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<>*Kahin durr chali jaun main*<>
kya karun gar khudko hi na sambhal paun main
dar lagta hai khudki nazarse hi na gir jaun main....
thhamkar hath uska yahan tak to aa hi gai hun
kaash uss chaand tak ab to pahunch jaun main...
bhatakti rahi hun har gali har dariche pe main
jii karta hai aaj is chauraahe pe hi ruk jaun main...
na manzil ho meri na kahin jane ka rasta hi rahe
har ek kadam me sirf teri taraf hi badhti jaun main...
thaam lena hath aur rok lena kadam mere ae jaan
jo tujhse bichhadkar kahin durr chali jaun main...!!!
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«Reply #1 on: July 27, 2011, 12:58:46 PM » |
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«Reply #2 on: July 27, 2011, 01:02:42 PM » |
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me waiting for ur reply khwaish ji
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«Reply #3 on: July 27, 2011, 01:08:11 PM » |
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good poetry
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«Reply #4 on: July 27, 2011, 01:14:30 PM » |
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Khud Ko Aakhir inn sawaalo mein Uljaahte Kyon Ho
Jo Naseeb mein Naa Ho usse Phir Chaahte Kyon Ho..
Hai Mumkin Yeh bhi Ke,Kuch Kadam Hi Hum saath Chal Sake
Phir Judaai Ke Darr se Aakhir Itna Ghabrate Kyon Ho
Kisi Raah par Rukhne Se Safar To Nahi Rukhta!!
Baar-Baar Khud Ko Aakhir Aazmaate Kyon Ho
Hum Milne Se pehle kahin Juda Naa Ho Jaaye!!!
Dard Dil Mein Hi Rakhkar Muskuraate Kyon Ho
"Khwaish" Kuch Rishte Ehsaas Ke Dam Par Zinda Hai!!
Bichadne Ka Gar darr Hai To Rishto Ko Nibhaate Kyon Ho
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«Reply #5 on: July 27, 2011, 06:15:15 PM » |
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<>*Kahin durr chali jaun main*<>
kya karun gar khudko hi na sambhal paun main
dar lagta hai khudki nazarse hi na gir jaun main....
thhamkar hath uska yahan tak to aa hi gai hun
kaash uss chaand tak ab to pahunch jaun main...
bhatakti rahi hun har gali har dariche pe main
jii karta hai aaj is chauraahe pe hi ruk jaun main...
na manzil ho meri na kahin jane ka rasta hi rahe
har ek kadam me sirf teri taraf hi badhti jaun main...
thaam lena hath aur rok lena kadam mere ae jaan
jo tujhse bichhadkar kahin durr chali jaun main...!!!
Bahut khoob aur bahut shukriya kasak ji apne in lafzo ki post karne k liye... |
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«Reply #6 on: July 27, 2011, 06:18:57 PM » |
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Khud Ko Aakhir inn sawaalo mein Uljaahte Kyon Ho
Jo Naseeb mein Naa Ho usse Phir Chaahte Kyon Ho..
Hai Mumkin Yeh bhi Ke,Kuch Kadam Hi Hum saath Chal Sake
Phir Judaai Ke Darr se Aakhir Itna Ghabrate Kyon Ho
Kisi Raah par Rukhne Se Safar To Nahi Rukhta!!
Baar-Baar Khud Ko Aakhir Aazmaate Kyon Ho
Hum Milne Se pehle kahin Juda Naa Ho Jaaye!!!
Dard Dil Mein Hi Rakhkar Muskuraate Kyon Ho
"Khwaish" Kuch Rishte Ehsaas Ke Dam Par Zinda Hai!!
Bichadne Ka Gar darr Hai To Rishto Ko Nibhaate Kyon Ho
Bahut wadiya khwaish ji.. |
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«Reply #7 on: July 27, 2011, 06:31:24 PM » |
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isss lajawaab post par mai bhi kuch arz karna chahunga--
agar izazat mile to
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«Reply #8 on: July 27, 2011, 07:20:49 PM » |
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kasak ji... phir wahi kasak uthne lagi hai dil me aapki peshkash ko padh ke... bas yunhi milte rehiye... aate rehiye... bahut khub... bahut khubsurat peshkash...
Intezar !
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«Reply #10 on: July 28, 2011, 04:51:43 AM » |
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«Reply #11 on: July 28, 2011, 04:52:20 AM » |
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Bahut khoob aur bahut shukriya kasak ji apne in lafzo ki post karne k liye...
thnx geet k tumne pasand kiye mere alfaaz aur ehsaas |
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«Reply #12 on: July 28, 2011, 04:53:14 AM » |
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isss lajawaab post par mai bhi kuch arz karna chahunga--
agar izazat mile to
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doston ko ijaazat ki zarurat kabse padne lagi kuch kehne k liye sarfira ji....hume aapke ehsaason ka aur shabdon ka intezar rahega...... |
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«Reply #13 on: July 28, 2011, 04:54:13 AM » |
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kasak ji... phir wahi kasak uthne lagi hai dil me aapki peshkash ko padh ke... bas yunhi milte rehiye... aate rehiye... bahut khub... bahut khubsurat peshkash...
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intezar ji...aapke dil me uthi kasak ko humne abhi padha ..lajawab creation rahi aapki.....aapne sath diya hai hamesha yunhin sath rahiyega |
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«Reply #14 on: July 28, 2011, 04:54:57 AM » |
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Anamika di, Behad khubsoorat kalam likha hai apne.. Bahaut bahaut khoob..Dil se daad..  Khwaish dost, Kya baat hai..Zindagi ko lavz diye hai apne.. Akhri shaer sab par bhari raha.. Dil dil se daad.. bhaai rahim bht bht shukriya jo iss koshish ko tumne pasand kiya ...yunhi sath dena hamesha......God bless u bhai |
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