dilber chala gaya

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wo dour wo suhana manzer chala gaya
rukhsat hoker gher se dilber chala gaya

rasta jisne dikhaya tha mayusiyon me mujhe
meri zindagi se wo rahber chala gaya

manzil milne ke ab aasaar nahi hai
haath chuda ker mujhse humsafer chala gaya

uske jaane se ye mehsoos ho raha hai
jism se jaan seene se dil-o-jiger chala gaya

kuch bhi jachta nahi dil kahi lagta nahi
sukoon dil se ker ke benoor-o-nazer chala gaya

akela gaya hai per saath le gaya rounake
jaate jaate udaas ker ke saara shaher chala gaya
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«Reply #1 on: December 14, 2010, 04:41:06 PM »
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Wah kya baat hai Sam ji.lajawab peshkash,bahut hi khoob,hats off icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: December 14, 2010, 04:41:48 PM »
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thanx madhu di
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«Reply #3 on: December 14, 2010, 05:04:54 PM »
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bahut Umda Samnoj ji...
kya baat hai behtareen nagma.
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«Reply #4 on: December 14, 2010, 10:56:00 PM »
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Bahut khoob likha hai samnoj ji..bahut khoob...
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«Reply #5 on: December 14, 2010, 11:05:39 PM »
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Bahut khoob Sam Ji
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«Reply #6 on: December 14, 2010, 11:17:19 PM »
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Mast poem hai aapki...samenose ji.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Mausam suhaana aakar bhee dekho chala gayaa
Madhu-maas mai bhi saajan pardesh chalaa gaya

Jiski muskuraahat thee mere jeene ka sabab
Wo he mujhko rulaa kar sakhee chalaa gayaa





wo dour wo suhana manzer chala gaya
rukhsat hoker gher se dilber chala gaya

rasta jisne dikhaya tha mayusiyon me mujhe
meri zindagi se wo rahber chala gaya

manzil milne ke ab aasaar nahi hai
haath chuda ker mujhse humsafer chala gaya

uske jaane se ye mehsoos ho raha hai
jism se jaan seene se dil-o-jiger chala gaya

kuch bhi jachta nahi dil kahi lagta nahi
sukoon dil se ker ke benoor-o-nazer chala gaya

akela gaya hai per saath le gaya rounake
jaate jaate udaas ker ke saara shaher chala gaya
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«Reply #7 on: December 20, 2010, 01:15:56 PM »
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thanx killu, bbl ji, rajesh ji n koyal ji

acha likha hai koyal ji
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«Reply #8 on: December 20, 2010, 01:29:01 PM »
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wahhhhhhhhh kya mastam likha hai samnoj ji..maine kaise ye miss kar diya....wowwwwwww mastam mast......
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«Reply #9 on: December 20, 2010, 01:29:51 PM »
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thanx anamika ji
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«Reply #10 on: December 20, 2010, 03:34:08 PM »
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aapko pasand aaya dil khush huaa...

thanx killu, bbl ji, rajesh ji n koyal ji

acha likha hai koyal ji
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«Reply #11 on: December 20, 2010, 03:36:35 PM »
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bahut hi badhiya samnoj ji~

dher sari daaad..

likhte rahiye~
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«Reply #12 on: December 20, 2010, 04:07:49 PM »
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«Reply #14 on: January 05, 2011, 02:51:59 PM »
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wah samji.. Applause Applause Applause

wah bahut khub.. badiya
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