Jagtaa hoon mein akeilaa; bas, raat jag rahee hai!

by abdbundeli on August 02, 2008, 07:54:52 PM

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Jagtaa hun mein akeilaa; bas, raat jag rahee hai!
Yeh nisf chaandnee, haan, hamkhwaab lag rahee hai!
Khaamosh hai magar kyun? Boley: sunuun, sunaauun!
Yeh kaayinaat, tum bin, is dil ko thag rahee hai?

- abd bundeli


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Roja

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Re: Jagtaa hoon mein akeilaa; bas, raat jag rahee hai!

«Reply #1 on: August 02, 2008, 07:59:24 PM »

Quote from: abdbundeli on August 02, 2008, 07:54:52 PM

'Jagtaa hoon mein akeilaa; bas, raat jag rahee hai!
Yeh nisf chaandnee, haan, hamkhwaab lag rahee hai!
Khaamosh hai magar kyoun? Boley: sunoon, sunaauun!
Yeh kaayinaat, tum bin, is dil ko thag rahee hai?'

- abd bundeli

Very good


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Re: Jagtaa hoon mein akeilaa; bas, raat jag rahee hai!

«Reply #2 on: April 30, 2009, 09:32:44 AM »

Quote from: Roja on August 02, 2008, 07:59:24 PM

Very good

Thanks Roja ji!
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Re: Jagtaa hoon mein akeilaa; bas, raat jag rahee hai!

«Reply #3 on: April 30, 2009, 09:40:17 AM »

bahoot khoob Abd ji


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Re: Jagtaa hoon mein akeilaa; bas, raat jag rahee hai!

«Reply #4 on: April 30, 2009, 09:45:35 AM »

Bahut Khoob Sahebji..


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Re: Jagtaa hoon mein akeilaa; bas, raat jag rahee hai!

«Reply #5 on: April 30, 2009, 09:46:17 AM »

Quote from: Pooja on April 30, 2009, 09:40:17 AM

bahoot khoob Abd ji

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Re: Jagtaa hoon mein akeilaa; bas, raat jag rahee hai!

«Reply #6 on: April 30, 2009, 09:47:16 AM »

Quote from: khwaish on April 30, 2009, 09:45:35 AM

Bahut Khoob Sahebji..

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Deepati

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Re: Jagtaa hoon mein akeilaa; bas, raat jag rahee hai!

«Reply #7 on: April 30, 2009, 09:55:50 AM »

Very nice lines, Abd Ji Applause


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abdbundeli

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Re: Jagtaa hoon mein akeilaa; bas, raat jag rahee hai!

«Reply #8 on: April 30, 2009, 12:35:21 PM »

Quote from: Deepati on April 30, 2009, 09:55:50 AM

Very nice lines, Abd Ji Applause

Lot of thanks Deepati!
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Re: Jagtaa hoon mein akeilaa; bas, raat jag rahee hai!

«Reply #9 on: April 30, 2009, 07:31:04 PM »

Quote from: abdbundeli on August 02, 2008, 07:54:52 PM

bahut khoob janab... bahut hi khoob........


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Re: Jagtaa hoon mein akeilaa; bas, raat jag rahee hai!

«Reply #10 on: April 30, 2009, 10:03:48 PM »

Quote from: vikas2210 on April 30, 2009, 07:31:04 PM

bahut khoob janab... bahut hi khoob........

Shukriyah vikas2210 ji!
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