Can anybody answer this poem in the form of another poem?

by diya_barsat on May 07, 2007, 12:46:43 AM
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This is poem someone sent me and I want to answer him with a poem can anyone help me out please?

Koi kuch bhi na kahey to pata kya hai
Is bechain khamoshi ki wajah kya hai
Unhain ja key koi kahy hum lay lenge zehar bhi
Woh sirf yeh to bata dein meri khata kya hai
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«Reply #1 on: May 08, 2007, 06:12:33 AM »
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Hi diya-barsat ji...
iska ans to depend karta hai..aap ka unke sath jo rista hai uspe... aur aap kis type ka reply dena chahte ho... kai ans ho sakte hain iske to... but abhi ye dekho aap...aisa nahi k ye aap ko acha lage...but kosish ki hoon..kooch...thanx..

ye katha hamse huyi tumhara koi dosh nahi
kya kare dil ki baat juba pe jo aati nahi..
khud jal sakte ham tumhare khushi ke liye
tumhe yun tarapte hum dekh sakte nahi...

sorry agar kisi ko pasand nahi aayi to pls be jijhak bata dena...
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«Reply #2 on: May 08, 2007, 09:29:03 PM »
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Thanks for the poem its lovely, and your right it ans to mere aur mere friend ke rishte pe depend karta hai. We are just friends and we send poems to each other in profile comment never talked online with eachother on chat or anything and never just communicated through poems thats all, so thats the kind of ans I want to give him before he sends me any other poem. But thanks for that one its great.

tc
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«Reply #3 on: May 09, 2007, 10:58:27 AM »
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Ohh its ok..yaar bas main dekhi and reply di ye nahi pata tha kaisa lagega... chalo kaam toh aaya na.. bye cu tc
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«Reply #4 on: May 12, 2007, 12:30:25 PM »
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This is poem someone sent me and I want to answer him with a poem can anyone help me out please?

Koi kuch bhi na kahey to pata kya hai
Is bechain khamoshi ki wajah kya hai
Unhain ja key koi kahy hum lay lenge zehar bhi
Woh sirf yeh to bata dein meri khata kya hai


jaroorat nahi hai kahne kee kisee ko
ishak to bejoobaan hota hai yaro
aawaaj nikaltee hai dil se kisi ke ek
bas us ahat ko sunne kee jaroorat hai yaro
kya karega jahar ishak me kisee kaa
pyar amar tha, amar hee rahega yaro
nahi khata kisi kee ek pal me hotjata hai ye
pyar par ho gaye kurbaan  kai farishte bhee yaro

netra.......
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«Reply #5 on: May 12, 2007, 12:42:04 PM »
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Hi diya-barsat ji...
iska ans to depend karta hai..aap ka unke sath jo rista hai uspe... aur aap kis type ka reply dena chahte ho... kai ans ho sakte hain iske to... but abhi ye dekho aap...aisa nahi k ye aap ko acha lage...but kosish ki hoon..kooch...thanx..

ye katha hamse huyi tumhara koi dosh nahi
kya kare dil ki baat juba pe jo aati nahi..
khud jal sakte ham tumhare khushi ke liye
tumhe yun tarapte hum dekh sakte nahi...

sorry agar kisi ko pasand nahi aayi to pls be jijhak bata dena...


wah wah kya bat hai punam ji

khata nhi kiseekee wo manjar hee aisa tha
oro ko bachane kee kee kosishi me doobte chale gaye

nahi hotee hai juba dil kii, dil bejooan hota hai
khataa kisee kee nahi, ye nasha aisaa hee hota hai

tadapta hai dil kiskeeka baichan koi or hota hai
aag lagtee hai kahee dhooa kahi or dikhta hai

netra..
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«Reply #6 on: May 12, 2007, 10:50:22 PM »
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Your poems are lovely Netra.
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punam
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«Reply #7 on: May 13, 2007, 06:31:42 AM »
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Hi diya-barsat ji...
iska ans to depend karta hai..aap ka unke sath jo rista hai uspe... aur aap kis type ka reply dena chahte ho... kai ans ho sakte hain iske to... but abhi ye dekho aap...aisa nahi k ye aap ko acha lage...but kosish ki hoon..kooch...thanx..

ye katha hamse huyi tumhara koi dosh nahi
kya kare dil ki baat juba pe jo aati nahi..
khud jal sakte ham tumhare khushi ke liye
tumhe yun tarapte hum dekh sakte nahi...

sorry agar kisi ko pasand nahi aayi to pls be jijhak bata dena...


wah wah kya bat hai punam ji

khata nhi kiseekee wo manjar hee aisa tha
oro ko bachane kee kee kosishi me doobte chale gaye

nahi hotee hai juba dil kii, dil bejooan hota hai
khataa kisee kee nahi, ye nasha aisaa hee hota hai

tadapta hai dil kiskeeka baichan koi or hota hai
aag lagtee hai kahee dhooa kahi or dikhta hai

netra..


Hi netra ji aap ki shayari kuch kaam nahi bahat khoob likha aapne...
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punam
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«Reply #8 on: May 13, 2007, 06:33:01 AM »
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Badal jaati hai naseeb
dil se unki chahat nahi jaati
badal jaati hai manjil
dil se unki ehsash nahi jaati
chale jate hai wo bhulake sab kuch
fir bhi dil unke liye roti unhe bhul nahi paati...
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«Reply #9 on: May 14, 2007, 05:36:55 AM »
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Quote from: "diya_barsat"
This is poem someone sent me and I want to answer him with a poem can anyone help me out please?

Koi kuch bhi na kahey to pata kya hai
Is bechain khamoshi ki wajah kya hai
Unhain ja key koi kahy hum lay lenge zehar bhi
Woh sirf yeh to bata dein meri khata kya hai


tootein hain lafz,ashQon ki abb baraat chali
tu kya jaane tujhse mujhe kya saughat mili
teri vada baddkhilafi ne mujhe mein khamoshi bhari
keh toh diya hai,lekin sun le "Zehar" peena asaan nahi
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«Reply #10 on: May 14, 2007, 05:44:20 AM »
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Very nice ji...
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yoshiki
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«Reply #11 on: May 25, 2007, 02:22:43 PM »
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Quote from: "diya_barsat"
This is poem someone sent me and I want to answer him with a poem can anyone help me out please?

Koi kuch bhi na kahey to pata kya hai
Is bechain khamoshi ki wajah kya hai
Unhain ja key koi kahy hum lay lenge zehar bhi
Woh sirf yeh to bata dein meri khata kya hai


@ wo khata karke puchte hai meri khata kya hai,
khud door ja kar kr puchte hai doorion ki wajah kya hai?
hum tumhe apne labon se aur kya khe? jab tum khamoshion ki zubaan na sun ske
tum zehar pikar asaani se muh modna chahte ho
tum yaar ke swaalo main jeekar dekho ismain mar mitne wali sazaa kya hai
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«Reply #12 on: May 25, 2007, 02:25:04 PM »
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Quote from: "diya_barsat"
This is poem someone sent me and I want to answer him with a poem can anyone help me out please?

Koi kuch bhi na kahey to pata kya hai
Is bechain khamoshi ki wajah kya hai
Unhain ja key koi kahy hum lay lenge zehar bhi
Woh sirf yeh to bata dein meri khata kya hai


@ wo khata karke puchte hai meri khata kya hai,
khud door ja kar kr puchte hai doorion ki wajah kya hai?
hum tumhe apne labon se aur kya khe? jab tum khamoshion ki zubaan na sun ske
tum zehar pikar asaani se muh modna chahte ho
tum yaar ke swaalo main jeekar dekho ismain mar mitne wali sazaa kya hai



well im  new to this forum so plz humain maaf kijiega agr humare shabdo ne apko hurt kiya ho
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«Reply #13 on: May 26, 2007, 08:18:55 AM »
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Badal jaati hai naseeb
dil se unki chahat nahi jaati
badal jaati hai manjil
dil se unki ehsash nahi jaati
chale jate hai wo bhulake sab kuch
fir bhi dil unke liye roti unhe bhul nahi paati...


dil me uthtee hai tees sahi nahi jatee
armano kee jaltee chita dekhi nahi jatee
khoob soorat hotho kee muskna sahi nahi jatee
bhoolna chata hoo ek dilnenada thujko
teri yad hai dil me mere bhulayee nahi jatee

netra....
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«Reply #14 on: May 26, 2007, 08:26:55 AM »
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Quote from: "TeraKuttaGharKaNaGhaatKa"
Quote from: "diya_barsat"
This is poem someone sent me and I want to answer him with a poem can anyone help me out please?

Koi kuch bhi na kahey to pata kya hai
Is bechain khamoshi ki wajah kya hai
Unhain ja key koi kahy hum lay lenge zehar bhi
Woh sirf yeh to bata dein meri khata kya hai


tootein hain lafz,ashQon ki abb baraat chali
tu kya jaane tujhse mujhe kya saughat mili
teri vada baddkhilafi ne mujhe mein khamoshi bhari
keh toh diya hai,lekin sun le "Zehar" peena asaan nahi


nahi mushkil hai ishak me peena jahar bhee aye musafir
abhi lagta hai ishak kee rah par kadam pade nahi hai aapke
jahar hee peete hai aashik, kurbani jab mangta hai ishak aye musafir

netra...
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