Kis galee sey teyrey dar par pahunchoon?

by abdbundeli on August 09, 2008, 02:43:19 AM
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 Mein tumhain chaahtaa to hoon, Mahboob!
 Tum sey milney, magar, kahaan aauun?
 Kis galee sey teyrey dar par pahunchoon?
 Ab, 'abd', jaauun to, kahaan jaauun?'

                       - abd bundeli

                          
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«Reply #1 on: September 03, 2012, 08:33:52 PM »
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1st reply ... Nice...
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«Reply #2 on: September 04, 2012, 05:09:26 AM »
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1st reply ... Nice...

Thanks 'friendyz'!
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«Reply #3 on: September 05, 2012, 01:03:25 AM »
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 Mein tumhain chaahtaa to hoon, Mahboob!
 Tum sey milney, magar, kahaan aauun?
 Kis galee sey teyrey dar par pahunchoon?
 Ab, 'abd', jaauun to, kahaan jaauun?'

                       - abd bundeli

                           

wah wah abdbundeli jee bahut khoob  Thumbs UP

Ab gam na likhna ... na mujhse milne ki chah rakhna
Hai manjur mujhko tumse bichadna
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«Reply #4 on: September 05, 2012, 05:44:01 AM »
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wah wah abdbundeli jee bahut khoob  Thumbs UP

Ab gam na likhna ... na mujhse milne ki chah rakhna
Hai manjur mujhko tumse bichadna


Shukriyah, Suman ji! Bahut-bahut shukriyah!

Chaah jaaree raheygee dahroun tak;
Yeh koyi aik din kee baat naheen!
Jaagnaa hai tamaam saharoun tak;
Yeh koyi aik shab kee baat naheen!!

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«Reply #5 on: September 05, 2012, 04:51:56 PM »
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Shukriyah, Suman ji! Bahut-bahut shukriyah!

Chaah jaaree raheygee dahroun tak;
Yeh koyi aik din kee baat naheen!
Jaagnaa hai tamaam saharoun tak;
Yeh koyi aik shab kee baat naheen!!

              - abd bundeli

 Applause Applause

zamana jalta hai jab do dil milte hain,
dono hii tadapte hain jab dil juda hote hain.
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«Reply #6 on: September 06, 2012, 05:45:12 AM »
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Applause Applause

zamana jalta hai jab do dil milte hain,
dono hii tadapte hain jab dil juda hote hain.

Suman ji!

Bichhurhan-milan, janam-maran,
Satat niyati key kheyl!
Meethey din fir aayengey;
Abhee wirah lo jheyl!

    Ramwatiya / abd bundeli
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«Reply #7 on: September 06, 2012, 11:41:19 AM »
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bohat khoob.....
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abdbundeli
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«Reply #8 on: September 06, 2012, 01:09:39 PM »
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bohat khoob.....

Shukriyah, 'laaiba' ji!
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«Reply #9 on: September 06, 2012, 03:15:04 PM »
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Suman ji!

Bichhurhan-milan, janam-maran,
Satat niyati key kheyl!
Meethey din fir aayengey;
Abhee wirah lo jheyl!

    Ramwatiya / abd bundeli

woww beautiful  Usual Smile

Pyar ki kasmein kabhi nibhayi hoti
Meri tasvir nighahon mein bhasayi hoti..!!
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«Reply #10 on: September 06, 2012, 03:18:17 PM »
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very nice
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«Reply #11 on: September 07, 2012, 05:08:37 AM »
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woww beautiful  Usual Smile

Pyar ki kasmein kabhi nibhayi hoti
Meri tasvir nighahon mein bhasayi hoti..!!
Suman ji!
Baarahaa roz-roz, kab talak duaa dogee?
Tarhap, tarhap hai, bhaley hee ho kisee ney bhogee!
Dooriyaan, yuun hi miteyngeen naheen; pahal kariye!
Nazar, nazar sey mileygee tabhee sulah hogee!!


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«Reply #12 on: September 07, 2012, 05:10:37 AM »
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very nice

Thanks!
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«Reply #13 on: September 09, 2012, 12:27:21 AM »
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Suman ji!
Baarahaa roz-roz, kab talak duaa dogee?
Tarhap, tarhap hai, bhaley hee ho kisee ney bhogee!
Dooriyaan, yuun hi miteyngeen naheen; pahal kariye!
Nazar, nazar sey mileygee tabhee sulah hogee!!


               - abd bundeli


 Thumbs UP Usual Smile

ABD ji

Nahi jahan mein nadaan koyi humsa bhi
Wafa ke naam per bekaar dil dukha baite..!!  tongue3
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«Reply #14 on: September 09, 2012, 05:49:27 AM »
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ABD ji

Nahi jahan mein nadaan koyi humsa bhi
Wafa ke naam per bekaar dil dukha baite..!!  tongue3

Suman ji!
Guloun pai daaliye nazar to khushee miltee hai!
Kabhee key wasl key khwaaboun sey khushee miltee hai!
Log to log hain: majbooriyaan hain, waa'dey hain!
Yaad kar guzarey huye kal ko khushee miltee hai!!

Iseeliye, yahee beyhtar hai, bhalaa yaad rahey!
Dard to dard hai, fir chaahey usey koyi sahey!!


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