Intezaar

by vinery on May 18, 2015, 03:30:44 PM
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"Har mod par tum milo yeh mumkin to nahi, phir bhi tera intezaar hai,
Dil ke kisi kone me aaj bhi tumse pyaar hai."
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«Reply #1 on: May 18, 2015, 04:52:31 PM »
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Very nice awesome keep writing dear
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«Reply #2 on: May 18, 2015, 07:19:31 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: May 18, 2015, 07:53:52 PM »
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bahut hee sunder. icon_flower Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_flower
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«Reply #6 on: May 19, 2015, 02:31:14 AM »
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«Reply #7 on: May 19, 2015, 03:28:15 PM »
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Quote from: vinery on May 18, 2015, 03:30:44 PM
"Har mod par tum milo yeh mumkin to nahi, phir bhi tera intezaar hai,
Dil ke kisi kone me aaj bhi tumse pyaar hai."

good one ,ma'am
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Quote from: marhoom bahayaat on May 19, 2015, 03:28:15 PM
good one ,ma'am
Thank you.
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«Reply #9 on: May 20, 2015, 03:37:29 AM »
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पूजा जी,बहुत ही सुंदर शब्दों में अपनी मन की बात को व्यक्त किया है आपने|ढेरो दाद कबूल करे |अगर दूसरी पंक्ति को इस प्रकार लिखा जाती और भी अच्छा लगता|
दिल के किसी कोने को आज भी तुमसे प्यार है|
इससे आगे की पंक्तियों को इस प्रकार आगे बढाया जा सकता था

हमे भी बताओ,तुम्हे किसका इंतजार है
ढूँढ कर लाये उसे,वो कौन गुनाहगार है

आर के रस्तोगी
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«Reply #10 on: May 20, 2015, 04:19:53 AM »
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Quote from: Ram Krishan Rastogi on May 20, 2015, 03:37:29 AM
पूजा जी,बहुत ही सुंदर शब्दों में अपनी मन की बात को व्यक्त किया है आपने|ढेरो दाद कबूल करे |अगर दूसरी पंक्ति को इस प्रकार लिखा जाती और भी अच्छा लगता|
दिल के किसी कोने को आज भी तुमसे प्यार है|
इससे आगे की पंक्तियों को इस प्रकार आगे बढाया जा सकता था

हमे भी बताओ,तुम्हे किसका इंतजार है
ढूँढ कर लाये उसे,वो कौन गुनाहगार है

आर के रस्तोगी
Thank you. Nice lines. Will keep in mind.
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