|| Juda....Priya... ||

by manzil-e-ishq on August 12, 2011, 04:15:23 AM
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«Reply #15 on: August 14, 2011, 08:11:35 PM »
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Quote from: manzil-e-ishq on August 12, 2011, 04:15:23 AM
Chalo ab juda ho jate hai...
hum khud hi khuda ho jate hai...
 
wafao ka daman choda..
ab se bewafa ho jate hai..
 
tum ashqo se daman bacha lo..
hum hi lapata ho jate hai...
 
chodo na zid mita dene ki
hum yun hi fana ho jate hai...
 
teri raah me mere humdum
zindagi se khafa ho jate hai...
 
chalo ab juda ho jate hai..
hum khud hi khuda ho jate hai..



chodo na zidd mita dene ki
hum khud hi fana ho jaate hain

bahut khoob manzil

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«Reply #16 on: August 14, 2011, 08:48:27 PM »
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Priyaa Jee Aadaab!

Waah janab waah kia khoob kalaam kahi hai aapne.. Usual Smile
Behad achche lafzoN se apne ahsaas O khayaal
bayaaN kiye hai aapne Usual Smile

Bayaani bhi behad khoob rahi ... humari daad kabul
kijiye... Usual Smile         


Quote from: manzil-e-ishq on August 12, 2011, 04:15:23 AM
Chalo ab juda ho jate hai...
hum khud hi khuda ho jate hai...
 
Matle ka khayaal achcha hai daad
par dusre misre meiN "Khuda" kahkar aapne dono
line ka connection hi cut kar diya Usual Smile
Humare khayaal se sher youN bhi adaa ho sakta hai:)

Chalo ab juda ho jate hai...
hum khud bewafa ho jate hai...         
         

wafao ka daman choda..
ab se bewafa ho jate hai..
 
Achcha hai janab daad Usual Smile         

tum ashqo se daman bacha lo..
hum hi lapata ho jate hai...
 
Kia kahne janab waah bahut khoob daad daad daad Usual Smile         

chodo na zid mita dene ki
hum yun hi fana ho jate hai...
 
Kia kahen bahut khoob daad Usual Smile         

teri raah me mere humdum
zindagi se khafa ho jate hai...
 
Achcha sher hai daad Usual Smile         

chalo ab juda ho jate hai..
hum khud hi khuda ho jate hai..


Priyaa jee behad achchi koshish rahi
aur kafi rawaaN bhi rahi .. humari phir se daad Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye.. Aate rahiye..
Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez Usual Smile         
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M.ASGHAR MIRPURI
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«Reply #17 on: August 14, 2011, 09:42:22 PM »
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GREAT POETRY.ASGHAR
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manzil-e-ishq
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«Reply #18 on: August 15, 2011, 06:49:04 AM »
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bht bht shukria sarfira ji.....
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manzil-e-ishq
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«Reply #19 on: August 15, 2011, 06:50:51 AM »
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bht shukria ghyan ji.....
Bht acchi lines kahi hai aapne.....
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manzil-e-ishq
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«Reply #20 on: August 15, 2011, 06:52:53 AM »
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pasandagi ka shukia sheba ji....
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«Reply #21 on: August 15, 2011, 06:54:12 AM »
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kalam pasand karne ka bht bht shukria parwaaz ji.....
And thnx for ur valuable suggestions......
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«Reply #22 on: August 15, 2011, 06:55:01 AM »
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shukria asghar saheb....
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