DIL SE KALA NIKLA MERA SANAM....SOUDAGAR

by soudagar on October 31, 2012, 06:17:26 PM
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Humein gurur tha pyar mein wafa k misal kayam karenge wo
par wo bewafa ishq ki raah mein do kadam par hi dum tod gya

mere pyar ki khatir dunia chhodne ki baat karta tha jo sabse
dunia ki chakachondh ki khatir ek din mujhe hee chhod gya

jiskee khushi ki khatir humne apno se hii rishte tod liya
wo bewafa apne naye rishton ki khatir humse hi muh mod gya

itna chaha use ke kabhi gamon ki parchai tak na padne di uspe
wo khugarz apni khusi ki khatir mera gamon se rishta jod gya
 
bhola chehra masoom aakhien par dil se kala nikla mera sanam
khud mehfilon ki rounq bdha rha mujhe dard ki tanhai mein dubo gya

uske sang sapne suhane dekhe the saje aashiyane dekhe the
tanha baitha sochta hoon ek  pal mein yeh kya se kya ho gya
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«Reply #1 on: October 31, 2012, 07:04:23 PM »
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waah wah bahut khoob dheron daad
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«Reply #2 on: October 31, 2012, 07:49:22 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: October 31, 2012, 08:48:10 PM »
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Humein gurur tha pyar mein wafa k misal kayam karenge wo
par wo bewafa ishq ki raah mein do kadam par hi dum tod gya

mere pyar ki khatir dunia chhodne ki baat karta tha jo sabse
dunia ki chakachondh ki khatir ek din mujhe hee chhod gya

jiskee khushi ki khatir humne apno se hii rishte tod liya
wo bewafa apne naye rishton ki khatir humse hi muh mod gya

itna chaha use ke kabhi gamon ki parchai tak na padne di uspe
wo khugarz apni khusi ki khatir mera gamon se rishta jod gya
 
bhola chehra masoom aakhien par dil se kala nikla mera sanam
khud mehfilon ki rounq bdha rha mujhe dard ki tanhai mein dubo gya

uske sang sapne suhane dekhe the saje aashiyane dekhe the
tanha baitha sochta hoon ek  pal mein yeh kya se kya ho gya

good one sir
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«Reply #5 on: October 31, 2012, 08:51:37 PM »
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Humein gurur tha pyar mein wafa k misal kayam karenge wo
par wo bewafa ishq ki raah mein do kadam par hi dum tod gya

mere pyar ki khatir dunia chhodne ki baat karta tha jo sabse
dunia ki chakachondh ki khatir ek din mujhe hee chhod gya

jiskee khushi ki khatir humne apno se hii rishte tod liya
wo bewafa apne naye rishton ki khatir humse hi muh mod gya

itna chaha use ke kabhi gamon ki parchai tak na padne di uspe
wo khugarz apni khusi ki khatir mera gamon se rishta jod gya
 
bhola chehra masoom aakhien par dil se kala nikla mera sanam
khud mehfilon ki rounq bdha rha mujhe dard ki tanhai mein dubo gya

uske sang sapne suhane dekhe the saje aashiyane dekhe the
tanha baitha sochta hoon ek  pal mein yeh kya se kya ho gya

bahut bahut khoob...... waah waaaaahhhhhhhh  Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #6 on: October 31, 2012, 09:55:03 PM »
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«Reply #8 on: October 31, 2012, 11:35:14 PM »
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very nice... Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: November 01, 2012, 12:36:28 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoob.. dil ko chhuuti hui.. aapki ye peshkash humko bahut bahut pasand aayi...!!!
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«Reply #12 on: November 01, 2012, 12:37:29 AM »
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Humein gurur tha pyar mein wafa k misal kayam karenge wo
par wo bewafa ishq ki raah mein do kadam par hi dum tod gya

mere pyar ki khatir dunia chhodne ki baat karta tha jo sabse
dunia ki chakachondh ki khatir ek din mujhe hee chhod gya

jiskee khushi ki khatir humne apno se hii rishte tod liya
wo bewafa apne naye rishton ki khatir humse hi muh mod gya

itna chaha use ke kabhi gamon ki parchai tak na padne di uspe
wo khugarz apni khusi ki khatir mera gamon se rishta jod gya
 
bhola chehra masoom aakhien par dil se kala nikla mera sanam
khud mehfilon ki rounq bdha rha mujhe dard ki tanhai mein dubo gya

uske sang sapne suhane dekhe the saje aashiyane dekhe the
tanha baitha sochta hoon ek  pal mein yeh kya se kya ho gya
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«Reply #14 on: November 01, 2012, 07:54:00 AM »
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very sad .................
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