Jab Uske samne aate hain.... "manjum"

by manjum on January 21, 2011, 03:40:22 AM
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aap sabhi dist baar baar khushyon se bhari rachna ke lie kah rahe hain.... to lijie aa gaye ham...


Jab uske samne aate hain palken band rakhte hain.
Wo aankhon se zahan padhne ka fan bhi rakhte hain.

Wo ham par jan lutate hain magar hamse chhupate hain,
hame malum hai sabk kuchh khabar ye ham bhi rakhte hain.

Luta denge kisi din uski khatir jo bhi apna hai,
Fana uspar hi kar denge jo sanse chand rakhte hain.

Na jane kis ghadi aa jaye meri taraf chal kar,
Isi ke waste us rah par charag jalaye rakhte hain.

Agar hai aarju unko hame apna banane ki,
Fidaho jayen ham par wo tammana ham bhi rakhte hain.

manjum "mann"
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«Reply #1 on: January 21, 2011, 05:00:53 AM »
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wah wah bahut khubsurat.
achha lagta hai aisi chijen padhna.
kitna achha laga aaj Usual Smile
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«Reply #2 on: January 21, 2011, 05:06:35 AM »
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shukriya niralaji...

yun hi duaye dete rahen...
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«Reply #3 on: January 21, 2011, 05:11:03 AM »
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VERY NICE MANJUM JI

EK HI PAL MAIN KOI AISA VAAR KAR GAYA
ANKHON KA TEER KOI  DIL KE PAAR KAR GAYA
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«Reply #4 on: January 21, 2011, 05:21:23 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya saahilji..yun hi duaye dete rahen aapsab ki duaye hi aur aur likhne par majbur karti hain..

khub reply....

shukriyaji....

khush raiye sada
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«Reply #5 on: January 21, 2011, 05:45:04 AM »
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jab wo saamne aate haim
   hum thoda sa bahak jaate hain
jaana kahin hota hai aur
   hum pahuch kahi aur jaate hain
Usual SmileUsual SmileUsual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: January 21, 2011, 05:55:56 AM »
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ha ha ha....
ek driver rakh lo ji...
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«Reply #7 on: January 21, 2011, 06:00:45 AM »
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driver ka haal bhi wahi hoga--
wo log pahle se hi nashe me rahte hain.
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«Reply #8 on: January 21, 2011, 06:12:56 AM »
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nashe mein rehta hoon har pal na jaane kaisa jaam pilaaya
larhkhraha raha hoon jabse uski nazron se takraaya
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«Reply #9 on: January 21, 2011, 08:33:59 PM »
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Bahut Khub Manjum Ji U Hi Likhte Rahiye
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«Reply #10 on: January 22, 2011, 03:47:38 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Rishiji...

duaye dete rahen
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«Reply #11 on: January 22, 2011, 05:58:27 AM »
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wahh ji wahhh kya kehne aapki mahobbat k..bht badhiya kalaam manjum ji maza aagaya ji...
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«Reply #12 on: January 22, 2011, 07:41:03 AM »
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   Very Nice Manjum ji,Bahut achha likha hai aapne. hello2 hello2
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«Reply #13 on: January 22, 2011, 10:51:30 AM »
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«Reply #14 on: January 24, 2011, 03:58:27 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya kasak... yun sath rahna....

duaye dete rahna..

shukriya
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