sang.....

by manjum on January 12, 2011, 08:04:41 AM
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dosto... hi..

hindi main ek alankar hota hai jis main ek hi shabd ka ek se adhik bar prayog kiya jata hai par har bar uska matlab alag alag hota hai. esi ko dhayan main rakha kar ek koshish ki hai... ummid hai daad milegi... bas ek line main sari bat kahi hai. jahan ek jagah sang= sath aur dusri jagah sang=patthar hai...

"Sang uska mujhe na mil paya,
sang usne mujhe diye hain bahut"


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«Reply #1 on: January 12, 2011, 08:17:54 AM »
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wah Manju wah.
kya baat hai bahut khubb.
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kya sangat paya hai tumne
sangat me uske sang bahut paya hai tumne
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thanx
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«Reply #2 on: January 12, 2011, 09:04:18 AM »
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bht khoob manjum ji....
do lines me bht kuch kah diya aapne...

do lines meri taraf se bhi....

sang mere jeena na aaya unhe...
sang unke mar mar ke hum jeete rahe.....
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«Reply #3 on: January 12, 2011, 10:12:02 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya niralaji.... shukriya
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«Reply #4 on: January 12, 2011, 10:14:23 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya manzilji....

daad dete rahen..sath rahen..

sang uske chala chahte the ham.
mager wo rah main sang bichhata raha.

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«Reply #5 on: January 12, 2011, 10:31:23 AM »
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wah kya baat manju ji
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«Reply #6 on: January 12, 2011, 12:00:24 PM »
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shukriya niralaji
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«Reply #7 on: January 13, 2011, 06:57:41 AM »
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manju ji wah bahut khoob.
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«Reply #8 on: January 13, 2011, 06:58:38 AM »
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shukriya Sureshji..... yun hi sath rahen....
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