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by klaskar on August 11, 2010, 09:13:07 AM
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khaamoshi ho tum agar tumhaari awaaz ban jaun main,
lehren ho tum agar tumhaara saahil ban jaun main,

toofaan koi agar aa bhi jaaye darna na tum kabhi,
rok loon toofaano ko tumhaari dhaal ban jaun main,

andheri ho raat agar chiraag ban jal jaun main,
maut bhi aaye agar tumse pehle mit jaun main,

thaam lo ye haath aaj aetbaar ban jaun main,
seene se lag jao mere ki pyaar ban jaun main,

aansoo bhi aa jaayen kabhi yaad kar lena mujhe,
har ghum ko tumhaare mitaake muskaan ban jaun main,

chalti ho kahin tum agar parchhayi ban jaun main,
rago me bas jaun tumhaare zindagi ban jaun main....


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«Reply #1 on: August 11, 2010, 10:04:44 AM »
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Wow Klaskar ji,very romantic and heart touching cretion.bahut hi khoob,excellent icon_salut icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: August 11, 2010, 01:29:53 PM »
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wakai me kya khubsurat feelings and words liye hain klaskar ji apne...

yad hai aapne ek bar kaha tha k aap kavi nahin hai ..
sirf jo dil me aata hai wo shabdon k jariye kavitaon k jariye kehne ki koshish karte hain...

lekin ab dekhiye....kya ab bhi aap yehi kahenge k aap kavi nahin hain...
koi kavi nahin hota...bas feelings use kavi bana deti hain...
aur unn feelings ko jab aap lay badh tarike se likh lo wo kavita ya gazal ban jati hai...
aur aap badi khubi se ye karte hai...

apni kavitain padhiyega aap khud hi khush ho jayenge ji....

aapki last ki kuch poems maine apne collection me rakh li hai..
hope u dont mind...

thnx for such lovely poems....
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«Reply #3 on: August 11, 2010, 01:45:57 PM »
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Mohobat bhari, badi khubsoorat peshkash hai yeh Kapil Dost..mujhe unn dinon ki yaad dilati hai jab main bhi yehi kuch kehta tha..Khair, maza aya parrke..!

Sach kaha Anamika di ne, Ap bahaut ache kavi hai..

Likte rahiye..!

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«Reply #4 on: August 11, 2010, 03:24:17 PM »
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Romaantic ehsason ka ati sunder varnan........kapilji.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Tum chalo jis raah parchhayi ban saath chalunga.........bahut sunder khayaal hai.....sahi arth me kalakaar hain aap....


khaamoshi ho tum agar tumhaari awaaz ban jaun main,
lehren ho tum agar tumhaara saahil ban jaun main,

toofaan koi agar aa bhi jaaye darna na tum kabhi,
rok loon toofaano ko tumhaari dhaal ban jaun main,

andheri ho raat agar chiraag ban jal jaun main,
maut bhi aaye agar tumse pehle mit jaun main,

thaam lo ye haath aaj aetbaar ban jaun main,
seene se lag jao mere ki pyaar ban jaun main,

aansoo bhi aa jaayen kabhi yaad kar lena mujhe,
har ghum ko tumhaare mitaake muskaan ban jaun main,

chalti ho kahin tum agar parchhayi ban jaun main,
rago me bas jaun tumhaare zindagi ban jaun main....


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«Reply #5 on: August 12, 2010, 12:11:45 PM »
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bahot bahot khoob kapil ji....  Clapping Smiley  Applause


Dil ho tum to dhadkan ban jaun me,
suraj ho tum to kiran ban jaun me,
pani ho tum to machhli ban jaun me,
thaam jo agar tum mera hath to zindgi bhar ke liye hamsafar ban jaun me....
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«Reply #6 on: August 12, 2010, 12:25:50 PM »
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Lo kapil ji thaam lo haath....
Ess-se achha birthday present kya hoga.... Winking Winking Winking Winking Winking Winking Winking


bahot bahot khoob kapil ji....  Clapping Smiley  Applause


Dil ho tum to dhadkan ban jaun me,
suraj ho tum to kiran ban jaun me,
pani ho tum to machhli ban jaun me,
thaam jo agar tum mera hath to zindgi bhar ke liye hamsafar ban jaun me....
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«Reply #7 on: August 15, 2010, 08:39:33 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Madhu ji....!!!

Wow Klaskar ji,very romantic and heart touching cretion.bahut hi khoob,excellent icon_salut icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: August 16, 2010, 12:59:50 PM »
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main itne din se aapke is post ka jawaab nahi de raha tha... ab tak samajh nahi aaya kya likhun... aapne mere liye itna kuch likh diya ki main to bas aapke in baaton me hi kho gaya... aur haan maine padha bhi isi poem ko fir se kai baar... achcha laga...

ye to main aaj bhi kehta hoon ki main koi kavi nahi hoon... bas kuch shabd jod ke kuch kuch likh leta hoon... upar se aap jaise achche shayar aur shayaraon ki lekhni padhke kuch kuch sikhne aur fir likhne ki koshish karta hoon...

ye to mere liye bahut khushi ki baat hai ki aapko meri poems itni achchi lagi ki aapne collecton me rakha unhe... mujhe bura kyun lagega bhala balki mujhe to bahut achcha laga ki meri kavita ko koi itni pasand kar sakti hai... bas aapka yunhi saath milta raha to koshish karenge kuch na kuch likhne ki...

main dil se aapka shukriya adaa karta hoon... thanx a lot Kasak ji....!!!


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wakai me kya khubsurat feelings and words liye hain klaskar ji apne...

yad hai aapne ek bar kaha tha k aap kavi nahin hai ..
sirf jo dil me aata hai wo shabdon k jariye kavitaon k jariye kehne ki koshish karte hain...

lekin ab dekhiye....kya ab bhi aap yehi kahenge k aap kavi nahin hain...
koi kavi nahin hota...bas feelings use kavi bana deti hain...
aur unn feelings ko jab aap lay badh tarike se likh lo wo kavita ya gazal ban jati hai...
aur aap badi khubi se ye karte hai...

apni kavitain padhiyega aap khud hi khush ho jayenge ji....

aapki last ki kuch poems maine apne collection me rakh li hai..
hope u dont mind...

thnx for such lovely poems....

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«Reply #9 on: August 16, 2010, 01:10:30 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya aapka Rahim bhai... main tahe dil se aapka shukriya adaa karta hoon....!!!

Mohobat bhari, badi khubsoorat peshkash hai yeh Kapil Dost..mujhe unn dinon ki yaad dilati hai jab main bhi yehi kuch kehta tha..Khair, maza aya parrke..!

Sach kaha Anamika di ne, Ap bahaut ache kavi hai..

Likte rahiye..!

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #10 on: August 16, 2010, 01:12:27 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Koyal ji... main dil se aapka shukiya adaa karta hoon.... aur main koi kalakaar nahi hoon sarkar... humein itni izzat dene ke liye bahut bahut shukriya...!!!

Romaantic ehsason ka ati sunder varnan........kapilji.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Tum chalo jis raah parchhayi ban saath chalunga.........bahut sunder khayaal hai.....sahi arth me kalakaar hain aap....


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«Reply #11 on: August 16, 2010, 01:15:03 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Devangi ji...!!!

dhadkano ke bina dil ka kya wajoob,
kiran bina suraj kis kaam ka,
paani bina machhli ka jeewan kya,
aur tum bin hamaara wajood hi kya...
bahot bahot khoob kapil ji....  Clapping Smiley  Applause


Dil ho tum to dhadkan ban jaun me,
suraj ho tum to kiran ban jaun me,
pani ho tum to machhli ban jaun me,
thaam jo agar tum mera hath to zindgi bhar ke liye hamsafar ban jaun me....
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«Reply #12 on: August 16, 2010, 01:15:52 PM »
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shukriya Koyal ji... sach kahaa aapne isse achcha B'Day gift kya ho sakta hai... Usual Smile

Lo kapil ji thaam lo haath....
Ess-se achha birthday present kya hoga.... Winking Winking Winking Winking Winking Winking Winking


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«Reply #13 on: August 16, 2010, 01:27:46 PM »
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Dil to dhadkata hi tha tere liye,
par kabhi tuje fursat na mili wajood mehsus karne ki..


bahut bahut shukriya Devangi ji...!!!

dhadkano ke bina dil ka kya wajoob,
kiran bina suraj kis kaam ka,
paani bina machhli ka jeewan kya,
aur tum bin hamaara wajood hi kya...
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«Reply #14 on: August 16, 2010, 01:31:29 PM »
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Wo Pyar Jo Haqikat Me Pyar Hota Hai,
Zindagi Me Sirf Ek Baar Hota Hai..

Nigaho Ke MiLte MiLte DiL MiL Jaye,
Ye Ittefaq Zindagi Me Sirf Ek Baar Hota Hai..
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