क्यों बुजुर्ग मुझको - By "Betaab".

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सुबह को मुझको पीने से तौबा करबाते हैं,
पर शाम को खुद ही मुझे मैखाना छोड़ आते हैं.

रात को जब घर लौटकर आता हूँ,
घर के दरवाज़े पहले ही बंद हो जाते हैं.

मेरा हाल है पिजड़े में फंसे परिंदों जैसा,
जो सदा आज़ादी के लिए फड़फड़ाते हैं.

पहले तो वो परिंदों के पर कटवाते हैं,
फिर उनको हवा में उड़ने के लिए छोड़ आते हैं.

जो परिंदे उड़ते ही एकदम गिर जाते हैं,
वोही परिंदे फिर क़ैद कर लिए जाते हैं.

अपनी तो ज़िंदगी मौत से बदतर हो गई "बेताब",
क्यों बुजुर्ग मुझको लम्बी उम्र की दुआ दिए जाते हैं.


Subah ko mujhse peene se tauba karwate hain,
Par sham ko khud hi Mujhe maikhana chhod aate hain.

Raat ko jab ghar lautkar aata hoon,
Ghar ke darwaze pahli hi band ho jaate hain.

Mera haal hain pinjde mein fanse parindon jaisa,
Jo sada azadi ke liye fadfadate hain.

Pahle to wo parindo ke par katwate hain,
Phir unko hawa mein udne ke liye chhod aate hain.

Jo parinde udte hi ekdum gir jaate hain,
Wohi parinde phir Qaid kar liye jaate hain.

Apni to Zindgi maut se Badtar ho gayee "Betaab",
Kyon bujurg mujhko lambi umra ki dua diye jaate hain.

    Composed by D K Saxena "Betaab".
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waah waah Saxena Saheb bemisaal
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मेरा हाल है पिजड़े में फंसे परिंदों जैसा,
जो सदा आज़ादी के लिए फड़फड़ाते हैं.

bahut badhiya Sir
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bahut khoob.......... Applause Applause

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waah waah Saxena Saheb bemisaal

Thanks Akash Ji.
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मेरा हाल है पिजड़े में फंसे परिंदों जैसा,
जो सदा आज़ादी के लिए फड़फड़ाते हैं.

bahut badhiya Sir

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achhaa hai
Thanks Dr. Saini ji.
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