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क्यों तन्हाई में तुझको दिन रात ढूंढता रहूँ,
तुझको तो आदत है भीड़ में खो जाने की.

अब तो अँधेरे भी मुझको सहारा देने लगे हैं,
मुझको तो आदत हैं अंधेरों से दिल लगाने की.

मुझे दर्द में डुबोकर बड़ी मासूमियत से बोले,
अब इज़ाज़त है तुझको सिर्फ मुस्कराने की.

जब भी पुकारो मुझे सिर्फ आखों से पुकारना,
मुझमें शक्ति है आँखों की भाषा पढ़ पाने की.

अपने घावों की गहराई तुझे क्या बताऊँ "बेताब",
मुझको तो आदत है ज़माने से ज़ख्म छुपाने की.

डी के सक्सेना " बेताब".
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«Reply #1 on: February 10, 2018, 03:07:45 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: February 10, 2018, 04:47:07 PM »
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क्यों तन्हाई में तुझको दिन रात ढूंढता रहूँ,
तुझको तो आदत है भीड़ में खो जाने की.

अब तो अँधेरे भी मुझको सहारा देने लगे हैं,
मुझको तो आदत हैं अंधेरों से दिल लगाने की.

मुझे दर्द में डुबोकर बड़ी मासूमियत से बोले,
अब इज़ाज़त है तुझको सिर्फ मुस्कराने की.

जब भी पुकारो मुझे सिर्फ आखों से पुकारना,
मुझमें शक्ति है आँखों की आवाज़ सुन पाने की.

अपने घावों की गहराई तुझे क्या बताऊँ "बेताब",
मुझको तो आदत है ज़माने से ज़ख्म छुपाने की.

डी के सक्सेना " बेताब".
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mujh mein shakti hai aankhon ke ishaare parhh paane kee.
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«Reply #3 on: February 10, 2018, 10:40:52 PM »
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kyaa baat hai waah waah waah bahut umdah
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ek suggestion hai if you can change the line marked red
like written as under.
mujh mein shakti hai aankhon ke ishaare parhh paane kee.
Thanks for the suggestion. As per your advise, red line has been amended accordingly.
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«Reply #4 on: February 11, 2018, 09:55:30 AM »
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वाह वाह अति सुन्दर ढेरो दाद कबूल  Applause Applause Applause Applause करे
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वाह वाह अति सुन्दर ढेरो दाद कबूल  Applause Applause Applause Applause करे
Thanx Rastogi ji for your valuable comment.
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