Aaye wo na widesh sey

by abdbundeli on July 05, 2009, 07:06:58 AM
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Aaye wo na widesh sey;
Baadar pahuncho aaya!
Ritu hariyaalee aayi; pai,
Mohey kachhu na suhaaya!

                     - 'Ramwatiya'

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«Reply #1 on: July 05, 2009, 07:09:25 AM »
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Wah Abd ji beautiful creation. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: July 05, 2009, 07:31:48 AM »
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Good one Abd Ji
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«Reply #3 on: July 05, 2009, 07:38:38 AM »
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Wah Abd ji beautiful creation. Applause Applause Applause
Dhanyawaad Madhu!
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«Reply #4 on: July 05, 2009, 07:41:41 AM »
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Good one Abd Ji
Dhanyawaad Rajesh Harish ji!
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«Reply #5 on: July 05, 2009, 07:52:48 AM »
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Beautiful lines, Abd Ji! Applause
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«Reply #6 on: July 05, 2009, 08:09:11 AM »
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nice abd ji... Applause
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«Reply #7 on: July 05, 2009, 08:24:50 AM »
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kya baat hai ....abdji....

mora sajan hai widesh mein,bin sajan suna laage apne desh mein.
hariyaali aayi par sajan na aaye,bin sajan bewaa lagun apne desh mein.
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«Reply #8 on: July 05, 2009, 08:29:23 AM »
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Good Work ABD ji.. bahoot Khoob!
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«Reply #9 on: July 05, 2009, 11:49:28 AM »
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Beautiful lines, Abd Ji! Applause
Thanks Deepati!
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«Reply #10 on: July 05, 2009, 12:08:40 PM »
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nice abd ji... Applause
Thanks superspawn10 ji!
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«Reply #11 on: July 05, 2009, 12:18:06 PM »
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kya baat hai ....abdji....

mora sajan hai widesh mein,bin sajan suna laage apne desh mein.
hariyaali aayi par sajan na aaye,bin sajan bewaa lagun apne desh mein.

Thanks cara ji! Uttar sundar hai!

Sajanee saaje niyam sey,
Maathey mein sindoor!
'Priya, tum ur key mukut ho:
Raho na aisey door!!'

              - abd bundeli
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«Reply #12 on: July 05, 2009, 12:24:23 PM »
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Good Work ABD ji.. bahoot Khoob!
Dhanyawaad Sophi ji!
         - abd bundeli
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