""aansuon ka paimaana ho gaya"" 'nirala'

by nirala on January 12, 2011, 11:12:35 AM
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""
nazron me unke ab mai bhi

deewana aam sa ho gaya !

log bhi ab kahne lage dekho, ek aur

mohabbat me naakaam ho gaya !

dhadakta tha jo dil kabhi, seene me

bilakhte zazbaaton ka ab ik thikaana ho gaya !

jhalak par jinke aati thi chamak, aankho me

aansuon se chalakta ab ek paimaana ho gaya !

naadaan tha mai ya nasamajh the woh

bewafai hi jinka mohabbat me,

ab ik Nazraana ho gaya !
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«Reply #1 on: January 12, 2011, 11:27:02 AM »
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kya kahun k kab kahan kaise aur kya ho gaya
main na jaan paai kab ye dil deewana ho gaya
na nazrein mili na hi samna hua kabhi unse
janmo janam ka fir bhi unse naata jud gaya....

mastam post nirala mastana ji....
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«Reply #2 on: January 12, 2011, 11:40:33 AM »
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nirala ji maja aa gaya  yaar.........

dil garden garden ho gaya ji.........mast mast mastam wali post he ye to
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«Reply #3 on: January 12, 2011, 11:41:01 AM »
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aji shukriya thanku aadaab.
aapne mere naam me Mastaana laga dia to mai aur bhi nikhar utha Usual Smile
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aapki ye kuch lines ka reply to
kamaal hai aur poora ka poora dhamaal hai.
itna sundar kaise likhte ho aap?
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ji abki baar 20 kilo Thanxxxxxx
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«Reply #4 on: January 12, 2011, 11:44:27 AM »
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matrix ji aapko bhi 12 kilo ka thanku...Usual Smile
bas shola ko aise hi bhadkaate rahiye.
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«Reply #5 on: January 13, 2011, 06:50:53 AM »
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bahut khoob Nirala ji.
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«Reply #6 on: January 13, 2011, 06:54:37 AM »
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wah niralaji kya baat hai... bahut khub....

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«Reply #7 on: January 13, 2011, 06:59:14 AM »
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suresh ji bahut saara dhanyabaad.
apne saraha.
Manju ji aapko bhi behisaab thanku---
meri is bematlabi peshkash ko sarahne ke liye
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«Reply #8 on: January 13, 2011, 12:51:30 PM »
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Nice Nirala JI
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«Reply #9 on: January 13, 2011, 01:20:09 PM »
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Rishi ji dhanyabaad.
kosis karenge hazam karne ki aapki daad.
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