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Hai baat jara si… ruaab jara sa…
Nazar bhi hai pyasi.. ye dil bhi hai pyasa…
Deed ko teri hain tarse ye ankhiya…
Ki preet jara si… hai mera tamasha….
Thi teri hi aadat is dil ko sada se….
in aankho se chalke hain megh bhara sa….
Hu tum bin adhuri… sajan mere sun lo…
Raahe ye sooni na dengi dilasa….
Ye meri wafien bulati hain tumko…
Hai meri dua me… bas tu hi rava sa……
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«Reply #1 on: January 21, 2011, 10:06:27 AM » |
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«Reply #3 on: January 21, 2011, 10:21:31 AM » |
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bahut badhiya--- lekin koyal sahiba ka line bhi mast hai  ya kisi nadiya ka pani pi raha udhar:) "" dil ko rakh pyasa aur zara sa bas pal 2 pal ki hai--- majburiyan aur zara sa!! haalat udhar bhi hai kuch bikhra bikhra sa de raha dil ko wo bhi dilasaa--- " thanx " mast creation |
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«Reply #4 on: January 21, 2011, 11:20:18 AM » |
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Hai baat jara si… ruaab jara sa…
Nazar bhi hai pyasi.. ye dil bhi hai pyasa…
Deed ko teri hain tarse ye ankhiya…
Ki preet jara si… hai mera tamasha….
Thi teri hi aadat is dil ko sada se….
in aankho se chalke hain megh bhara sa….
Hu tum bin adhuri… sajan mere sun lo…
Raahe ye sooni na dengi dilasa….
Ye meri wafien bulati hain tumko…
Hai meri dua me… bas tu hi rava sa……
Waah ji waah priya ji bahut alag se andaz mein apni kavita post ki hai apne maza aagya ji padh k... |
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manzil-e-ishq
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«Reply #5 on: January 21, 2011, 01:00:04 PM » |
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thanx koyal........ hmmm....pata nahi koyal kis nadiya ka pani pee raha hai wo.... sahi baat par dhayan dilaya tune..... |
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«Reply #6 on: January 21, 2011, 01:03:55 PM » |
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bahut acha likha h aapne priya ji !!
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«Reply #7 on: January 21, 2011, 02:25:52 PM » |
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bahut achha priya ji...
Intezar !
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«Reply #8 on: January 21, 2011, 03:09:03 PM » |
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hayeeeeeeeeeee.............mar dala priya..........
kya lkiha he priya.....wo kB ji kahte he na chumeshwri performnace........
maja aa gaya dear........esi hi aur likho .....nasah sa aa raha he......
lijiye kuch lines meri taraf se bhi
tu milti he jese mil jaye
fursat me pyala sharab jara sa
madhosi esi tujme jese
khilte gulab ka shabab jara sa
tuje dekh ho hi jati he halat
jese bigda ho nawab jara sa
tadapye dil ko is kadar jese
mithi nind me tut jaye khwab jara sa
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«Reply #9 on: January 21, 2011, 04:49:34 PM » |
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wah Priya bahut khubb aur ek anokha andaaz. bahut hi umda. dil to mera bhi kuch likhne ka kar gaya par Matrix ji ne mast likha hai. Haan Matrix ji---aapne sahi kaha Chumeswari performance khus rahiye sukriya |
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«Reply #10 on: January 21, 2011, 08:23:20 PM » |
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mai bhi hu pyasa wo bhi hai pyasi
pyar ka sagar hai dono ke dil me
fir bhi hai pyase dono
na jaane darmiya ye doorie hai kaisi
kosta hu dil ko apne mai
kambakht ne ki meri halat ye aisi
adhro se kuch keh na saka mai
meri khaamoshi ko wo samajh na payi zara bhi
haye maar daalegi mujhko teri ye chuppi
anjaan na ho tum bhi mere haal-e-dil se
fir tere labo pe hai khaamoshi ye kaisi
hai itni si tamanna harsat hai itni si
mil jaye mujhko ye tera aanchal badal sa
mil jaye tera pyar zara sa
mil jaye teri chhao jara si....
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«Reply #11 on: January 21, 2011, 08:41:53 PM » |
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Bahut Khub Priya Ji Bahut Hi Sundar Likha Hai Aapne
U Hi Likhte Rahiye Aur Khush Rahiye
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manzil-e-ishq
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«Reply #12 on: January 22, 2011, 12:12:47 PM » |
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shukria manjum ji.... wah wah manzilji... bahut khub  |
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«Reply #13 on: January 22, 2011, 12:58:46 PM » |
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Aa aa aaa-jaa dil ki pyaas bujha jaa
O-kabhi tou aa k mukhda deekha jaa |
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