~ * Barish Me * ~_DeV

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Aaj phir mujhko uski yaad dila di barish ne,
Dil me jo bhool ki aag thi bujha di barish ne,

Me tanha thi apne ghar me zamaney se pare,
Magar mere ghar ki deewar gira di barish ne,

Uske zikar se ho gayi meri ankhein num,
Magar doston me ye sari baat chupa di barish ne,

Suna he, wo bhi roya he aaj bohat,
Lagta he unko meri yaad dila di barish ne,

Wo bewafa hua to phir kya hua,
Aaj mere sath ro kar wafa nibha di barish ne....
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«Reply #1 on: August 16, 2010, 06:44:41 PM »
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wah wah su vaat chhe Devanig.... ek dam mast... superbe...


Mohabbat ko mahobbat ki tarah paa na sake,
Mohabbat ko ibaadat keh Khudda tujhe maan liya..

Tere Dil se hamre dil to kabhi mila na sake hum,
Bas tere kadmo mein iss dil ko kurbaan kar diya..
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«Reply #2 on: August 16, 2010, 06:53:04 PM »
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sukriya....

mast reply karyo chhe... icon_thumleft


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wah wah su vaat chhe Devanig.... ek dam mast... superbe...


Mohabbat ko mahobbat ki tarah paa na sake,
Mohabbat ko ibaadat keh Khudda tujhe maan liya..

Tere Dil se hamre dil to kabhi mila na sake hum,
Bas tere kadmo mein iss dil ko kurbaan kar diya..

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«Reply #3 on: August 16, 2010, 06:57:03 PM »
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aree sukriya to mare tare karvo pade ke mane aava reply karva mate tari posting mane majboor kare chhe...
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«Reply #4 on: August 16, 2010, 07:02:50 PM »
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haji aetlu saru nathi lakhti hu, vadhare padti tarif na karso.....

aree sukriya to mare tare karvo pade ke mane aava reply karva mate tari posting mane majboor kare chhe...
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«Reply #5 on: August 16, 2010, 07:06:15 PM »
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tarif kyarey vadhare ke ochhi nathi hoti,
tarif to bas tarif j hoy chhe..

rahi vaat lakhavani to koi kya sikhi ne aave chhe,
je kai male chhe ke sikhay chhe te bas aapni aas-paas thi j pade chhe...
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«Reply #6 on: August 17, 2010, 01:06:04 AM »
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Kia kamaal ka likha hai Waah jee ......
Ek dum super ......... Bahut achcha laga padhker....

achche khayaal aur achchi bayani dil se daad..

Aise hi likhate rahiye.....
Khush rahiye....
Khuda hafez.....


Dil ke aangan ko nam kar diya barish ne
Humare ashkoN ko kam kar diya barish ne
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«Reply #7 on: August 17, 2010, 01:09:36 AM »
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bht pyari poem devangi ji.....bht hi pyari.....

and rancho ji aap to mstam ho gaye hain aajakl.....
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«Reply #8 on: August 17, 2010, 12:47:00 PM »
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Ye to aag lagaa rakhi hai aapne is baarish me... kya taarif karun aapki... nikhaar sa aa gaya hai kuch aapki is kavita me... bahut bahut sundar peshkash hai aapki... bahut hi pyaara likha hai aapne...

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aaj bhi ye bheegi barsaatein mujhe bahut tadpaati hain,
baarish ki har ek boond mujhe tumhaari yaad dilaati hain,

bheegta hoon ye soch ke ki mere aansoo na dekh lo tum,
jaane kaise tumko meri aankhen geeli dikh jaati hain,

tumhaare dil ka aag bujhaata hai ye baarish ka paani,
aur hamaare dil ko jala jaata hai ye baarish ka paani,

bijli ki kadak ke saath tum mere baahon me samaa jaati thi,
aaj bhi unki har chamak mujhe tumhaare kareeb le jaati hai,

tumse juda hoke aaj ye baarish ki boondein begaani lagti hain,
aaj baarish ki har boond meri tanhaayi ka ehsaas dilaati hain,

aaj bhi ye bheegi barsaatein mujhe bahut tadpaati hain,
baarish ki har ek boond mujhe tumhaari yaad dilaati hain...
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«Reply #9 on: August 17, 2010, 02:51:42 PM »
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Aag to aapne laga rakhi he klaskar ji....
itne behtrin reply kar ke....Clapping Smiley   Applause  Applause



Har boond me pyar hota he,
kho doo to yaade he,
pilu to zindgi he........


Ye to aag lagaa rakhi hai aapne is baarish me... kya taarif karun aapki... nikhaar sa aa gaya hai kuch aapki is kavita me... bahut bahut sundar peshkash hai aapki... bahut hi pyaara likha hai aapne...

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aaj bhi ye bheegi barsaatein mujhe bahut tadpaati hain,
baarish ki har ek boond mujhe tumhaari yaad dilaati hain,

bheegta hoon ye soch ke ki mere aansoo na dekh lo tum,
jaane kaise tumko meri aankhen geeli dikh jaati hain,

tumhaare dil ka aag bujhaata hai ye baarish ka paani,
aur hamaare dil ko jala jaata hai ye baarish ka paani,

bijli ki kadak ke saath tum mere baahon me samaa jaati thi,
aaj bhi unki har chamak mujhe tumhaare kareeb le jaati hai,

tumse juda hoke aaj ye baarish ki boondein begaani lagti hain,
aaj baarish ki har boond meri tanhaayi ka ehsaas dilaati hain,

aaj bhi ye bheegi barsaatein mujhe bahut tadpaati hain,
baarish ki har ek boond mujhe tumhaari yaad dilaati hain...
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«Reply #10 on: August 17, 2010, 02:54:57 PM »
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heheheheheeh.... shukriya Devangi ji....!!!

Aag to aapne laga rakhi he klaskar ji....
itne behtrin reply kar ke....Clapping Smiley   Applause  Applause



Har boond me pyar hota he,
kho doo to yaade he,
pilu to zindgi he........


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«Reply #11 on: August 17, 2010, 02:56:08 PM »
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bahot bahot sukriya parwaaz ji n kasak.......
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