Ounth tak aayaa huaa jaam, 'abd', phoot gayaa!!

by abdbundeli on June 25, 2009, 08:11:42 AM
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Jis ney chaahaa thaa hamain, woh hi kaheen chhoot gayaa!
Rishtah-e-khaas, pataa hi na chalaa, toot gayaa!
Phir mileyngey zaroor zald hi, safar hai yeh;
Ounth tak aayaa huaa jaam, 'abd', phoot gayaa!!

                                           - abd bundeli
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«Reply #1 on: June 25, 2009, 08:35:48 AM »
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Wah wah Abd ji,kamaal ka likha aapne,bahut khoob, Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley :clapping:excellent.
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«Reply #2 on: June 25, 2009, 11:35:36 AM »
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Bohot khoob Babu Ji
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«Reply #3 on: June 25, 2009, 11:40:43 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on June 25, 2009, 08:11:42 AM

Jis ney chaahaa thaa hamain, woh hi kaheen chhoot gayaa!
Rishtah-e-khaas, pataa hi na chalaa, toot gayaa!
Phir mileyngey zaroor zald hi, safar hai yeh;
Ounth tak aayaa huaa jaam, 'abd', phoot gayaa!!

                                           - abd bundeli


Wah wah ... Applause
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«Reply #4 on: June 25, 2009, 11:49:14 AM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on June 25, 2009, 08:35:48 AM
Wah wah Abd ji,kamaal ka likha aapne,bahut khoob, Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley :clapping:excellent.

Thanks a lot Madhu!
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«Reply #5 on: June 25, 2009, 11:50:24 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on June 25, 2009, 11:35:36 AM
Bohot khoob Babu Ji

Thanks a lot Celmira!
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Quote from: Roja on June 25, 2009, 11:40:43 AM
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Thanks a lot Roja!
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«Reply #7 on: June 25, 2009, 11:54:15 AM »
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Welcome dear Uncle ji... Kuch mai b likhna chaha but waqt nahi. fir kabhi likhungi  Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: June 27, 2009, 06:02:13 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on June 25, 2009, 11:54:15 AM
Welcome dear Uncle ji... Kuch mai b likhna chaha but waqt nahi. fir kabhi likhungi  Usual Smile
Thanks Roja! Jab waqt miley tab likhnaa: mujhey intizaar raheygaa!
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