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Dosto..... ye kahani bahut dinon pahle likhi thi.... aaj mann main aaya ki aap sab ki nazar ki jaye....... ummid hai aapko pasand aayegi.....

Jab maine tumhari yadon ko dil ki gaharayiyon ke bhitar kahin dafan kar diya tha tab achanak hi tumhara meri nazaron ke samne se gujar jana. Purane zakhon ko kitni jaldi kured gaya… tumne shayad mujhe nahin dekha tha ya dekhkar bhi nahin dekha tha… par main tumhen hargiz nahin bhuli thi…. Tumhari yadon ko kitna hi dabaya dil ke bhitar par bhuli kabhi nahin thi….

Main beech sadak par khdi rah gayi.. main kahan hun? Mujhe kahan jana hai? Is baat ka hosh hi kahan raha mujhe.. abhi abhi jo dekha wo sach tha ya koi sapna.. samajh nahin pa rahi hun… par tum abhi yahan se guzar gaye the aur main door tak raah ko dekhti rah gayi… pahle ki tarah hi…………

pichhe se kisi car ka horn sunkar chetana lauti to dekha main bich sadak par khadi hun ek baar fir….. apni sudh budh khokar…sab kuch bhulkar main laut padi ghar ki orr… aaj zindgi main sabkuchh bemaanise laga raha hai…

ghar aakar kaagaz ke kuch tukde jo kabhi tumne mujhe likhe the haath main lekar soch rahi thi ki zindgi main kitna kuch badal jata ai waqt ke sath.. hamare chahne ke anusar kahan hota hai sabkuchh…. Aur jo hota hai use ham rok hi kahan pate hain…..

mujhe aaj bhi achi tarah yaad hai wo pal jab maine apne dil ke tukdon ko sameta tha… dil ke tukdon ko haath main lie der tak usi raah par khadi thi usi mod par jahan tum mujhe chhod gaye the…..

pata nahin  kabhi iss soundarya ke mayajaal se tum chhutoge ya nahin??? Agar kabhi chhut paye tab ye jaan jaoge ki zindgi main pyar ke maayne soudarya kabhi nahin hota… pyar to gunon ka aakankshi hota hai… pyar to wo hai ki chot ek ko lagti hai aur dard dusre ko hota hai…. Dil ek ka rota hai aur aansu dusre ke bahte hain… par tumhare lie khubsurti hi pyar thi…..

Tum hamesha kaha karte the “priya main bahut bada aadmi banna chahta hun… bahut rupya kamana chahta hun… tumhare sapne bahut unche the tumhare vichar mujhse bahut alag the…. Mere lie bhavnatmak rahi hai aur tumne use bhautik hi samjha……. Mere lie khush rahne ka arth tha ki dil khush rahe….. hamara sath rahe….. par  tumne sabhi sadhanon se sampan hone ko khushi jana. Maine hamesha apne antar-mann ko khubsurat banana chaha aur tum mujhe bahari roop main khubsurat dekhna chahte the jo mere lie sambhav nahin tha…….

Tumse pyar tha mujhe par daar bhi tha kyon ki mujhe pata tha ki sundarta ko chahne wala insane insane ko bhi vastu samjhne lagta hai… aur aakhir tumne mere daar ko sahi sabit kar diya…. Tumne sabit kar diya ki main tumhare lie ek vastu hi thi aur jab tumhe mujhse achi vastu mili to main tumhe bekar lagne lagi… tumhara mann us mrigtrishna main uljhne laga…. Tum jo mujhse milne ke lie paglon ki tarah bechain rahte the ab kabhi kabhi hi milte the aur dhire dhire ye mulaqaten bhi khatm hoti chali gayin….. ab tumhare chakkar kahi aur lagte the….. kayi baar to yun bhi hua kit um mujhe andekha  kar ke nikal gaye…. Aur main tumhari zindgi se door ho gayi hamesha ke lie….

Aaj varshon bit gaye tumse mile.. kabhi kabhi sochti hun thhik hi hua… saundarya ki drishti se main tumhare layak kahan thi lekin main bhi main thi…. Jo khas gun meri visheshta the wi main tumme bahut dhundhe the aur ant main ye sochkar hi taslli kar lit hi ki koi baat nahin main tumme gunvatta laungi…. Tum pattar zarur ho par main tumhen tarashungi….  Par patthar patthar hi raha.. use tarashane main aise chot lagi ki zindgi bhar ke lie sambhlana mushkil ho gaya…. Main tumhen nahin tarash saki han khud zakhmi hokar rah gayi thi…..

Fir kuch dinon baad pata chala ki tumne shadi kar li hai…usi khubsurat ladki se….. sunkr dukh hua tha par aashchay hargiz nahin…. Kyon ki tum aisa kar sakte the… ak bahut hi khubsurat cheej ko pakar kho dene ke daar se tumne sada ke lie use apne kabze main kar lia tha……….

Main haar gayi..

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«Reply #1 on: December 16, 2014, 11:38:15 AM »
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Dosto..... ye kahani bahut dinon pahle likhi thi.... aaj mann main aaya ki aap sab ki nazar ki jaye....... ummid hai aapko pasand aayegi.....

Jab maine tumhari yadon ko dil ki gaharayiyon ke bhitar kahin dafan kar diya tha tab achanak hi tumhara meri nazaron ke samne se gujar jana. Purane zakhon ko kitni jaldi kured gaya… tumne shayad mujhe nahin dekha tha ya dekhkar bhi nahin dekha tha… par main tumhen hargiz nahin bhuli thi…. Tumhari yadon ko kitna hi dabaya dil ke bhitar par bhuli kabhi nahin thi….

Main beech sadak par khdi rah gayi.. main kahan hun? Mujhe kahan jana hai? Is baat ka hosh hi kahan raha mujhe.. abhi abhi jo dekha wo sach tha ya koi sapna.. samajh nahin pa rahi hun… par tum abhi yahan se guzar gaye the aur main door tak raah ko dekhti rah gayi… pahle ki tarah hi…………

pichhe se kisi car ka horn sunkar chetana lauti to dekha main bich sadak par khadi hun ek baar fir….. apni sudh budh khokar…sab kuch bhulkar main laut padi ghar ki orr… aaj zindgi main sabkuchh bemaanise laga raha hai…

ghar aakar kaagaz ke kuch tukde jo kabhi tumne mujhe likhe the haath main lekar soch rahi thi ki zindgi main kitna kuch badal jata ai waqt ke sath.. hamare chahne ke anusar kahan hota hai sabkuchh…. Aur jo hota hai use ham rok hi kahan pate hain…..

mujhe aaj bhi achi tarah yaad hai wo pal jab maine apne dil ke tukdon ko sameta tha… dil ke tukdon ko haath main lie der tak usi raah par khadi thi usi mod par jahan tum mujhe chhod gaye the…..

pata nahin  kabhi iss soundarya ke mayajaal se tum chhutoge ya nahin??? Agar kabhi chhut paye tab ye jaan jaoge ki zindgi main pyar ke maayne soudarya kabhi nahin hota… pyar to gunon ka aakankshi hota hai… pyar to wo hai ki chot ek ko lagti hai aur dard dusre ko hota hai…. Dil ek ka rota hai aur aansu dusre ke bahte hain… par tumhare lie khubsurti hi pyar thi…..

Tum hamesha kaha karte the “priya main bahut bada aadmi banna chahta hun… bahut rupya kamana chahta hun… tumhare sapne bahut unche the tumhare vichar mujhse bahut alag the…. Mere lie bhavnatmak rahi hai aur tumne use bhautik hi samjha……. Mere lie khush rahne ka arth tha ki dil khush rahe….. hamara sath rahe….. par  tumne sabhi sadhanon se sampan hone ko khushi jana. Maine hamesha apne antar-mann ko khubsurat banana chaha aur tum mujhe bahari roop main khubsurat dekhna chahte the jo mere lie sambhav nahin tha…….

Tumse pyar tha mujhe par daar bhi tha kyon ki mujhe pata tha ki sundarta ko chahne wala insane insane ko bhi vastu samjhne lagta hai… aur aakhir tumne mere daar ko sahi sabit kar diya…. Tumne sabit kar diya ki main tumhare lie ek vastu hi thi aur jab tumhe mujhse achi vastu mili to main tumhe bekar lagne lagi… tumhara mann us mrigtrishna main uljhne laga…. Tum jo mujhse milne ke lie paglon ki tarah bechain rahte the ab kabhi kabhi hi milte the aur dhire dhire ye mulaqaten bhi khatm hoti chali gayin….. ab tumhare chakkar kahi aur lagte the….. kayi baar to yun bhi hua kit um mujhe andekha  kar ke nikal gaye…. Aur main tumhari zindgi se door ho gayi hamesha ke lie….

Aaj varshon bit yage tumse mile.. kabhi kabhi sochti hun thhik hi hua… saundarya ki drishti se main tumhare layak kahan thi lekin main bhi main thi…. Jo khas gun meri visheshta the wi main tumme bahut dhundhe the aur ant main ye sochkar hi taslli kar lit hi ki koi baat nahin main tumme gunvatta laungi…. Tum pattar zarur ho par main tumhen tarashungi….  Par patthar patthar hi raha.. use tarashane main aise chot lagi ki zindgi bhar ke lie sambhlana mushkil ho gaya…. Main tumhen nahin tarash saki han khud zakhmi hokar rah gayi thi…..

Fir kuch dinon baad pata chala ki tumne shadi kar li hai…usi khubsurat ladki se….. sunkr dukh hua tha par aashchay hargiz nahin…. Kyon ki tum aisa kar sakte the… ak bahut hi khubsurat cheej ko pakar kho dene ke daar se tumne sada ke lie use apne kabze main kar lia tha……….

Main haar gayi..

Mann

very touching........
.kitni hi jindagiyan aise hi kitni hi baar beech raston me besudh khadi reh gayi hongi....jo dil sachai se pyar krta hai har uski nhi hoti, darasal khuda shayad unhe koi or dil dena chahta ho jo unki kadr kre....
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«Reply #2 on: December 16, 2014, 11:45:15 AM »
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bahut  bahut shukriya ambalikaji......
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«Reply #3 on: December 16, 2014, 05:39:53 PM »
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Dosto..... ye kahani bahut dinon pahle likhi thi.... aaj mann main aaya ki aap sab ki nazar ki jaye....... ummid hai aapko pasand aayegi.....

Jab maine tumhari yadon ko dil ki gaharayiyon ke bhitar kahin dafan kar diya tha tab achanak hi tumhara meri nazaron ke samne se gujar jana. Purane zakhon ko kitni jaldi kured gaya… tumne shayad mujhe nahin dekha tha ya dekhkar bhi nahin dekha tha… par main tumhen hargiz nahin bhuli thi…. Tumhari yadon ko kitna hi dabaya dil ke bhitar par bhuli kabhi nahin thi….

Main beech sadak par khdi rah gayi.. main kahan hun? Mujhe kahan jana hai? Is baat ka hosh hi kahan raha mujhe.. abhi abhi jo dekha wo sach tha ya koi sapna.. samajh nahin pa rahi hun… par tum abhi yahan se guzar gaye the aur main door tak raah ko dekhti rah gayi… pahle ki tarah hi…………

pichhe se kisi car ka horn sunkar chetana lauti to dekha main bich sadak par khadi hun ek baar fir….. apni sudh budh khokar…sab kuch bhulkar main laut padi ghar ki orr… aaj zindgi main sabkuchh bemaanise laga raha hai…

ghar aakar kaagaz ke kuch tukde jo kabhi tumne mujhe likhe the haath main lekar soch rahi thi ki zindgi main kitna kuch badal jata ai waqt ke sath.. hamare chahne ke anusar kahan hota hai sabkuchh…. Aur jo hota hai use ham rok hi kahan pate hain…..

mujhe aaj bhi achi tarah yaad hai wo pal jab maine apne dil ke tukdon ko sameta tha… dil ke tukdon ko haath main lie der tak usi raah par khadi thi usi mod par jahan tum mujhe chhod gaye the…..

pata nahin  kabhi iss soundarya ke mayajaal se tum chhutoge ya nahin??? Agar kabhi chhut paye tab ye jaan jaoge ki zindgi main pyar ke maayne soudarya kabhi nahin hota… pyar to gunon ka aakankshi hota hai… pyar to wo hai ki chot ek ko lagti hai aur dard dusre ko hota hai…. Dil ek ka rota hai aur aansu dusre ke bahte hain… par tumhare lie khubsurti hi pyar thi…..

Tum hamesha kaha karte the “priya main bahut bada aadmi banna chahta hun… bahut rupya kamana chahta hun… tumhare sapne bahut unche the tumhare vichar mujhse bahut alag the…. Mere lie bhavnatmak rahi hai aur tumne use bhautik hi samjha……. Mere lie khush rahne ka arth tha ki dil khush rahe….. hamara sath rahe….. par  tumne sabhi sadhanon sampane s hone ko khushi jana. Maine hamesha apne antar-mann ko khubsurat banana chaha aur tum mujhe bahari roop main khubsurat dekhna chahte the jo mere lie sambhav nahin tha…….

Tumse pyar tha mujhe par daar bhi tha kyon ki mujhe pata tha ki sundarta ko chahne wala insane insane ko bhi vastu samjhne lagta hai… aur aakhir tumne mere daar ko sahi sabit kar diya…. Tumne sabit kar diya ki main tumhare lie ek vastu hi thi aur jab tumhe mujhse achi vastu mili to main tumhe bekar lagne lagi… tumhara mann us mrigtrishna main uljhne laga…. Tum jo mujhse milne ke lie paglon ki tarah bechain rahte the ab kabhi kabhi hi milte the aur dhire dhire ye mulaqaten bhi khatm hoti chali gayin….. ab tumhare chakkar kahi aur lagte the….. kayi baar to yun bhi hua kit um mujhe andekha  kar ke nikal gaye…. Aur main tumhari zindgi se door ho gayi hamesha ke lie….

Aaj varshon bit yage tumse mile.. kabhi kabhi sochti hun thhik hi hua… saundarya ki drishti se main tumhare layak kahan thi lekin main bhi main thi…. Jo khas gun meri visheshta the wi main tumme bahut dhundhe the aur ant main ye sochkar hi taslli kar lit hi ki koi baat nahin main tumme gunvatta laungi…. Tum pattar zarur ho par main tumhen tarashungi….  Par patthar patthar hi raha.. use tarashane main aise chot lagi ki zindgi bhar ke lie sambhlana mushkil ho gaya…. Main tumhen nahin tarash saki han khud zakhmi hokar rah gayi thi…..

Fir kuch dinon baad pata chala ki tumne shadi kar li hai…usi khubsurat ladki se….. sunkr dukh hua tha par aashchay hargiz nahin…. Kyon ki tum aisa kar sakte the… ak bahut hi khubsurat cheej ko pakar kho dene ke daar se tumne sada ke lie use apne kabze main kar lia tha……….

Main haar gayi..

Mann



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«Reply #4 on: December 16, 2014, 09:39:42 PM »
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Bohat khubsurat alfaazo.n se piroya hai apne waaaahhhh daaaaddd..
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bahut  bahut shukriya shebaji.......
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Ye duniya aisee hi hai, dost! kahaanee aab-e-uyoon ko uksaatee hai!

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