Aasan Raah

by rickyjohn on October 29, 2009, 08:48:43 PM
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Dil ko apne jala kar dekhte hain               
dhueen me wajood ko apne uda kar dekhte hain               
aankhon se humne bahaye hain bahot               
chalo aaj apni ragon se lahoo baha kar dekhte hain               
mar jaane se mushkil ab jeena lagta hai               
ek baar yeh aasan rah bhi apna kar dekhte hain               
               
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«Reply #1 on: October 29, 2009, 08:53:18 PM »
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Waah kya baat hai Ricky ji.. Bahoot Khoob!
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«Reply #2 on: October 29, 2009, 11:44:34 PM »
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kya khoob likha hai aapne.... Applause Applause

Nakaamyabi ki boo aati hai nagme mai tere
Kyo dekhata hai es tarah jakhmon ko tere

Kehna aasan hai,par nahi marna haath tere
Hai ye raah bujdilon ki,hogi aasan raah tere




Dil ko apne jala kar dekhte hain               
dhueen me wajood ko apne uda kar dekhte hain               
aankhon se humne bahaye hain bahot               
chalo aaj apni ragon se lahoo baha kar dekhte hain               
mar jaane se mushkil ab jeena lagta hai               
ek baar yeh aasan rah bhi apna kar dekhte hain               
               

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«Reply #3 on: October 30, 2009, 10:04:25 AM »
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Wah bahut khoob Ricky ji n Koyal ji .very touching n lovely creation.excellent icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: October 30, 2009, 10:45:11 AM »
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Thanks a lot Madhu-di....always encourageing one and all....
Wah bahut khoob Ricky ji n Koyal ji .very touching n lovely creation.excellent icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: October 31, 2009, 12:41:21 PM »
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Ricky ji bahut hi accha likha hai aapne ApplauseApplauseApplause
Nice creation Koyal Ji ApplauseApplauseApplause
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«Reply #6 on: November 03, 2009, 04:16:52 PM »
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Thank you Rishi-bhai.....

Ricky ji bahut hi accha likha hai aapne ApplauseApplauseApplause
Nice creation Koyal Ji ApplauseApplauseApplause
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