DIL KE CHOTO NE KABHI

by masud on January 09, 2005, 11:12:25 AM
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DIL KE CHOTO NE KABHI CHAIN SE REHNE NA DIYA
JAB CHALI SARD HAWA DIL NE TUJHE KO YAAD KIYA
ISKA RONA NAHIN KIYOUN KIYA TUMNE DIL BARBAD
ISKA GHAM HAI KE BOHOT DER MEIN BARBAD KIYA
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Meena
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«Reply #1 on: January 09, 2005, 04:57:53 PM »
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wah wahhhhhh!!!!

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masud
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«Reply #2 on: January 10, 2005, 09:51:13 AM »
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Mohatarma meena jarranawazi ka shukriya
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«Reply #3 on: January 10, 2005, 10:31:55 AM »
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DIL KE CHOTO NE KABHI CHAIN SE REHNE NA DIYA
JAB CHALI SARD HAWA DIL NE TUJHE KO YAAD KIYA
ISKA RONA NAHIN KIYOUN KIYA TUMNE DIL BARBAD
ISKA GHAM HAI KE BOHOT DER MEIN BARBAD KIYA



very nice

SHAAM JAB AANSU BAHATI AA GAYI
HAR TARAF GUM KI UDASI CHA GAYI
DEEP YAADON KE JALA KAR RO DIYE
HUM AAP KI BAHON MEIN AA KAR RO DIYA
GUM JUDAI KA SAHA JATA NAHI
AAP KE BIN ABH RAHA JAATA NAHI
PYAR MAIN KYA KYA LUTA KAR RO DIYE
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«Reply #4 on: January 10, 2005, 04:46:03 PM »
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masud ji welcome ji welcome

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wahhhhhhhh sadhaya, bohot acha likhan apne!

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«Reply #5 on: January 12, 2005, 02:28:50 PM »
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DIL KE CHOTO NE KABHI CHAIN SE REHNE NA DIYA
JAB CHALI SARD HAWA DIL NE TUJHE KO YAAD KIYA
ISKA RONA NAHIN KIYOUN KIYA TUMNE DIL BARBAD
ISKA GHAM HAI KE BOHOT DER MEIN BARBAD KIYA


Masud bhai....agar mai sahi ho toh ye ek gazal ka hissa hai.....
Singer ka naam yad nahi hai par Gazal kuch yu hai

Itna tuta hu ki chune se bhikahr jaunga
Ab agar aur dua doge toh mar jaunga..

Apko ye bat likh deni thi ki ye apki apni banai nahi hai.....hai na..
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«Reply #6 on: January 17, 2005, 08:54:16 AM »
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HAN HAN AAPNE BILKUL SAHI KAHAN YEH MERI BANAYA  HUA NAHIN HAI AREY SHER MEIN IDHAR UDHAR PADHTA REHTA HOUN AUR JO YAAD AA JATA HAI LIKH DETA HON MEINE ABHI TAK EK BHI SHER NAHIN LIKHA HAI KHUD KA AUR HAN YEH SHER MEIN GHULAM ALI KE EK GHAZAL MEIN SUNA THA AUR AAPKA SHUKRIYA MEIN ZAROOR AYENDA SE KHAYAL RAKHUNGA KE LIKH DU KE SHER MERA NAHIN HAI.

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DIL KE CHOTO NE KABHI CHAIN SE REHNE NA DIYA
JAB CHALI SARD HAWA DIL NE TUJHE KO YAAD KIYA
ISKA RONA NAHIN KIYOUN KIYA TUMNE DIL BARBAD
ISKA GHAM HAI KE BOHOT DER MEIN BARBAD KIYA


Masud bhai....agar mai sahi ho toh ye ek gazal ka hissa hai.....
Singer ka naam yad nahi hai par Gazal kuch yu hai

Itna tuta hu ki chune se bhikahr jaunga
Ab agar aur dua doge toh mar jaunga..

Apko ye bat likh deni thi ki ye apki apni banai nahi hai.....hai na..
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«Reply #7 on: January 17, 2005, 01:55:08 PM »
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HAN HAN AAPNE BILKUL SAHI KAHAN YEH MERI BANAYA  HUA NAHIN HAI AREY SHER MEIN IDHAR UDHAR PADHTA REHTA HOUN AUR JO YAAD AA JATA HAI LIKH DETA HON MEINE ABHI TAK EK BHI SHER NAHIN LIKHA HAI KHUD KA AUR HAN YEH SHER MEIN GHULAM ALI KE EK GHAZAL MEIN SUNA THA AUR AAPKA SHUKRIYA MEIN ZAROOR AYENDA SE KHAYAL RAKHUNGA KE LIKH DU KE SHER MERA NAHIN HAI.

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DIL KE CHOTO NE KABHI CHAIN SE REHNE NA DIYA
JAB CHALI SARD HAWA DIL NE TUJHE KO YAAD KIYA
ISKA RONA NAHIN KIYOUN KIYA TUMNE DIL BARBAD
ISKA GHAM HAI KE BOHOT DER MEIN BARBAD KIYA


Masud bhai....agar mai sahi ho toh ye ek gazal ka hissa hai.....


Singer ka naam yad nahi hai par Gazal kuch yu hai

Itna tuta hu ki chune se bhikahr jaunga
Ab agar aur dua doge toh mar jaunga..

Apko ye bat likh deni thi ki ye apki apni banai nahi hai.....hai na..


Masud bhia, agar maine apko chot pahuchayi toh iske liye mafi chahunga. Mera irada bas itna tha ki jo jiska kam ho, usko ek reference milna chahiye...
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«Reply #8 on: January 17, 2005, 02:00:41 PM »
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HAN HAN AAPNE BILKUL SAHI KAHAN YEH MERI BANAYA  HUA NAHIN HAI AREY SHER MEIN IDHAR UDHAR PADHTA REHTA HOUN AUR JO YAAD AA JATA HAI LIKH DETA HON MEINE ABHI TAK EK BHI SHER NAHIN LIKHA HAI KHUD KA AUR HAN YEH SHER MEIN GHULAM ALI KE EK GHAZAL MEIN SUNA THA AUR AAPKA SHUKRIYA MEIN ZAROOR AYENDA SE KHAYAL RAKHUNGA KE LIKH DU KE SHER MERA NAHIN HAI.

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DIL KE CHOTO NE KABHI CHAIN SE REHNE NA DIYA
JAB CHALI SARD HAWA DIL NE TUJHE KO YAAD KIYA
ISKA RONA NAHIN KIYOUN KIYA TUMNE DIL BARBAD
ISKA GHAM HAI KE BOHOT DER MEIN BARBAD KIYA


Masud bhai....agar mai sahi ho toh ye ek gazal ka hissa hai.....


Singer ka naam yad nahi hai par Gazal kuch yu hai

Itna tuta hu ki chune se bhikahr jaunga
Ab agar aur dua doge toh mar jaunga..

Apko ye bat likh deni thi ki ye apki apni banai nahi hai.....hai na..


Masud bhia, agar maine apko chot pahuchayi toh iske liye mafi chahunga. Mera irada bas itna tha ki jo jiska kam ho, usko ek reference milna chahiye...



arey nahin bhai mujhe bilkul bhi bura nahin laga aur na hi dil ko chot pohchi hai balki mein aap ke baat se sehmat houn ke jiska kaam ho uska hi reference dena chahiye aap ne bilkul thik kahan bhai aap bilkul bhi tension na le chale koi baat nahin isse bahane aap se baat ho to saki hai mein india bombay se houn aap kahan se hai bhai
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«Reply #9 on: January 20, 2005, 06:53:17 AM »
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for you masud

  na der se humne tumhe barbad kiya
   na dil se tumhe humne azad kiya
   ek tum hi they jisne hamari
    mohabbat ko be-awaz kiya.......
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«Reply #10 on: January 20, 2005, 07:34:55 AM »
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for you masud

  na der se humne tumhe barbad kiya
   na dil se tumhe humne azad kiya
   ek tum hi they jisne hamari
    mohabbat ko be-awaz kiya.......


very well by all

tumko barbaad jo karenge tuh jeyenge kaise
tumko ajad jo karenge tuh jeyenge kaise
tum tuh ho meri dil ki har dhadkan main
tujhe jo bhulenge tuh jeyenge kaise
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tanha dil tanha safar
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«Reply #11 on: January 20, 2005, 08:48:10 AM »
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so nice all!!!!!!

& well answer sandhya ji & simple boy!!!!!!

Tumne Bhi Rangoli Sajayi Hogi
Matwaali Diwaali Manayi Hogi
Bujha Hua Chirag Dekhkar
Humari Yaad to Aayi Hogi...................(nm)
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«Reply #12 on: January 20, 2005, 08:48:34 AM »
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so nice all!!!!!!

& well answer sandhya ji & simple boy!!!!!!

Tumne Bhi Rangoli Sajayi Hogi
Matwaali Diwaali Manayi Hogi
Bujha Hua Chirag Dekhkar
Humari Yaad to Aayi Hogi...................(nm)
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«Reply #13 on: January 20, 2005, 09:15:27 AM »
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so nice all!!!!!!

& well answer sandhya ji & simple boy!!!!!!

Tumne Bhi Rangoli Sajayi Hogi
Matwaali Diwaali Manayi Hogi
Bujha Hua Chirag Dekhkar
Humari Yaad to Aayi Hogi...................(nm)


thank u tanha dil
aapne bhi acha likha hai

haan humne bhi sajai thi rangoli
haan manayi thi matwaali diwali
kiya tha roshan har diye ko maine
phir bhi mere dil ka har khona tha khali
har taraf tha ujala .....................magar
mere dil mein phe3li thi har aur virani
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«Reply #14 on: January 20, 2005, 09:18:36 AM »
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again a gud answer sandhya ji!!!!!!!
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