Dekhte hai hum....

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Bade bebaak ho wafa ke manjar dekhte hain hum,
Kitni hasrat se uss bewafa ka ghar dekhte hain hum.

Bade vishwas se jin haathon ko ye masoom dil saunpa,
Unhi haathon mein lipta khoon-e-khajar dekhte hain hum.

Nahi iska hai gum ki ruswai ka haasil humne paaya hai,
Muhabbat mein kaise jhuk gaya mera sar dekhte hain hum.

Gar farmaan maut ka hota toh seh bhi hum lete,
Saza hai jindagi ki usko jeekar dekhte hain hum.

Sabhi armaan dil ke aankhon ke raste dhal gaye dekho,
Mere mehboob mein chehra-e-sitamgar dekhte hain hum.

Gar mila khuda toh apni khata pooch bhi lenge,
Kyu hui uski dillagi mujhpar dekhte hain hum.
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«Reply #1 on: June 10, 2007, 01:09:59 PM »
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wah kaya baat hai Creator ji... bahoot hi acha likha hai!!!

Very emotional and touching!!! Good job!!
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«Reply #2 on: June 10, 2007, 01:19:47 PM »
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Amit bro

Too good and very true !

As Pooja said --> it's really very emotional and touching.

Kayi logon ki yeh true story bhi hai shayad....Dekhte hain hum !
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«Reply #3 on: June 10, 2007, 01:48:49 PM »
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Thanks a lot Pooja ji n Rajbir ji........Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: June 10, 2007, 03:32:56 PM »
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Hui muddat ki meri uss bewafa se baat na hui,
Ek zamana hua in aankhon se barsaat na hui,
Sochte hai mil hi le uss jaalim sitamgar se phir,
Din hi din raha hai ab talak phir raat na hui....
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«Reply #5 on: June 10, 2007, 10:25:12 PM »
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Amit

Marvellous =D>

Kuch beeti yaadein taaza hui yeh padh kar sad5
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«Reply #6 on: June 10, 2007, 11:20:57 PM »
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Thanks a lot rajbir....Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: June 11, 2007, 01:59:05 AM »
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Usual Smile

Nice words and expressions too !
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«Reply #8 on: June 11, 2007, 11:29:49 AM »
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Badi herat se ajj bhi us shakas ko chehra dekhte hai
Kitne vishwaas se kahta hai jhooth, dekhte hai

Waada her ek torr dala jisne
Ajj bhi uska waada karna, dekhte hai

Payaar ke naam per sirf jakahm dene wala
Payaar ka kis tarah bharta hai ajj bhi dum, dekhte hai

Nirdayata se meri bholi hasrato ko kuchlne wala
Ajj karta hai apni hasrato ki baat, dekhte hai

Badi herat se ajj bhi us shakas ko chehra dekhte hai
Kitne vishwaas se kahta hai jhooth, dekhte hai
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«Reply #9 on: June 11, 2007, 02:33:47 PM »
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Thanks Ricky ji....
Pooja......gud one again....ur consistency is amazing..Usual Smile

Diya hai dil tumhi ko, ab tumhi pe jaan bhi denge,
Tumhari har bewafai ka tumhe inaam bhi denge..
Karoge yaad mujhko jab tumhara dil gar tootega,
Teri har berukhi ko apni wafa ka ilzaam bhi denge..
Kiya hai khud se wada ek aansoo roeynge na hum,
Muhabbat sacchi thi meri, usko uska maan bhi denge...
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«Reply #10 on: June 11, 2007, 06:28:54 PM »
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Another Beautiful Creation Amit...
Seems I am becoming your Fan now.... Usual Smile
And Very nice Additions also....

Pooja di... You are always too good... Its never enough to read you...

Yeh dil Maange More... :D
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«Reply #11 on: June 11, 2007, 11:05:49 PM »
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Thanks a lot Shikha ji.........ur words are a huge compliment to me......warna hum jante hain apni hasti kitni hai.......Usual Smile

Kabhi sagar ki leheron mein, kabhi barasti boondon mein,
Tera hi pyar dekha hai kudrat ki har ek seh mein,
Ab aalam ye hai ki sab mein teri hi yaad basti hai,
Teri hi bewafai ke hain kisse har ek mehfil mein...
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«Reply #12 on: June 12, 2007, 01:48:25 AM »
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bahot bahoot shukaria  shikha ji.... hum to khud apke Fan hai...

agree with Shikha, Creator ji you are too good,.. atte hi dhamal@kamal.com kar diya hai...

ek koshish meri bhi...

Rang badalti dunia ka imaan dekhte hai
Kis kadar bikta hai insaan, dekhte hai

Kisi rishte ka ab koi mole nahi
Payaar ke naam per hota vyopaar, dekhte hai

Jeevan-sathi banana ho gaya ek vyopaar
Kaise kaise hota hai mol-bhav, dekhte hai

Saman ki kimat ho gai ajj kitani unchi
Insaan ke lalach ki had, dekhte hai

Rang badalti dunia ka imaan dekhte hai
Kis kadar bikta hai insaan, dekhte hai
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«Reply #13 on: June 12, 2007, 02:46:01 AM »
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Amit, Pooja

Aree wah bahut khoob aap dono likh rahe hain !

Aise khoobsurat maahol mein main bhi aa gaya
aapka ek aur :D

Kyun Shikhaaaaa and Poojaaaaa ? tongue3 :wink:
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«Reply #14 on: June 12, 2007, 10:04:33 PM »
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Thanks a lot Raj Ji n Pooja....ur appreciation makes me more n more humble.........Usual Smile.....pooja...ur again great as ever....Winking

Kabhi hum dil tatolen apna, kabhi nabz dekhte hai,
Jo Aaj phir uss bewafa ke gali ki sair ki humne..
Koi ehsas dard ka nahi, saansein bhi chale meri,
Apni iss khushkismati par khuda khair ki humne....Usual Smile
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