GUM MAIN DOOBI YAAD HOON

by majid on August 31, 2006, 07:07:12 AM
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GUM  MAIN DOOBI SHISHKATI YAAD HOON .....
THARTHARAATE  MAUN KA SAMWAAD HOON .....

LAAJ JISKI RAUN DALI BHEED NEY .....
US ABAL AEKANT KI FARIYAAD HOON .....

UD RAHI HAI DARD KI MITHI MEHEK ......
MAIN MOHABBAT MAIN HUA BARBAAD HOON.....

ASHQ JISKO DER TAK PADTE RAHE.....
MAIN KISI KI CHIKH KA ANUWAAD HOON......

KAASH MIL JAAYE MUJHE GALIB KOI......
EK MUDDAT SE TARASTI DAAD HOON......n/m
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«Reply #1 on: August 31, 2006, 07:15:58 AM »
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wah!!!!!!! bahut khoob majid ......very beautiful....kuch mein bhi koshish karti hun....


dard mein dube hue is dil ko kaise manaau
siskiyoon mein dubi apni aavaaz kaise wapas laau

nazdikiyaan ab badal gayi hai duri mein
in faili hui duriyo ka fasla ab kaise mitaau

kyu kiya na kabhi unhone hamaare vaade per yakeen
ab main is kho gaye vishwaas ko wapas kaise dohraau

yeh kaise tadap hai is dil ki jo khatam nahi hoti
apni zindagi ki is bujhati lau ko ab kaise wapas jalaau !!
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«Reply #2 on: August 31, 2006, 07:34:03 AM »
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shukriya .......nice one majid.....

kyu bekhabar rahi main apne pyaar se
kyu murjha ke reh gayi meri zindagi bahaar se
kyu tute mere sab khawab saolne
kyu mil saka na woh mujhe mera dil bhi haar ke?Huh??
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«Reply #3 on: August 31, 2006, 07:56:02 AM »
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bahut khoob ...Majid ...sach mein yeh pehli ab suljhaaye kaise?? Usual Smile


payasa payasa yeh dil hai mera
payase payase hain yeh nayan

dil mein chipi hain baate kitni
kyu tumse main keh na paayi sajan

kyu tum bhi anjaan rahe meri is peera se
kya tere dil mein nahi they mere pyaar ke rang

sooni sooni yeh diwaare ab mujhe bahut rulaati hai
kyu tere rasta har pal taka karte hain yeh mere do nayan !!
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«Reply #4 on: August 31, 2006, 12:10:32 PM »
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wah !!last line bahut acchi hai majid ...

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Mohabat ibadat hoti hai
Kabhi thee paas chali gayi


ab toh hum hai aur hamaari tanhiyaan
ishq ki kuch ruki hui hain dil mein parchaiyaan

tutati jaati hain saanse dubate jaate hain dil
kyu mili aakhir hame pyaar mein ruswaiyaan

ki thee jitni bhi dua hamne tujhe paane ki
unti hi tanah karti gayi mujhe yeh dard ki gehriyaan
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«Reply #5 on: August 31, 2006, 12:32:49 PM »
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THANKS KUCHH TO ACHHA HAI
AND 2 GOOG SACH MAIN BOHAT ACHHA LIKHA HAI GOOD JOB


Ek khalish dil ki yeh kya se kya kar gayi
Khusiyon ki aankh mein baarishe bhar gayi
Tere hote kitni haseen thi ye duniya
par ab tu nahi to mere dil main tanhaayan ghar kar gayi.........


bahut badiya ...

yeh zindagi tere bina ek khaali sa paimaana lagti hai
mujhe tere bin yeh duniaya apni varaani lagti hai

tum they toh asaan thee raha meri zindagi ki
ab toh mujhe har manzil begaani si lagti hai
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«Reply #6 on: August 31, 2006, 01:52:54 PM »
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wah !!!! bahut khoob .......

zindagi kabhi toh tu mujhse apno ki tarah mil
kab tak yun milagi mujeh ajnabi si  ban ke
odi hui hai maine ek naqab apne chahre per hansi ki
kabhi toh tu bhi dekh iske dard isko palat ke!!
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«Reply #7 on: August 31, 2006, 02:20:40 PM »
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wah ji wah ....

aankho se aap jara baat toh kiijiye
dil ki lagi ko ab yun hawa na diijiye
bahut seh chuke hain hum is zamaane ke sitam
aa ke ab toh bahaon mein hame thaam liijiye !!
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«Reply #8 on: August 31, 2006, 02:38:45 PM »
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shukriya majid ...... Usual Smile

kuch kuwaish kabhi dard bada  de jaati hai
teri pyaar mein yeh duri bada tadpaati hai
badte jaate hain jitne jagha ke faasale
utani  hi dil ki duri ghatatai si jaati hai !!
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«Reply #9 on: September 01, 2006, 04:14:41 AM »
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yeh dard ke rishte mere dil se bahut puraane hain
ek zid hai mere dil ki hawa mein bhi hamne deeye jarur jaalne hain!!
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«Reply #10 on: September 02, 2006, 08:18:05 AM »
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meri tanah zindagi ko fir apni yaado se aapne jaga diya
jo dard they abhi sheme se aapne fir se unhe nasur bana diya!
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«Reply #11 on: September 02, 2006, 09:06:05 AM »
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humne bhi har waqt aapko hi yaad kiya
bas khamosh nazaro se aapko hi peghaam diya
aap na samajhe meri khamosh baato ko
hamne apni har dua mein tujhko hi yaad kiya
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«Reply #12 on: September 03, 2006, 08:50:23 AM »
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bahut khub majid ..........wonderful ..

na jaane woh kyu hamse dur hote ja rahe hain
meri kis khata ki saaja woh mujhe yun diye ja rahe hain

kyu badal rahi hain ab unki nighaae
kyu unke  bole lafaz ab nashtar chubha rahe hain

kuch is qadar chhaaya hai unka hi aqs aankho mein
hum zamaane bhar mein ab unke naam se mashoor hote ja rahe hain!!
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«Reply #13 on: September 04, 2006, 06:16:50 AM »
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wonderful reply majid ........bahut hi sunder likha hai ...

khaate hain hum jin patharo se thokare
zindagi ki manzil ka pata bhi unhi se chalalta hai

ek saaya hai un shakas ka har pal
jo mere saath saath bas yun hi chalata hai

dard deta hai wahi aur dawa ban ke chhoo bhi leta hai
na jaane apni kis kis aada se woh mere dil ka haal jaan leta hai
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«Reply #14 on: September 04, 2006, 07:04:18 AM »
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good one majid ......


jis zindagi  mod per hum they kahde hue
wahi se tere mere raste kyu alag se hue
puakaarti hain nazare kyu aaj bhi
jahan kabhi they hamare dil mein faasale hue
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