---- /// Main itna bhi nirdayi nahi hoon /// ----

by klaskar on April 23, 2010, 11:49:00 PM
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«Reply #15 on: April 24, 2010, 11:21:35 PM »
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Tere aane ki tapash bi maine mehsoos ki
Tumare aane ki Ahahat bi maine sun li
Teri perchai se hum tume pehchan lete the
TUm agar aao to mere pass hi aaao, yeh fariyaad b maine ki

Tum aye bi aur aah kar chale gaye
Kyon awaz lagane ki jarorat na tumne samzi
Jana ho tha to fir ayye hi kyon ?
TUm mere nahi ho aab yehi har paal dil ko samzane ki khosish ki


beautiful...

subah ki suraj k saath main aaya tha,
raat ko chaand k saath main aaya tha,
tune dekh k bhi andekha kar diya mujhe,
teri har dhadkan k saath main aaya tha...


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«Reply #16 on: April 25, 2010, 12:37:11 AM »
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bahut khoob likha hai aapne Neel ji... bahut pasand aayi humko aapki ye kavita.... bahut khoob...

kaise kahun ki main aaj bhi tujhe chahta hoon,
hothon ki wo narmi ko aaj bhi main chhoota hoon,
raat ki tanhaayion mein jab tu tanha si hoti hai,
teri har dhadkan me teri saanso me main hota hoon,

chahta to ab bhi hu ki tere kareeb main aa jaun,
par sharir hi nahi hai to parchhayi kahan se laun,
tujhse juda ho k maut se mohabbat ho gayi thi,
maut k baad ab main apni zindagi kahaan se laun...


Tere aane ki tapash bi maine mehsoos ki
Tumare aane ki Ahahat bi maine sun li
Teri perchai se hum tume pehchan lete the
TUm agar aao to mere pass hi aaao, yeh fariyaad b maine ki

Tum aye bi aur aah kar chale gaye
Kyon awaz lagane ki jarorat na tumne samzi
Jana ho tha to fir ayye hi kyon ?
TUm mere nahi ho aab yehi har paal dil ko samzane ki khosish ki


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«Reply #17 on: April 25, 2010, 04:07:17 AM »
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Tere aane ki tapash bi maine mehsoos ki
Tumare aane ki Ahahat bi maine sun li
Teri perchai se hum tume pehchan lete the
TUm agar aao to mere pass hi aaao, yeh fariyaad b maine ki

Tum aye bi aur aah kar chale gaye
Kyon awaz lagane ki jarorat na tumne samzi
Jana ho tha to fir ayye hi kyon ?
TUm mere nahi ho aab yehi har paal dil ko samzane ki khosish ki



Good one Neel Ji
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #18 on: April 25, 2010, 04:08:30 AM »
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bahut khoob likha hai aapne Neel ji... bahut pasand aayi humko aapki ye kavita.... bahut khoob...

kaise kahun ki main aaj bhi tujhe chahta hoon,
hothon ki wo narmi ko aaj bhi main chhoota hoon,
raat ki tanhaayion mein jab tu tanha si hoti hai,
teri har dhadkan me teri saanso me main hota hoon,

chahta to ab bhi hu ki tere kareeb main aa jaun,
par sharir hi nahi hai to parchhayi kahan se laun,
tujhse juda ho k maut se mohabbat ho gayi thi,
maut k baad ab main apni zindagi kahaan se laun...



Equally good response Kapil
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«Reply #19 on: April 25, 2010, 10:15:12 AM »
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Thanx a lot Rajesh ji...!!!

Equally good response Kapil
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«Reply #20 on: April 25, 2010, 10:15:56 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause
Bas iske ilava main kya kahoun Kapil dost aur Neel jee...Bahaut bahaut khoob..Dono ne ek se bad karr ek shaer likha hai...

Kapil dost apki kavita ne mere dil ki awaz suna di...Main wakei bahaut bahaut dil se kehta hoon ke bahaut acha likha hai...
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«Reply #21 on: April 25, 2010, 10:16:43 AM »
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Voh kabhi hamri ankh se ek ansoo bi na girne dete the
Kya hua aab jo unne barsaat ka b pata na chala

Yeh shaer mujhe bahaut hi zadaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa acha laga Neel jee... Applause Applause
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«Reply #22 on: April 25, 2010, 10:17:47 AM »
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Yeh barishon ka sabab bas itna sa hai yaaron,
Jab rota hai 'Rahim' toh dard Khuda se bhi dekha nahin jata...

~Rahim~
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«Reply #23 on: April 25, 2010, 10:25:39 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Rahim bhai... bahut khushi hui humein ye jaanke ki aapko hamari rachna pasand aayi... main tahe dil se shukriya adaa karta hoon aapka...!!!

Applause Applause Applause Applause
Bas iske ilava main kya kahoun Kapil dost aur Neel jee...Bahaut bahaut khoob..Dono ne ek se bad karr ek shaer likha hai...

Kapil dost apki kavita ne mere dil ki awaz suna di...Main wakei bahaut bahaut dil se kehta hoon ke bahaut acha likha hai...
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«Reply #24 on: April 25, 2010, 10:27:36 AM »
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bahut khoob likha hai aapne Rahim bhai...!!!

Yeh barishon ka sabab bas itna sa hai yaaron,
Jab rota hai 'Rahim' toh dard Khuda se bhi dekha nahin jata...

~Rahim~
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«Reply #25 on: April 25, 2010, 10:51:31 AM »
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bahut khoob likha hai aapne Rahim bhai...!!!

shukriya dost...
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«Reply #26 on: April 25, 2010, 03:12:57 PM »
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Thanx a lot Rahim Ji
I think u feel it ......wid d same feeling i wrote it ....
its vry deep ..... ppl change a lot ....... hai na ?

Yeh shaer mujhe bahaut hi zadaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa acha laga Neel jee... Applause Applause
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«Reply #27 on: April 25, 2010, 03:13:41 PM »
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Thanx Rajesh.............
Appriciate!!!!!!!!!

Good one Neel Ji
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«Reply #28 on: April 25, 2010, 03:22:41 PM »
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Wah!!!!!!!!! kya baat hai !!!!!!RAhim ji "Kamal "

Yeh barish main beegna bhut acha lagta hai aaj kaal
Pani ankh se aah reha hai ya asmaan se yeh pata hi nahi chalta
Apne gum main ro lene ka bahana bi mil jata hai
aur
BArsaat kaha kaha ho rehi hai dekhne valo ko  yeh andaza b nhi hota
Yeh barishon ka sabab bas itna sa hai yaaron,
Jab rota hai 'Rahim' toh dard Khuda se bhi dekha nahin jata...

~Rahim~
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«Reply #29 on: April 25, 2010, 03:36:38 PM »
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Chahat to chahat hoti hai, yeh kabhi kum ho nhi sakti
Mohbat hamesha Jawan rehti hai yeh kabhi mar nahi sakti
Chaha hota kisi ko to paane ki himat bi rekhte
Mohbat voh aag hai ho kabhi tham nahi sakti ..

bahut khoob likha hai aapne Neel ji... bahut pasand aayi humko aapki ye kavita.... bahut khoob...

kaise kahun ki main aaj bhi tujhe chahta hoon,
hothon ki wo narmi ko aaj bhi main chhoota hoon,
raat ki tanhaayion mein jab tu tanha si hoti hai,
teri har dhadkan me teri saanso me main hota hoon,

chahta to ab bhi hu ki tere kareeb main aa jaun,
par sharir hi nahi hai to parchhayi kahan se laun,
tujhse juda ho k maut se mohabbat ho gayi thi,
maut k baad ab main apni zindagi kahaan se laun...


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