---- /// Main itna bhi nirdayi nahi hoon /// ----

by klaskar on April 23, 2010, 11:49:00 PM
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tere jaane se kuch aisa ho gaya hoon,
dil k hi haathon majboor ho gaya hoon,
kal tak tere kahe raaston pe chalta tha,
aur aaj tera hi gunehgaar ho gaya hoon,
jaane anjaane me kuch galtiyaan ki hongi,
us pal tu bhi to mere sang rahi hogi,
par priye, main tujhe gunehgaar keh doon,
main itna bhi nirdayi nahi hoon,

tu hi thi jisne kabhi mujhe hasna sikhaya,
tu ne hi kabhi mere dil ko dhadakna sikhaya,
jab mujhe mohabbat ho chali thi maut se,
tu ne hi us pal mujhe jeena sikhaya,
jis safar me kuch pal saath chali thi tu mere,
aaj wahaan main chal raha hoon akela bin tere,
par priye, main tujhe bewafaa keh doon,
main itna bhi nirdayi nahi hoon,

ab mujhe har haseen chehre se dar lagta hai,
jaane q ab mujhe mohabbat se bhi dar lagta hai,
kal tak har saans k sath tera naam liya karta tha,
ab to mujhe apni saanso se bhi dar lagta hai,
jis din se tune mera saath chhod diya,
mere hothon ne bhi muskurana chhod diya,
par priye, main tujhe uski wajah keh doon,
main itna bhi nirdayi nahi hoon,

har safar me manzil paana mumkin nahi hai,
har ek ko haasil milna mumkin nahi hai,
kuch khwaab adhure reh jaate hain,
har khwaab ka poora hona mumkin nahi hai,
jo khwaab tere sang jeene ka tha mera,
usme saath chhut gaya hai ab tera,
par priye, main tujhe bewafaa keh doon,
main itna bhi nirdayi nahi hoon,

ab mere dil me koi aarzoo na rahi,
kisi ko paane ki tamanna na rahi,
ji chuke hain apni zindagi tere sang,
ab aur jeene ki tamanna na rahi,
zindagi k har pal ko humne muskura k jiya,
ab tere naam se zeher bhi muskrura k piya,
par priye, main tujhe apna qaatil keh doon,
main itna bhi nirdayi nahi hoon...
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«Reply #1 on: April 24, 2010, 12:07:54 AM »
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Wah ji wah..........

"KAMAL"

Bhut hi khoob!!!!!!!!!!!

Yeh dil ka dard hai jo khud hi Byan ho jata hai
Kitna b khoshish kar lo isse chupane ki ,fir yeh chera pe nazar aah hi jata hai  love9 love9


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«Reply #2 on: April 24, 2010, 01:51:22 AM »
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Wah! Bahut khoob likha hai aap ne Kapil Ji
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«Reply #3 on: April 24, 2010, 06:34:08 PM »
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wwaah waah waah bahut khob kapil ji neel ji ne sahi kaha dil ka dard chhupaye nhi chhupta...bahut khoob...Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: April 24, 2010, 06:57:04 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Neel ji...bahut din baad aapne KAMAL likha hai... jiska arth main samajh gaya... shukriya Neel ji...!!! Aapne bhi bahut khoob likha hai...!!!

wo hamaari hasi k pichhe chhipe dard ko dekh lete hain,
bhari barsaat me bhi hamaare aansuon ko dekh lete hain...


Wah ji wah..........

"KAMAL"

Bhut hi khoob!!!!!!!!!!!

Yeh dil ka dard hai jo khud hi Byan ho jata hai
Kitna b khoshish kar lo isse chupane ki ,fir yeh chera pe nazar aah hi jata hai  love9 love9



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«Reply #5 on: April 24, 2010, 07:25:38 PM »
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Thanx Dear !!!!!!!!!
wwaah waah waah bahut khob kapil ji neel ji ne sahi kaha dil ka dard chhupaye nhi chhupta...bahut khoob...Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: April 24, 2010, 07:28:10 PM »
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Voh kabhi hamri ankh se ek ansoo bi na girne dete the
Kya hua aab jo unne barsaat ka b pata na chala

bahut bahut shukriya Neel ji...bahut din baad aapne KAMAL likha hai... jiska arth main samajh gaya... shukriya Neel ji...!!! Aapne bhi bahut khoob likha hai...!!!

wo hamaari hasi k pichhe chhipe dard ko dekh lete hain,
bhari barsaat me bhi hamaare aansuon ko dekh lete hain...


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«Reply #7 on: April 24, 2010, 07:31:48 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Rajesh ji...!!!

Wah! Bahut khoob likha hai aap ne Kapil Ji
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«Reply #8 on: April 24, 2010, 07:32:38 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Geet ji... tahe dil se sukriya adaa karta hoon main aapka...!!!

wwaah waah waah bahut khob kapil ji neel ji ne sahi kaha dil ka dard chhupaye nhi chhupta...bahut khoob...Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: April 24, 2010, 07:40:22 PM »
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bahut khoob likha hai aapne Neel ji...

na barsaat ko dekh paate hain na teri aansuon ko hum dekh paate hain,
aansuon k samundar me doobke ab teri gili aankhon ko kam dekh paate hain...


Voh kabhi hamri ankh se ek ansoo bi na girne dete the
Kya hua aab jo unne barsaat ka b pata na chala

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«Reply #10 on: April 24, 2010, 07:49:56 PM »
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Jo har Sawan se phele aah jata
Jo gata se phele cha jata
Kitni barish sukhi nikal gaye
zalim, ek baar to zlak dikha jata
bahut khoob likha hai aapne Neel ji...

na barsaat ko dekh paate hain na teri aansuon ko hum dekh paate hain,
aansuon k samundar me doobke ab teri gili aankhon ko kam dekh paate hain...


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«Reply #11 on: April 24, 2010, 08:15:06 PM »
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beautiful...

subah ki suraj k saath main aaya tha,
raat ko chaand k saath main aaya tha,
tune dekh k bhi andekha kar diya mujhe,
teri har dhadkan k saath main aaya tha...


Jo har Sawan se phele aah jata
Jo gata se phele cha jata
Kitni barish sukhi nikal gaye
zalim, ek baar to zlak dikha jata
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«Reply #12 on: April 24, 2010, 09:00:57 PM »
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Wah wah Kapil ji aur Neel ji bahut hi khoob,bahut dard aur khoobsurati se likha aap dono ne.great work.excellent,keep up the good work. Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft
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«Reply #13 on: April 24, 2010, 09:09:57 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Madhu ji..!!!

Wah wah Kapil ji aur Neel ji bahut hi khoob,bahut dard aur khoobsurati se likha aap dono ne.great work.excellent,keep up the good work. Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft
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«Reply #14 on: April 24, 2010, 11:15:33 PM »
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THnx Madhu ji ..
Relly thnx 4 ur appericaition
Wah wah Kapil ji aur Neel ji bahut hi khoob,bahut dard aur khoobsurati se likha aap dono ne.great work.excellent,keep up the good work. Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft
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