Dekhte hai hum....

by thycreator on June 10, 2007, 06:58:42 AM
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Pooja
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«Reply #30 on: June 20, 2007, 02:37:01 PM »
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Dil ne kab kah akiski maani hai
Iski apni hi alag ek kahani hai
Ho jaate hai begaane ka khud hi yah
Thokar kahne ke baad bhi karta yah man-maani hai!!
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«Reply #31 on: June 21, 2007, 04:23:45 PM »
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very nice all of u..Rajbir ji aap bhi...kya baat hai
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thycreator
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«Reply #32 on: June 23, 2007, 10:10:29 AM »
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Quote from: "Pooja"
Dil ne kab kah akiski maani hai
Iski apni hi alag ek kahani hai
Ho jaate hai begaane ka khud hi yah
Thokar kahne ke baad bhi karta yah man-maani hai!!


sahi hai........

Dil pe kaaboo hota toh ye khata hi kyu karte,
Ek bewafa hi ke dar pe kyu hum yu ja marte..
Magar ye dil usspe hi aaya hai jo isko nahi samjha,
Gar samjha pate isko toh uski gali se bhi darte...
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HumTum is back
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«Reply #33 on: June 26, 2007, 04:00:18 PM »
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Bade bebaak ho wafa ke manjar dekhte hain hum,
Kitni hasrat se uss bewafa ka ghar dekhte hain hum.

Bade vishwas se jin haathon ko ye masoom dil saunpa,
Unhi haathon mein lipta khoon-e-khajar dekhte hain hum.

Nahi iska hai gum ki ruswai ka haasil humne paaya hai,
Muhabbat mein kaise jhuk gaya mera sar dekhte hain hum.

Gar farmaan maut ka hota toh seh bhi hum lete,
Saza hai jindagi ki usko jeekar dekhte hain hum.

Sabhi armaan dil ke aankhon ke raste dhal gaye dekho,
Mere mehboob mein chehra-e-sitamgar dekhte hain hum.

Gar mila khuda toh apni khata pooch bhi lenge,
Kyu hui uski dillagi mujhpar dekhte hain hum.


Nice one !!

Phir ussi Raah Guzar par shayaad
Hum kabhi mil sake Magar Shayaad !!
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Jeene ke baad aur bhi the iraade hummare
Tumne ishq ka hee rona lagaaye rakhaa

Charo aur jagmaga rahi thi duniya saari
Tumne diye ke neeche hee bithaye rakha

Dost samajh sunata tha sabko haal e dil
Tumne dooniya-daari samajh nibhaye rakha

Duniya se keh diya nahin jaante humein
Humne kafan mein bhi haath chhupaye rakha

Mein tou so gaya tumhe kaise aayegi neend
Saari raatein tumne "HumTum" rulaaye rakha !!
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Pooja
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«Reply #34 on: June 26, 2007, 06:02:56 PM »
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bahoot khoob Humtum ji!!

bahoot sahi kaha Amit!!

Kismat ki maar thi, bacha sakta tha kon
Likha jab yah Rub ne, Mujhe bacha sakta tha kon!!
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thycreator
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«Reply #35 on: June 29, 2007, 05:53:31 PM »
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Nice one !!

Phir ussi Raah Guzar par shayaad
Hum kabhi mil sake Magar Shayaad !!
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Jeene ke baad aur bhi the iraade hummare
Tumne ishq ka hee rona lagaaye rakhaa

Charo aur jagmaga rahi thi duniya saari
Tumne diye ke neeche hee bithaye rakha

Dost samajh sunata tha sabko haal e dil
Tumne dooniya-daari samajh nibhaye rakha

Duniya se keh diya nahin jaante humein
Humne kafan mein bhi haath chhupaye rakha

Mein tou so gaya tumhe kaise aayegi neend
Saari raatein tumne "HumTum" rulaaye rakha !!


Welcome back gurudev.....dhamakedar entry as always....nice one from you too pooja....

Kuch bat hi aisi thi ki sab kuch seh gaye hum,
Uss bewafa ke dar par hi baithe reh gaye hum,
Bada gumaan tha apni pak muhabbat ka hame,
Uska aaina dikhlane ki baat uss se keh gaye hum..
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«Reply #36 on: July 02, 2007, 09:43:04 AM »
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Welcome back gurudev.....dhamakedar entry as always....nice one from you too pooja....

Kuch bat hi aisi thi ki sab kuch seh gaye hum,
Uss bewafa ke dar par hi baithe reh gaye hum,
Bada gumaan tha apni pak muhabbat ka hame,
Uska aaina dikhlane ki baat uss se keh gaye hum..


Hahahaha .. Gurudev  Shocked  :razz:
ik sher aap ke liye Creator !!

Creator Teri zameen pe likhi to hai ik Gazal
Par tere kade-suhkan ke barabar nahin hoon mein !!  glasses2

Good one from you as usaual.


Na milta gar ghum to dard ke afsane kha jate
Hoti jo chaman yeh duniya to verrane kha jate !!
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Dil ki baat jubaan par la kar aaj talak pachtate hai
Ab yaroon hum Muhhobat ke naam se ghabrate hai
Lata hai ishq zindgi mein aisa sailaab ke jismein
Jal jate hai ghar sare sitare bhi bikhar jate hai  !!!
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«Reply #37 on: July 02, 2007, 06:34:52 PM »
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Hahahaha .. Gurudev  Shocked  :razz:
ik sher aap ke liye Creator !!

Creator Teri zameen pe likhi to hai ik Gazal
Par tere kade-suhkan ke barabar nahin hoon mein !!  glasses2

Good one from you as usaual.


Na milta gar ghum to dard ke afsane kha jate
Hoti jo chaman yeh duniya to verrane kha jate !!
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Dil ki baat jubaan par la kar aaj talak pachtate hai
Ab yaroon hum Muhhobat ke naam se ghabrate hai
Lata hai ishq zindgi mein aisa sailaab ke jismein
Jal jate hai ghar sare sitare bhi bikhar jate hai  !!!


Bhai...........kyu sharminda kar rahe ho......

Ek nashtar ki chubho dete khoon-e-jigar ke liye,
Itni si bat par ye ilzaam-e-bewafa kyu liya,
Hum toh yu bhi mar mite the teri ek ada ke sajde,
Ek aur maut dene ka mujhpe julm kyu kiya...
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«Reply #38 on: October 23, 2007, 11:31:01 AM »
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hi Pooja,

i just love this one poem of urs....
excellent

keep up!!!

Nuts
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Rai
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«Reply #39 on: December 03, 2007, 06:02:01 AM »
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nice
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Pooja
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«Reply #40 on: January 05, 2008, 10:27:30 AM »
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bahoot khoob Humtum ji and Amit!!
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natural
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«Reply #41 on: January 25, 2008, 09:08:18 AM »
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Hui muddat ki meri uss bewafa se baat na hui,
Ek zamana hua in aankhon se barsaat na hui,
Sochte hai mil hi le uss jaalim sitamgar se phir,
Din hi din raha hai ab talak phir raat na hui....

Nice lines Amit.... Usual Smile
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