dil kee kashtee ghiree ho jab toofaanoN maiN,..

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jhooth milNe lagaa sach ke fasaanon maiN
pyaa.r bikne lagaa ab toh dukaanon maiN,...

naa khudaa saath aksar chou.d detaa hai,.....
dil ki kashtee ghiree hou jab toofaanon maiN

kitne hee phool khil ker yun bikher jaate,..
jaa k deikho zaraa tum bhee veeraanon maiN

ik giraah main ye dil uljhaa hai ab ke yuN,...
khul nahin paaye gee woh ab zamaanon maiN
 
woh shakhas ajnabee saa ban gayaa hai ab
rehta thaa  jo kabhee dil ke eiwaanon maiN,...

kee mohabbat to jaanaa  dil ne ke ab toh,.....
bas wafaa reh gayee zindaa deewaanoN maiN
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«Reply #1 on: October 24, 2013, 10:49:16 PM »
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wah beta bahut khoob. kafi dino k baad aapka likha pada aur bahut bahut accha laga padkar. good good vryyyyyyyyy good beta Thumbs UP
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«Reply #2 on: October 24, 2013, 11:06:52 PM »
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Quote from: laaiba on October 24, 2013, 10:45:44 PM

jhooth milNe lagaa sach ke fasaanon maiN
pyaa.r bikne lagaa ab toh dukaanon maiN,...

naa khudaa saath aksar chou.d detaa hai,.....
dil ki kashtee ghiree hou jab toofaanon maiN

kitne hee phool khil ker yun bikher jaate,..
jaa k deikho zaraa tum bhee veeraanon maiN

ik giraah main ye dil uljhaa hai ab ke yuN,...
khul nahin paaye gee woh ab zamaanon maiN
 
woh shakhas ajnabee saa ban gayaa hai ab
rehta thaa  jo kabhee dil ke eiwaanon maiN,...

kee mohabbat to jaanaa  dil ne ke ab toh,.....
bas wafaa reh gayee zindaa deewaanoN maiN


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«Reply #3 on: October 24, 2013, 11:09:48 PM »
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Hats off for this beauty ... awesome creation laiba ji..
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«Reply #5 on: October 25, 2013, 12:37:42 AM »
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Quote from: laaiba on October 24, 2013, 10:45:44 PM

jhooth milNe lagaa sach ke fasaanon maiN
pyaa.r bikne lagaa ab toh dukaanon maiN,...

naa khudaa saath aksar chou.d detaa hai,.....
dil ki kashtee ghiree hou jab toofaanon maiN

kitne hee phool khil ker yun bikher jaate,..
jaa k deikho zaraa tum bhee veeraanon maiN

ik giraah main ye dil uljhaa hai ab ke yuN,...
khul nahin paaye gee woh ab zamaanon maiN
 
woh shakhas ajnabee saa ban gayaa hai ab
rehta thaa  jo kabhee dil ke eiwaanon maiN,...

kee mohabbat to jaanaa  dil ne ke ab toh,.....
bas wafaa reh gayee zindaa deewaanoN maiN


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Laaiba Har Lafz Apne Hisse Ki Baat kehta Hua...yakeen Maniye...Iss Ghazal Ke Har Ashaar Ko Naa Jaane Kitne Baar padh Gaya...Lajawaab,Umda, Khoobsurat,....


jhooth milNe lagaa sach ke fasaanon maiN
pyaa.r bikne lagaa ab toh dukaanon maiN,...

naa khudaa saath aksar chou.d detaa hai,.....
dil ki kashtee ghiree hou jab toofaanon maiN

kitne hee phool khil ker yun bikher jaate,..
jaa k deikho zaraa tum bhee veeraanon maiN

ik giraah main ye dil uljhaa hai ab ke yuN,...
khul nahin paaye gee woh ab zamaanon maiN
 
woh shakhas ajnabee saa ban gayaa hai ab
rehta thaa  jo kabhee dil ke eiwaanon maiN,...

kee mohabbat to jaanaa  dil ne ke ab toh,.....
bas wafaa reh gayee zindaa deewaanoN maiN

Har Ashaar Par Hazaaro.............Dillli Daad...
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Bahut bahut khoob laiiba ji...Dheron Daad... Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: October 25, 2013, 01:52:37 AM »
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kitne hee phool khil ker yun bikher jaate,..
jaa k deikho zaraa tum bhee veeraanon maiN

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waah laaiba jee..apne aise kalaamo.N se hame achhuta chhor ke jane ki baat kar rahe ho aap..??

Ye bahut galat baat hai laaiba jee..Jo bhi hai plz do keep coming..Nd writing..

Waise kehte hain ki agar kisi cheez ka shauk ho ya passion ho to insaan uske liye waqt nikaal hi leta hai..

So dikhte rahiye..likhte rahiye aur khush rahiye..happy9
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«Reply #9 on: October 25, 2013, 03:23:44 AM »
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Very beautiful Laaiba ji, & heart touching reaching to the soul core of emotions .... :icon_salut:h
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«Reply #10 on: October 25, 2013, 03:28:36 AM »
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Quote from: laaiba on October 24, 2013, 10:45:44 PM

jhooth milNe lagaa sach ke fasaanon maiN
pyaa.r bikne lagaa ab toh dukaanon maiN,...

naa khudaa saath aksar chou.d detaa hai,.....
dil ki kashtee ghiree hou jab toofaanon maiN

kitne hee phool khil ker yun bikher jaate,..
jaa k deikho zaraa tum bhee veeraanon maiN

ik giraah main ye dil uljhaa hai ab ke yuN,...
khul nahin paaye gee woh ab zamaanon maiN
 
woh shakhas ajnabee saa ban gayaa hai ab
rehta thaa  jo kabhee dil ke eiwaanon maiN,...

kee mohabbat to jaanaa  dil ne ke ab toh,.....
bas wafaa reh gayee zindaa deewaanoN maiN
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«Reply #11 on: October 25, 2013, 05:17:21 AM »
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jhooth milNe lagaa sach ke fasaanon maiN
pyaa.r bikne lagaa ab toh dukaanon maiN,...
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
naa khudaa saath aksar chou.d detaa hai,.....
dil ki kashtee ghiree hou jab toofaanon maiN
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kitne hee phool khil ker yun bikher jaate,..
jaa k deikho zaraa tum bhee veeraanon maiN
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ik giraah main ye dil uljhaa hai ab ke yuN,...
khul nahin paaye gee woh ab zamaanon maiN
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woh shakhas ajnabee saa ban gayaa hai ab
rehta thaa  jo kabhee dil ke eiwaanon maiN,...
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
kee mohabbat to jaanaa  dil ne ke ab toh,.....
bas wafaa reh gayee zindaa deewaanoN maiN
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is pyaaree see ghazal par ek rau ke saath daad
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«Reply #13 on: October 25, 2013, 09:33:12 AM »
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Bahut pyari ghazal hai laaiba jee
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