Bin Soche Kah Jaana, Bin Kahe Manwa Jaana
Ab Sochu To, Lagta Hai Ajeeb, Kaya Kaya Main Kiya Karati Thi


Hanste Hanste Kaise Beete
Yeh Saal Maloom Nahi
Aur Bichhad Ke Hans Paaenge
Ye Bhi To Maloom Nahi




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«Reply #7 on: April 12, 2010, 08:23:04 AM »
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Wah kya baat hai      Monamithiya ji......


Itna toh mast likhti ho
aur kaheti ho likhna nahi aata
apne dost ke janam dinpar
beete hue palhon ki yaadon se badhkar
aur kya koi tohfa de paata...........
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«Reply #8 on: April 12, 2010, 08:40:11 AM »
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Wah bahut khoob Mona ji,aapke dosto ko bahut achi lagegi ye dedication.great creation.excellent icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: April 12, 2010, 08:46:20 AM »
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Bahut bahut Khoob Monaji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Beete Hue Palon Ko Yaad kar Ek Bahut Pyaari Aur Dil ko Chuu Jaane Wali Kavita Likhi hai Aapne..Yakeenan Aapke Dosto Ko yeh Kavita Bahut Pasand Aayegi..
Bahut Ache.. Thumbs UP
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«Reply #10 on: April 12, 2010, 07:14:39 PM »
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Bahut achcha likha hai aapne Mona ji...!!!
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«Reply #11 on: April 13, 2010, 10:56:28 AM »
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Aankho Mei Masti
Labho Peh Hasi
Dil Ki Achi
Nam Hai Uska Khyati

Khyati Or Mani K Sath Men Hanste Hanste
Kaise Beete Din Aur Hafte
Dheere Dheere Sal Bhi Guzra
Sath Men Ik Aur Sal Bhi Guzra

College Ke Naam Par Canteen Jana
Roz Naye Bahane Dekar Lecture Na Jana
Yaro Se Zjagadana Aur Mana Na
Unki Choti Si Taklif Ko Bi Dil Se Lagana

Haste Haste Wo Mastiya
Attendence Na Hone Par Teacher Ki Galiya
Exam K Time Suru Karna Padhai
Result Na Aane Par University Ki Karni Buray

Haste Haste Waqt Bitate
Saath Mei Sai Kripa Jate
Grill Sandwich Aur Coke Mangate
Aur Teeno Saath Mei Khate

Haste Haste Gapeh Lagate
Aur Saath Saath Ravindra Jate
Pav Bhaji Aur Wahi Coke Mangate Te
Aur Teeno Jam Ke Khaate

Haste Haste Sadak Par Chalte
Prakash Mei Chale Jate
Kuch Gol Gappe Lagate
Aur Teeno Ek Hi Plate Mei Khate (Bhale Hi Khyati Jyada Thikha Khaye)

Haste Haste Ghumne Jate
Phir Achanak Movie Ka Plan Banate
Ek Saath Baith Interval Mei Popcorn Lete (Mani Ne Bav Bhave)
Aur Boring Movie Ka Bi Khoob Maza Lete


Tina Or Mani K Khatir Naye Tofhe Kharidna
Usi Dost K Khatir Pankaj Se Ladhna


Sunday To Der Tak Sath Mei Hi Guzar Te
Monday Ko Jaldi Uthne Ki,Mushkil Se Koshish Karte The
College Jana To Jaise Ek Choti Mulakat Thi
Phir Se Class Bunk ,Aaj Movie Jaane Ki Baat Thi

Mauj Karte Huwe Din Jaldi Se Guzarta Tha
Ghar Aane Mein Jane Kyun Late Hi Hota Tha
Bekhauf Se Jeete The,Khud Me Khoye Rehte The
Kabhi Ladte Bhi The,Aur Der Tak Rote The

Lunch Se Pehle Hi Canteen Chale Jaate The
Waha Se Class Phir Shayad Hi Laut Pate The
Do Dosto Ka Woh Saath,Kitna Yaad Aata Hain
Wo Guzra Haseen Waqt,Aankhe Nam Kar Jata Hain

Masti Hum Sab Milkar Karte Hian
Aik Dhojha Ka Sarh Kha Jaate Hain

Kabhi Kabhi Mujhse Bohat Pakate Hain
Parh Phir Bi, Mujhe Gale Lagate Hain

Khyati Or Mani Ke Sath, Muskan Lub Per Aa Jaati Hai
Unn Sabki Choti Se Choti Baat Bhi, Dil Ko Chu Jaati Hai

Khayal Mera, Mujhse Bi Zyada Rakhte Hain
Meri Haar Ghalati, Nazar Andaz Karte Hain

Tina Or Mani Ka Jab Bhi Naam Ayya Hai
Khud Ko Bahoot Khushkismat Maine Paaya Hai
Mila Hai Be-Intihan Pyar Mujhko
Her Ek Ne Mera Ek Ek Naaj  Uthaya Hai
Her Zid Karwai Poori, Her Ek Ko Maine Rualaya Hai
Phir Bhi Dekhon Kabhi, Apne Dosto Ke Chehre Per, Ek Shikan Nahi Paaya Hai

Tha Wo Kaya Jamana, Raani Ban Ghooma Karati Thi
Jo Chahti Thi Manwati Thi Tina Or Mani Se, Her Ek Dil Per Raj Kiya Karati Thi
Bin Soche Kah Jaana, Bin Kahe Manwa Jaana
Ab Sochu To, Lagta Hai Ajeeb, Kaya Kaya Main Kiya Karati Thi


Hanste Hanste Kaise Beete
Yeh Saal Maloom Nahi
Aur Bichhad Ke Hans Paaenge
Ye Bhi To Maloom Nahi










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«Reply #12 on: April 13, 2010, 11:30:30 AM »
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Wah wah Mona ji aapne to bahut achhi shuruaat ki hai. Bahot achha likha. Yun hi likhti rahiye, improvement apne aap aata chala jayega. Albatta bade shayaron/kaviyon ke creations ko padhna bhi zaroori hoga.
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«Reply #13 on: April 13, 2010, 12:47:54 PM »
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Ankho Mei Masti
Labho Peh Hasi
Dil Ki Achi
Nam Hai Uska Khyati

Naam Hai Uska Khyati
Hai Thodi Si Ziddhi
Likhti Hai Story
Aur Kehti Hai Sorry

Naam Hai Uska Khyati
Dekhne Mei Jaise Micky
Karti Hai Design
Kehti Hai I M Fine

Khyati Or Mani K Sath Men Hanste Hanste
Kaise Beete Din Aur Hafte
Dheere Dheere Sal Bhi Guzra
Sath Men Ik Aur Sal Bhi Guzra

College Ke Naam Par Canteen Jana
Roz Naye Bahane Dekar Lecture Na Jana
Yaro Se Zjagadana Aur Mana Na
Unki Choti Si Taklif Ko Bi Dil Se Lagana

Haste Haste Wo Mastiya
Attendence Na Hone Par Teacher Ki Galiya
Exam K Time Suru Karna Padhai
Result Na Aane Par University Ki Karni Buray

Haste Haste Waqt Bitate
Saath Mei Sai Kripa Jate
Grill Sandwich Aur Coke Mangate
Aur Teeno Saath Mei Khate

Haste Haste Gapeh Lagate
Aur Saath Saath Ravindra Jate
Pav Bhaji Aur Wahi Coke Mangate Te
Aur Teeno Jam Ke Khaate

Haste Haste Sadak Par Chalte
Prakash Mei Chale Jate
Kuch Gol Gappe Lagate
Aur Teeno Ek Hi Plate Mei Khate (Bhale Hi Khyati Jyada Thikha Khaye)

Haste Haste Ghumne Jate
Phir Achanak Movie Ka Plan Banate
Ek Saath Baith Interval Mei Popcorn Lete (Mani Ne Bav Bhave)
Aur Boring Movie Ka Bi Khoob Maza Lete


Tina Or Mani K Khatir Naye Tofhe Kharidna
Usi Dost K Khatir Pankaj Se Ladhna


Sunday To Der Tak Sath Mei Hi Guzar Te
Monday Ko Jaldi Uthne Ki,Mushkil Se Koshish Karte The
College Jana To Jaise Ek Choti Mulakat Thi
Phir Se Class Bunk ,Aaj Movie Jaane Ki Baat Thi

Mauj Karte Huwe Din Jaldi Se Guzarta Tha
Ghar Aane Mein Jane Kyun Late Hi Hota Tha
Bekhauf Se Jeete The,Khud Me Khoye Rehte The
Kabhi Ladte Bhi The,Aur Der Tak Rote The

Lunch Se Pehle Hi Canteen Chale Jaate The
Waha Se Class Phir Shayad Hi Laut Pate The
Do Dosto Ka Woh Saath,Kitna Yaad Aata Hain
Wo Guzra Haseen Waqt,Aankhe Nam Kar Jata Hain

Masti Hum Sab Milkar Karte Hian
Aik Dhojha Ka Sarh Kha Jaate Hain

Kabhi Kabhi Mujhse Bohat Pakate Hain
Parh Phir Bi, Mujhe Gale Lagate Hain

Khyati Or Mani Ke Sath, Muskan Lub Per Aa Jaati Hai
Unn Sabki Choti Se Choti Baat Bhi, Dil Ko Chu Jaati Hai

Khayal Mera, Mujhse Bi Zyada Rakhte Hain
Meri Haar Ghalati, Nazar Andaz Karte Hain

Tina Or Mani Ka Jab Bhi Naam Ayya Hai
Khud Ko Bahoot Khushkismat Maine Paaya Hai
Mila Hai Be-Intihan Pyar Mujhko
Her Ek Ne Mera Ek Ek Naaj  Uthaya Hai
Her Zid Karwai Poori, Her Ek Ko Maine Rualaya Hai
Phir Bhi Dekhon Kabhi, Apne Dosto Ke Chehre Per, Ek Shikan Nahi Paaya Hai

Tha Wo Kaya Jamana, Raani Ban Ghooma Karati Thi
Jo Chahti Thi Manwati Thi Tina Or Mani Se, Her Ek Dil Per Raj Kiya Karati Thi
Bin Soche Kah Jaana, Bin Kahe Manwa Jaana
Ab Sochu To, Lagta Hai Ajeeb, Kaya Kaya Main Kiya Karati Thi


Hanste Hanste Kaise Beete
Yeh Saal Maloom Nahi
Aur Bichhad Ke Hans Paaenge
Ye Bhi To Maloom Nahi
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«Reply #14 on: April 13, 2010, 01:02:55 PM »
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