Can anybody answer this poem in the form of another poem?

by diya_barsat on September 01, 2007, 04:39:56 PM
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Na jane Q hume ansu bahana nahi ata,
na jane Q hale dil batana nahi ata,
Q sathi bichad jate hai hamesha humse,
shayad hume hi pyar nibhana nahi ata


PLEASE HELP ME WITH THIS
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«Reply #1 on: September 01, 2007, 06:46:54 PM »
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Jab bhi koshish ki - hum aur haar gaye
Pana jisko chaha - us se aur dur hue
Khata meri ya uss mohabbat ki
Har baar hum ghumo se do chaar hue
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«Reply #2 on: September 03, 2007, 06:52:13 AM »
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thanks sahiba ji its lovely
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«Reply #3 on: September 03, 2007, 10:36:49 AM »
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Unko suna kay dekhieay Afsaana-e-Khayal
Hum khush thay istarah kay sabhi kuch suna diya

Hasrat rehi ha mujhko sunaien wo Haal-e-Dil
Phir main bhi yeh kahon k haan mera bhi yehi haal hai
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«Reply #4 on: September 03, 2007, 01:29:58 PM »
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shahar-e-mohabbat, hijr ka mausam, ahd-e-wafa aur main
tu to is basti se khush khush chalagaya, aur main ?

to jo na ho tu jaise sab ko chup lag jaati hai
aapas main kia baat karte raat, diya aur main!!
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«Reply #5 on: September 03, 2007, 04:14:09 PM »
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Ankhoon se ashq bahaye nahin jate
Dil ke zakhm bhi dhikaye nahin jate
Tabhi chod jate hai sathi mujhe sare
Mujh se juthe afsane sunaye nahin jate !!

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«Reply #6 on: September 03, 2007, 05:41:44 PM »
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Hal-e-Dil unka mai bayan karti hu
Khuda hausla de unko yahi dua karti hu

Pehle sitamgar bankar kiya hamare dil ko zakham
Ab yaad ker apne sitam aankhon se ashq bahate honge..

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«Reply #7 on: September 04, 2007, 12:06:54 AM »
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Na jane Q hume ansu bahana nahi ata,
na jane Q hale dil batana nahi ata,
Q sathi bichad jate hai hamesha humse,
shayad hume hi pyar nibhana nahi ata


PLEASE HELP ME WITH THIS


Wah kya Baat hai Diya ji.. aapki Poem ka Jawab dene Ki Koshish ki Hai..!!

Aur bahut Khoob ROJA JI, HUMTUM JI, FAWAD JI, NOMI JI & SAHIBA JI...!!



Moabbat Karna to Door, Nibhaana Bhi Jaante Hain,
Haal-e-Dil Aankhon Se, Suna-naa Bhi Jaante Hain........

Saathi Koi Bichadga Kabhi, Kaise Humse E-Doston,
Hum Aankhon se Mohabbat Jataana Bhi Jaante Hain.......!!
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«Reply #8 on: September 04, 2007, 12:57:28 AM »
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lafz bayaan nahi hotey hain, aakhir kyon..
ashq bhi behne se inkaar karte hain, aakhir kyon
wafaa ka sila toh yeh na hua karta tha
phir aaj unki ungliyan uth rahi hain , aakhir kyon?
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«Reply #9 on: September 05, 2007, 03:10:23 AM »
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thanks guys all of them are superb
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«Reply #10 on: September 05, 2007, 03:16:40 AM »
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Woh jo baat dil ki samajh sake
use ansu bahana yaad ho
Woh jo haal -e- dil ki bata sake
use dil lagana yaad ho
Woh jo ruthe sathi ko mana sake
use pyar nibhana yaad ho
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«Reply #11 on: September 05, 2007, 11:03:06 PM »
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bohot ache diya!
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«Reply #12 on: September 08, 2007, 02:21:53 PM »
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Woh jo baat dil ki samajh sake
use ansu bahana yaad ho
Woh jo haal -e- dil ki bata sake
use dil lagana yaad ho
Woh jo ruthe sathi ko mana sake
use pyar nibhana yaad ho



Its good


Jiss chirag ko apney dum sey jalayaa hai

ussi chirag ney mera aashiyaan  jalayaa hai

bachata tha jissko hawa key aik jhonkey sey bhi

ussi ney aaj mujhey, tufaan mein phansaaya hai
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«Reply #13 on: December 02, 2008, 03:50:52 PM »
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Ye Dil Walon ki Duniya hai ay doast,
Kisi se dil toa koi dil se nahi milata....
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«Reply #14 on: December 02, 2008, 03:52:31 PM »
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Ye Dil walon ki duniya hai ay doast,
kisi se dil toa koi dil se nahi milata
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