Khamosh sada..........<Sona>

by neelgold on September 13, 2010, 11:32:52 PM
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Aah jao ke yaad tumari aati hai
is khamosh dil pe ek badli si cha jati hai
intzaar kar rehe hai har pal tumara
aah jao ab to jaan bi nikli jati hai................

Dil ka chain aur sakun tum hi ho
kaise bataye ki ab yeh neend bi udhi jati hai
Ashq bi jum gaye hai ab in ankoin main
aah jao ab to inki lo bi buzi jati hai.............

Kaise yeh dil ka dard poonche tum tak
Har aah bi ab sard hui jati hai
Khamosh dil ki sada sun le khud hi tu
Aah jao ab to saans bi ruki jati hai.................



...................Sona...................
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«Reply #1 on: September 14, 2010, 03:23:54 AM »
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI      NEELGOLD JI.....

CHUP RAHEKAR BHI BAHUT KUCH KAHE JAATI HAI, MERE DIL KI "KHAMOSH SADA"
KE BIN TERE HUM RAHE NAHI PATE HAI, KI AAJA TU HI HAI MERE JEENE KI WAJAH.....
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«Reply #2 on: September 14, 2010, 04:21:17 AM »
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waahhhhhh neel ji waahhhh.....kya khubbb kaha hai aapne...
itne pyaar se bulayengi to kaun bhala ruk payega...
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«Reply #3 on: September 14, 2010, 08:48:00 AM »
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bahut khoob likha hai aapne Neel ji... Applause Applause Applause

na karo khud ko bekaraar itna ki saansen tham jaayen,
na karo humse pyaar itna ki hamaari aakhen nam ho jaayen,

pyaar to humne bhi kiya hai jaan se badhke tumse,
par is tarha tum izhaar na karo ki raahen tham jaayen,

milne ki tamanna tumse hamaari bhi hain meri jaana,
par is tarha tum intezaar na karo ki ghadiyaan tham jaayen...
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«Reply #4 on: September 14, 2010, 08:51:28 AM »
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Neel dost, bahaut khubsoorati se likha hai apne..Bahaut ache..

Kapil dost, kya jawab diya hai apne..Behad khubsoorat jawab..

Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: September 14, 2010, 09:24:46 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Rahim bhai....!!!

Quote from: -Rahim- on September 14, 2010, 08:51:28 AM
Neel dost, bahaut khubsoorati se likha hai apne..Bahaut ache..

Kapil dost, kya jawab diya hai apne..Behad khubsoorat jawab..

Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: September 17, 2010, 11:22:04 PM »
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Tons of Thanx Cara ji for your valueable time & apreciation..

App ne bi bhut khoob kaha hai ji

Jiye to kaise jiye tere bin
sans bi nahi ati hai ,
yeh kaise hai ulzan ......

Quote from: cara on September 14, 2010, 03:23:54 AM
WAH KYA BAAT HAI      NEELGOLD JI.....

CHUP RAHEKAR BHI BAHUT KUCH KAHE JAATI HAI, MERE DIL KI "KHAMOSH SADA"
KE BIN TERE HUM RAHE NAHI PATE HAI, KI AAJA TU HI HAI MERE JEENE KI WAJAH.....
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«Reply #7 on: September 17, 2010, 11:23:16 PM »
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Oh Ho ........... Is it ?

Thanx ji ........... lots of thanx.....

TC

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on September 14, 2010, 04:21:17 AM
waahhhhhh neel ji waahhhh.....kya khubbb kaha hai aapne...
itne pyaar se bulayengi to kaun bhala ruk payega...
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«Reply #8 on: September 17, 2010, 11:26:52 PM »
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Kapil ji kya baat hai

Bhut khoob janab .........

Yaar yeh galat jagh likh diya tumne ... yeh kahin aur jana tha bt i can understand ... kis ke liye hai but jo bi hai bhut khoob kaha.. bt i cnt reply u bak u for dis ......

Thnks ji ....padne ke liye srhane ke liye ...... aur itna khoobsorat reply ke liye ...........

Khush reho

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bahut khoob likha hai aapne Neel ji... Applause Applause Applause

na karo khud ko bekaraar itna ki saansen tham jaayen,
na karo humse pyaar itna ki hamaari aakhen nam ho jaayen,

pyaar to humne bhi kiya hai jaan se badhke tumse,
par is tarha tum izhaar na karo ki raahen tham jaayen,

milne ki tamanna tumse hamaari bhi hain meri jaana,
par is tarha tum intezaar na karo ki ghadiyaan tham jaayen...
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«Reply #9 on: September 17, 2010, 11:28:14 PM »
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shukriya ji..........

& thanks for ur taliyan also ....

Thanks a lot ......... dost ........

Keep smiling !!!!!!!!!!

Quote from: -Rahim- on September 14, 2010, 08:51:28 AM
Neel dost, bahaut khubsoorati se likha hai apne..Bahaut ache..

Kapil dost, kya jawab diya hai apne..Behad khubsoorat jawab..

Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: September 18, 2010, 12:58:48 AM »
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heheheh... usko yahan se nahi bol sakta na ... Usual Smile

Quote from: neelgold on September 17, 2010, 11:26:52 PM
Kapil ji kya baat hai

Bhut khoob janab .........

Yaar yeh galat jagh likh diya tumne ... yeh kahin aur jana tha bt i can understand ... kis ke liye hai but jo bi hai bhut khoob kaha.. bt i cnt reply u bak u for dis ......

Thnks ji ....padne ke liye srhane ke liye ...... aur itna khoobsorat reply ke liye ...........

Khush reho

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«Reply #11 on: September 19, 2010, 06:36:39 AM »
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Realy a nyc poem Neel ji. I lyk dis wondrfl  n amazing poem. Keep riting.
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«Reply #12 on: September 20, 2010, 10:26:05 PM »
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Thanks a lot Shihab ji

Bhut danyavaad aapka

Quote from: Shihab on September 18, 2010, 02:21:47 AM
Bahut Khub Likha Hai Aapne Neelgold Ji
Aur Janaab Cara Ji Aur Klaskar Ji Aapne
Dono Ne Bhi Inka Achcha Saath Diya Hasi.


Khush Rahiye...


~Shihab~
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«Reply #13 on: September 20, 2010, 10:27:19 PM »
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Hey Riayz Thanks a lot ....

Really thanks

Quote from: riyaz106 on September 19, 2010, 06:36:39 AM
Realy a nyc poem Neel ji. I lyk dis wondrfl  n amazing poem. Keep riting.
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«Reply #14 on: September 20, 2010, 10:42:46 PM »
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Neel Jee Aadaab!

Kia kaheN ahsaas o khayaal bahut touchi hai...
Aise kalaam padhkar kabhi kabhi bahut achcha
mehsus hota hai... aur aaj sach meiN achcha
mehsus hua aapki kalaam padhkar.... Daad Kabool
Kijiye....

Klaskar jee aapne bahut khoob reply kiya hai
Janab... kafi close though's hai and behad sahiN
Hai daad

Aise hi likhate rahiye.....
Khush rahiye....
Khuda Hafez..... Usual Smile     
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