Akhiri Salaam

by navik sultanpuri on June 24, 2013, 06:22:10 PM
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Kya bolu tumhe aur kya naam du
Wo haq nhi ab ki koi paigam du

Dost humdard ek humsafar mana tha tumhe
In nibha rahe rishto ko kaise viraam du

Dekhta tha ranz o gham me tumhe jojhhta hua
Sochta tha kya bolu aur tumhe kaise araam du

Chhoti chhoti khushiyo me khush dekhta tha tumhe
Khwahish thi k ek badi khushi ka tumhe inaam du

Saleeka nhi tha tallukat karne ka hume he shayad
Ab dooriyan jo hain darmiya to kise ilzaam du

Tamanaaye mukammal ho teri dua karta hai 'navik'
Juda jo hue hain raste to tujhe akhiri salaam du

                                  
                                Gaurav 'navik sultanpuri'
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«Reply #1 on: June 24, 2013, 07:02:36 PM »
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waah waah.. bahut khoob.. dheron daad.
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«Reply #2 on: June 24, 2013, 07:04:12 PM »
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very nice
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«Reply #3 on: June 24, 2013, 08:04:25 PM »
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Bahut Khoob
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«Reply #4 on: June 24, 2013, 09:04:30 PM »
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Kya bolu tumhe aur kya naam du
Wo haq nhi ab ki koi paigam du

Dost humdard ek humsafar mana tha tumhe
In nibha rahe rishto ko kaise viraam du

Dekhta tha ranz o gham me tumhe jojhhta hua
Sochta tha kya bolu aur tumhe kaise araam du

Chhoti chhoti khushiyo me khush dekhta tha tumhe
Khwahish thi k ek badi khushi ka tumhe inaam du

Saleeka nhi tha tallukat karne ka hume he shayad
Ab dooriyan jo hain darmiya to kise ilzaam du

Tamanaaye mukammal ho teri dua karta hai 'navik'
Juda jo hue hain raste to tujhe akhiri salaam du

                                 
                                Gaurav 'navik sultanpuri'

bahut bahut bahut umda peshkash... lajwab...
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«Reply #5 on: June 25, 2013, 03:02:26 PM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #6 on: June 26, 2013, 10:56:29 PM »
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waah waah waah waah waah bahut bahut khoob.....!!!
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