khula darwaja

by saaz_haldwanvi on May 21, 2009, 08:44:34 AM
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kuchh lines meri nayi composition se lekar aake janib paish kar raha huN ,ye meri kitab
"muhhajab lehje" se lee gayee hai, ye composition thori badi hai, chunache kuchh lines hi likh raha huN jo mujhe pasand hain,


         "TUFAAN GUJAR JATE HAIN,PICHHE CHOD JATE HAIN
          KUCHH DARWAJE TUTE HUE,KUCHH DEEWARE DHAYEE HUYEE
          AISE MEIN WO DEEWARE DIKHTI NAHI,JIS PER
          PATKA THA TUNE DARWAJA,
          CHALO -- , DARWAJA TO KHULA
          TUTA HI SAHI,"         [ SAAZ HALDWANVI]

                                 [ COPY RIGHT RESERVED]
 "padne waalo se ilteja hai ki aap log is composition ki soul ko, iske mufhum ko likh kar mujhe reply de"
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«Reply #1 on: May 21, 2009, 09:50:55 AM »
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kuchh lines meri nayi composition se lekar aake janib paish kar raha huN ,ye meri kitab
"muhhajab lehje" se lee gayee hai, ye composition thori badi hai, chunache kuchh lines hi likh raha huN jo mujhe pasand hain,


         "TUFAAN GUJAR JATE HAIN,PICHHE CHOD JATE HAIN
          KUCHH DARWAJE TUTE HUE,KUCHH DEEWARE DHAYEE HUYEE
          AISE MEIN WO DEEWARE DIKHTI NAHI,JIS PER
          PATKA THA TUNE DARWAJA,
          CHALO -- , DARWAJA TO KHULA
          TUTA HI SAHI,"         [ SAAZ HALDWANVI]

                                 [ COPY RIGHT RESERVED]
 "padne waalo se ilteja hai ki aap log is composition ki soul ko, iske mufhum ko likh kar mujhe reply de"


KAFI ACHCHI LINES HAIN ..SAAZ SB...ISS LINES KO PADH KAR HAR INSAAN APNEY NAZARIYE SEY MATLAB NIKAA LEGAA...!!
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saaz_haldwanvi
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«Reply #2 on: May 21, 2009, 09:57:21 AM »
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KAFI ACHCHI LINES HAIN ..SAAZ SB...ISS LINES KO PADH KAR HAR INSAAN APNEY NAZARIYE SEY MATLAB NIKAA LEGAA...!!
thank khamosh ji,
but i just want to know your point of view in this composition, aap ko kya lagta hai?
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