Mere zigar ko uske khanzar ka nishana... "manjum"

by manjum on December 29, 2010, 08:22:36 AM
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Sans lun main bhi esa koi bahana karde,
Mere zigar ko uske khanzar ka nishana karde.

Itna toote hain ki ab aur kaise tootenge,
Ki ab asar na kare kuchh itna diwana karde.

Din main bhi ab kahan ujale nazar aate hain,
ab andheron ko aur bhi kala karde.

Gham ye sah paun ye himmat to nahin hai mujh main,
ye khuda patthar sa apna dil karde.

khaq ho jaun isse pahle hai ek arman,
Meri gali main unka aana karde.
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«Reply #1 on: December 29, 2010, 08:36:18 AM »
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bahut badhiya peshkash he ji..

likhte rahiye..

khush rahiye

dher saari daad~
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«Reply #2 on: December 29, 2010, 08:37:32 AM »
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shukriya Abhiji

daad dete rahen.. thanks

khush rahen..
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«Reply #3 on: December 29, 2010, 08:41:12 AM »
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bahut jhakashhh likha hai Manjum ji.
ufff ye mohabbat.
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uff ye mohabat bhi kya kya din dikhati hai
   har ek bahaane se dekho zaalim
kaise tujhe aazmaati hai
   kyun kare tu patthar sa dil apna
gar tu itne sunahre khab sajaati hai
   ujaale hi ujaale nazar ayenge ab bhi
bharosa kar le zara aur
   ye bhi shayd uss khuda ka hi ek sunahra sa manzar hai
""
thanx
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«Reply #4 on: December 29, 2010, 08:48:34 AM »
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wah wah niralaji...

bahut bahut shukriya aapka...

aapki daad main to bahut badi baat hai..

yun hi duaye dete rahen
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«Reply #5 on: December 29, 2010, 09:02:49 AM »
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 icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower bahut achhe manjum ji.
mazaa aa gaya.
Sans lun main bhi esa koi bahana karde,
Mere zigar ko uske khanzar ka nishana karde.

Itna toote hain ki ab aur kaise tootenge,
Ki ab asar na kare kuchh itna diwana karde.

Din main bhi ab kahan ujale nazar aate hain,
ab andheron ko aur bhi kala karde.

Gham ye sah paun ye himmat to nahin hai mujh main,
ye khuda patthar sa apna dil karde.

khaq ho jaun isse pahle hai ek arman,
Meri gali main unka aana karde.

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«Reply #6 on: December 29, 2010, 09:06:18 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya.... sureshji

daad dete hain
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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #7 on: December 31, 2010, 10:47:02 AM »
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Bahut Khub Manjum JI
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«Reply #8 on: December 31, 2010, 10:53:12 AM »
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meri gali me unka ana kar de........

its superb manjum ji......dil khush khush ho gaya ji......

bahot hi umda alfaaj ........keep it up
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«Reply #9 on: January 03, 2011, 04:16:14 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya...

daad ke shukriya..

mushkurate rahe...
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