"GHAR":Shayeri for Dard -e- Bewafai

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"GHAR"

« on: May 16, 2008, 07:08:18 AM »

THIS POEM IS DEDICATE 2 MY LOVE

CHAHAT THI EK GHAR BANANE KI,
USKE SAATH ZINDAGI BASANE KI,
HAATH MEIN THAAMEEIN REET....
CHALE THE HAM AASHIYAAN APNA
BANANE....
NA KHABAR THI MUTHHI SE NIKAL
JAYEGI....
CHAHAT THI EK GHAR BANANE KI,
HAR RAAT USS GHAR KE POORA HONE
KA KHAWAB DEKHTE,
HAR DIN USKE SANG ZINDAGI BITANE
KI AAS RAKHTE....
DHEERE-2 KIYA ISS KHAWAB KO POORA
JIS DIN DEKHA USNE MERE AASHIYAAN
KO,
USNE EK CHOT MAARI....
CHAHAT THI EK GHAR BANANE KI....
PEROON SE APNE DAHH DIYA AASHIYAAN
MERA....
KEHNE LAGA YE KA PAGALPAN HAI TERA,
YE SAB HOTA DEKH DIL MEIN EK KASAK
UTH GAYI....
MERI USKI TARAF EK NAZAR UTH GAYI,
CHAHAT THI EK GHAR BANANE KI,
POOCHA USS BEDARD SE MERI KHUSHIYOON
KO KIYA BARBAAD KYUN,
HASKE KEHNE LAGA TO TU KARTI HAI AISA
MAJAK KYUN....
HAATH CHOODA MERE HAATH SE WO MUD GAYA
ROTI REH GAYI MEIN KYUNKI MERA TO SAB
KUCH UJAD GAYA....
CHAHAT THI EK GHAR BANANE KI....
LAKH KOSHISH KI USS GHAR KO DOBARA
BANANE KI,
PAR AAJ TAK NA WO PHIR SE AASHIYAAN
BAN PAYA,
DEKH KE BIKHRE HUE GHAR MERE KO HAR
KISI NE MAJAK UDAYA,
CHAHAT THI EK GHAR BANANE KI....
USS GHAR MEIN USKE SAATH BAS JANE KI
PAR AAB NA TO WO GHAR RAHA NA HI WO
MERA HAMDAM RAHA....
CHAHAT THI EK GHAR BANANE KI....
USKE SAATH ZINDAGI BITANE KI....
BY. K.SHAEL

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"KRISHNA".

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Re: "GHAR"

« Reply #1 on: May 16, 2008, 08:27:00 AM »

k.shael

Behtareen jazbaat zahir kiye hain aap ne !

Har ladki ka sapna hota hai ki uska apna ek GHAR ho !

Woh usko apne tareeke se sajaye, apne pyar ke saath wahan waas kare !

Magar kabhi kabhi aise GHAR toot jaate hain sad5


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« Reply #2 on: May 16, 2008, 08:28:39 AM »

THANX SOOO MUCH RAJBIR,
BUT AAPNE YE NAHI BATAYA KI POEM
KAISI LAGI,
BY. K.SHAEL


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« Reply #3 on: May 16, 2008, 08:30:45 AM »

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Superb ! Applause

Mujhe to tumhari shayari mein apni zindagi ke kuch pehlu nazar aate hain !


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« Reply #4 on: May 16, 2008, 08:37:31 AM »

Very nice K.shael ji
bohat hi khoob likha hai aapne.. Usual Smile


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Zindagi thi ajeeb sab ke sab ek khwaab they
jo khushi nahi mili uske gam behisaabthey..
tha samander apna firbhikyu pyase they
hum ek hi baat main chupe kayi hijaab they...

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« Reply #5 on: May 16, 2008, 08:39:03 AM »

Quote from: k.shael on May 16, 2008, 07:08:18 AM

OMG, Purely a marvelous dedication, no words to describe it completely, excellent job, Hit par hit de rahe aap to. Keep the spirit up... Bravo!!

Quote from: Rajbir on May 16, 2008, 08:30:45 AM

k.shael
Superb ! Applause

Mujhe to tumhari shayari mein apni zindagi ke kuch pehlu nazar aate hain !

Yeh zahr-e-zindagi ek ajuba hai, -
Teri aapbeeti men dhaka koi ghao hai, -
Yun khile phir murjhane ke liye tum, -
Teri awaaz dabbi dang bedhadak kyun hai. -

(Syed Naami)


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« Reply #6 on: May 16, 2008, 08:45:37 AM »

Syed

Tumhara dil bhi na bas moum ki tarah hai !

Pighalte der nahi lagti...cheer up !

Nice lines Winking

k.shael waqai mein bahut achcha likhti hai !


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« Reply #7 on: May 16, 2008, 09:02:50 AM »

Khair hai to dil hi na.!

Jab itna Kshael ne kamaal likha tab sab ka dil kyun dhadka?

I am cheering up.....


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« Reply #8 on: May 17, 2008, 03:01:37 AM »

THANX SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH,
RAJBIR,HONEYROSE & SYEDNAMI JI....
MERE KALLAM KO SARAHNE KE LIYE
SHUKRIYA....
BY. K.SHAEL

GHAR KAANCH KA HO TO CHOOTI SI
CHOT SE TOOT JATA HAI,
GHAR DIL KA HO TO CHTTI SI BAAT
PE TOOT JATA HAI,
GHAR MOHABBAT KA HO TO CHOTTI SI
BEWAFAI PE TOOT JATA HAI,
PAR JO GHAR VISWASS PE TIKKA HO
WO KABHI TOOT NAHI PATA....
THANX AGAIN


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« Reply #9 on: May 17, 2008, 08:30:03 AM »

Very beautiful quote kshael jee, aap ne durust farmaaya. Shukriya


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« Reply #10 on: May 18, 2008, 01:10:35 AM »

Superb dedication Shael siso...


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« Reply #11 on: May 19, 2008, 05:24:29 AM »

THANX SOOOO MUCH,
SYEDNAMI....
& ROZA SIS....
KOSHISH RAHEGI KI AISE HI LIKHTI
RAHO AUR AAP SAB KA PYAR PATTI RAHOO,
THANX AGAIN....
BY. K.SHAEL


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« Reply #12 on: May 22, 2008, 12:39:48 PM »

wow amazing!! Clapping Smiley

bahoot hi simple shabdo mai bahoot he gahri baatein likh gai hai app k.shael, kai baar pardi apki rachna.. ek ke baad ek line motio ki tarah piroi hui hai apne... jaise ki Sami ji ne kaha "Purely a marvelous dedication, no words to describe it completely, excellent job"!!! Good job, Good creation!! Applause


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Re: "GHAR"

« Reply #13 on: May 23, 2008, 04:22:33 AM »

THANX SOOOOOOOOOO MUCH,
POOJA JI....
AAP NE HAMRE KALAM KO ITNA SARAHA....
THANX SOOO MUCH....
U HI PYAR DETE RAHIYEGA
BY. K.SHAEL


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« Reply #14 on: May 23, 2008, 01:26:47 PM »

Shael, apki yah poem kahin dil ko bahoot ander tak chu gai hai.. ek koshish ki hai kuch likhne ki...

Ghar banaya, bana kar torr diya
Wah re kismat, kaha per lakar chor diya!!

Shikwa, shikayat yah sab, ab bekar ki baatein
Jab hum-safar ne hi munh morr liya!!

Her dard, her ansoo, bejaan sa lage mujhe
Sato janam sath nibhane ka kah kar,
jab issi janam mai tanha chor diya

seena uska tha mera ghar aor bahein darwaja
kis kadar mujhko be-ghar kar, munh morr liya
Ghar banaya, bana kar torr diya
Wah re kismat, kaha per lakar chor diya!!


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