intezaar

by heena i.s on March 01, 2011, 07:23:17 PM
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yu to khud hi tujhe door jaane ko kehte hai
par tahnahi me na jaane q rote hai
yu to mehfil me sab ko hasate hai
par akele me aansu nahi rukte hai
tere liye saara jahan chodenge hum
par jaane ko keh ke tera INTEZAAR karte hai
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«Reply #1 on: March 01, 2011, 08:26:26 PM »
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ye to aapne mera nature likh dia sad5
daad nhi dunga mai bas.
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«Reply #2 on: March 02, 2011, 12:48:47 PM »
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q aap ko achi nhi lagi ye lines
q daad nhi denge?
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«Reply #3 on: March 02, 2011, 01:01:51 PM »
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khoobsurat lines he heena ji.........

ese hi likhtey rahiye.....keep it up
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«Reply #4 on: March 02, 2011, 01:21:30 PM »
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daad kya du bhala.
iss post ki keemat mujhse jada koi nhi samjh sakta!
aap khud bhi nhi heena ji.
dekhne ko chand lines hain wo bhi halke se shabd liye--lekin kisi ki poori kahani chipi hai in lines me.
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«Reply #5 on: March 02, 2011, 01:39:36 PM »
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ji yehi meri bhi kahani hai
infact aisa abhi chal raha hai meri life me
isliye ye lines likhi hai
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«Reply #6 on: March 02, 2011, 01:59:35 PM »
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hmm---
ya to sambhal lijiye ya fir sambhal jaiye.
inn baato me khud ko aur na uljhaiye.
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«Reply #7 on: March 02, 2011, 02:09:32 PM »
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bht accha likha hai heena....keep writing dear
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«Reply #8 on: March 02, 2011, 11:04:59 PM »
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Bahut Khub Heena JI
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