Kyun bewafa ho gaya hai...

by brokenbyluv on July 06, 2010, 05:50:53 PM
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Tu jane kyun mujhse khafa ho gaya hai,
kyun tu achanak bewafa ho gaya hai,

aesi kya galti kar di hai maine jo tu mujhse juda ho gaya hai,
kyun tu achanak bewafa ho gaya hai,

terri maujudgi k bina tanhai ka lamha bepanah ho gaya hai,
kyun tu achanak bewafa ho gaya hai,

merre rote hue dil ka ab tou ye sawan bhi gawah ho gaya hai,
kyun tu achanak bewafa ho gaya hai,

merri mhbt k baad ab tou waqt ka bhi imtihaan ho gaya hai,
kyun tu achanak bewafa ho gaya hai,

aur mat azma meri chaht ko terre intezar mein merra chain-o-sukoon tak qurban ho gaya hai,
kyun tu achanak bewafa ho gaya hai.........
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«Reply #1 on: July 07, 2010, 06:53:55 AM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahut sundar kavita likhi hai aapne Geet ji... bahut khoob likha hai...!!!
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«Reply #2 on: July 07, 2010, 02:10:23 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya kapil ji...
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«Reply #3 on: July 07, 2010, 02:39:57 PM »
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Itni saari shikaayatein....
Wo bhee apne Ajnabee se...
touba-touba....kya andaaj hai Geet-di.... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Tujhe chidaane ka ye bhee usska naya andaaj hai
Ismai bhee usski mohbbat ka ek naya paigaam hai


Tu jane kyun mujhse khafa ho gaya hai,
kyun tu achanak bewafa ho gaya hai,

aesi kya galti kar di hai maine jo tu mujhse juda ho gaya hai,
kyun tu achanak bewafa ho gaya hai,

terri maujudgi k bina tanhai ka lamha bepanah ho gaya hai,
kyun tu achanak bewafa ho gaya hai,

merre rote hue dil ka ab tou ye sawan bhi gawah ho gaya hai,
kyun tu achanak bewafa ho gaya hai,

merri mhbt k baad ab tou waqt ka bhi imtihaan ho gaya hai,
kyun tu achanak bewafa ho gaya hai,

aur mat azma meri chaht ko terre intezar mein merra chain-o-sukoon tak qurban ho gaya hai,
kyun tu achanak bewafa ho gaya hai.........

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«Reply #4 on: July 07, 2010, 03:04:30 PM »
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kayi baar shikayato ka silsila kuch zayada hi badh jata hai...khair thnx alot for ur comment n lovely lines...
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«Reply #5 on: July 07, 2010, 03:48:32 PM »
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Dil choo gayi apki yeh peshkash...bahaut khoob..bahaut khubsoorati se likha hai apne Geet jee... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

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«Reply #6 on: July 07, 2010, 03:56:38 PM »
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Itni saari shikaayatein....
Wo bhee apne Ajnabee se...
touba-touba....kya andaaj hai Geet-di.... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Tujhe chidaane ka ye bhee usska naya andaaj hai
Ismai bhee usski mohbbat ka ek naya paigaam hai


Koyal di, shikayatein toh sabhi ko hoti hai na...
apko bhi hongi...
Iss baat par ek gana yaad agaya...Shikayat hai mujhko shikayat hai-movie[jism]..bahaut khubsoorat gana hai..

Mujhe us'se bas itni si shikayat hai Rahim,
Mohobat mujse karta hai toh dusron ki baahon main kyun rehta hai woh har pal...
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«Reply #7 on: July 08, 2010, 05:23:08 AM »
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Bahut sundar peshkash hai Geet Ji
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«Reply #8 on: July 08, 2010, 04:34:41 PM »
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bahut bahut shurkiya rahiim ji aur rajesh ji...
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«Reply #9 on: July 09, 2010, 04:32:26 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya shihab ji apki khubsurat shayari k liye...aur shukriya ki apko merri lekhi pasand aayi...khuda apko salamat rakhe..ameen...
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«Reply #10 on: July 11, 2010, 11:54:01 AM »
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Ur welcome shihabji...
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