Gulaabi Kafan

by ishhh on January 17, 2007, 09:02:42 PM
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ishhh
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Meri laash ko kabran tak pahoocha dena
uspar gulaabi kafan chara dena,
ek motiyion ki lari bicha dena
mera janazaa jab guzre uski gali se
usko khirki mei bula dena,
wo haath jab uthaye dua ke lyie
tab mere chehre se thoda sa
bus thoda sa kafan uthaa dena
aur phir meri laash ko
kabran tak pahoocha dena......
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Pooja
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«Reply #1 on: January 18, 2007, 04:16:01 AM »
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nice ishhhh apka yoindia mai sawagat hai..

waqat ke kafan mai, waqat kaise gujar gaya
insaano ki basti main, kaha kaha se gujar gaya
jab bhi chali mout ki kahani zindagi main
ankhon se na jaane kayun ansoo chalak gaya!!!
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ishhh
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«Reply #2 on: January 18, 2007, 08:41:13 PM »
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khoob likha aapne ki
waqt ke kafan mei, waqt kaise guzar gyia
aur shukria aapka...
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nikki
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«Reply #3 on: January 18, 2007, 09:12:05 PM »
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superbbb Ishhh n Pooja sis hamesha ki tarah lajavaab...

waqat ke kafan mai, waqat kaise gujar gaya
insaano ki basti main, kaha kaha se gujar gaya

i just love the composition....

main bhi kuch likhne ki try karti hun magar aap jaisa nahi likh paongi...

har ghadi guzar gayi har pal guzar gaya
jo lamha guzara tha uske saath,
woh na jaane kidhar gaya

sapno ki basti mein ek aur khoab bikhar gaya
ek dil basne ki koshish mein waqt se pehle hi ujad gaya
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Rajbir
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«Reply #4 on: January 18, 2007, 11:17:53 PM »
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ishhh, Pooja and Niks

Bahut he achcha likha aap sab ne !

Pooja these lines are really amazing =D>

Quote from: "Pooja"
waqat ke kafan mai, waqat kaise gujar gaya
insaano ki basti main, kaha kaha se gujar gaya
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Pooja
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«Reply #5 on: January 20, 2007, 01:51:21 AM »
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bahoot bahoot shukaria Ishhh, nikki and rajbir veer ji!!

bahoot hi acha likha hai nikki....

jab bhi chali yaandon ki hawa
jakhmo se anchal khisak gaya
khayalo ki andhi main
sab kuch laga ujaar gaya

bechain tanha yah mera man
wado ki suli per chad gaya
sochu baith ab is lash ke sung
jeevan na jaane kaise gujar gaya!!!
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