Un Bejaan Lamhon Ki Kasam ...

by tamanna_me on February 15, 2010, 12:57:25 PM
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Un Bejaan Lamhon Ki Kasam; Jinhe Tere Khayalonse Sajaya Meine,
Un Rahon Ki Kasam; Jaha Har Pal Saath Paya Tumhe,

Un Badalon Ke Saayon Ki Kasam;
Jo Har Raat Mere Saath Hai..Teri Palkon Ki Tarah!

Un Khamoshiyon Ki Kasam;
Jo Mere Asspass Hai..Tere Lavbson Ki Tarah!

Us Ishk Ki Kasam;
Jo Bandagi Hai Ab Mere Liye!
Us Ummid Ki Kasam;
Jo Zindagi Hai Ab Mere Liye!

Tera Saath Chhuta Toh, Zindagi Ruthegi
Mar Hi Jayege Hum Agar Ye Ummid Tutegi!
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«Reply #1 on: February 15, 2010, 01:00:41 PM »
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Wah wah Tamnna ji bahut achhi creation hai.
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«Reply #2 on: February 15, 2010, 01:04:37 PM »
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thankz riyaaz ... diz one z ma fav ...
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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #3 on: February 15, 2010, 01:06:43 PM »
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Bahut Khub Tamanna Ji
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«Reply #4 on: February 15, 2010, 01:09:52 PM »
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bahut khoob nayab creation hai tamanna ji...
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«Reply #5 on: February 15, 2010, 01:21:30 PM »
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thx rishi n broken by luv ...

Broken by luv ... ur lines r realy heart touching ...

Ye Ishk Hai Jindagi Hai Bandagi Hai
Uske Liye Jiske Paas Koi Humnasin Hai

Meri Kya Puchhte Ho Main To Bas Deewana Hoon
Haa Ker Keh Raha Hoon Ishk Kewal Dillagi Hai

Main Roun Bhi To Ro Nahin Sakta
Kaisa Hai Dard Kaisi Bebashi Hai

Kun Dekhega Chir Ker Tera Sina
Kun Apna Hai Sab To Ajnabi Hai
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«Reply #6 on: February 15, 2010, 01:34:47 PM »
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thnx n again to gud lines...

Pehle tou vo bhi anjana tha per,
merra ajnabi ek nazar mein merra ho gya,
kabhi na mila tha koi us jaise mujhe..
uski kaatil nighao mein merra dil kho gya......
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«Reply #7 on: February 15, 2010, 02:16:12 PM »
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wah wah ... nice ..




Kis Tarah Bayaan Kare .. Lavz Milte Nahi Hai..
Khaali Rakh Chhodi Hai Jagah, Zindgi Ke Panno Me!
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«Reply #8 on: February 15, 2010, 03:15:15 PM »
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shukriya...bahut khoob likha hai apne bhi...

Ek panaa merra bhi adhura hai mhbt ka..
vo likh de tou har lafz poora ho jaye......
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«Reply #9 on: February 15, 2010, 03:47:15 PM »
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wah wah ... bohut achhe
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cara
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«Reply #10 on: February 15, 2010, 04:05:03 PM »
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KYA BAAT HAI    TAMANNA_ME JI.....

UN KHAYALON KI KASAM
JO HAR PAL MERE SAATH HOTE HAI


UN KHAWABON KI KASAM
JO HAR RAAT TERE SAATH DEKHTE HAI

UN WAADON KI KASAM
JO JAB BHI MILTE HAI EK DOOSRE KO DETE HAI

UN BEETE HAR LAMHON KI KASAM
JO JEVAN BAR KI YAADEN BAN CHUKE HAI

KABHI SAATH CHODNE KE LIYE SOCHNA BHI NAHI
TU SAATH NAHI TERE BIN MERI ZINDAGI NAHI..
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«Reply #11 on: February 15, 2010, 05:46:06 PM »
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thnx ji..bahut khoob likha hai cara ji...
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«Reply #12 on: February 16, 2010, 03:50:09 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob tamanna ji....bahut pyare andaz mein likha hai aapne....
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #13 on: February 16, 2010, 03:52:02 PM »
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Sach Mein bahut Hi khoobsurat!!!!

Bahut bahut Khoob!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #14 on: February 16, 2010, 08:27:11 PM »
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Wah wah bahut khoob Tamanna ji,Geet ji,Cara ji,very touching and lovely creation.excellent
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