Raat aati hai lekar...

by daljeet_faqeer on February 06, 2010, 06:47:33 PM
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Raat aati hai lekar tanhai ka ehsaas,
bahut rulata hai mujhe unki bewafai ka ehsaas.

Chhod de 'faqeer' yun ghut ghutke marna,
kab talak lekar jeeyega ye ruswai ka ehsaas.

Apna daaman mohabbat mein yun jalaa liya,
dil ke zakhm kholte hain us harjai ka ehsaas.

Bahut beabroo hokar uske kuche se hum nikle,
mujhko maar dalega ye teri judaai ka ehsaas.

Us shaks ke naam ki mehndi haathon mein lagakar,
humein tanha chhod gaye dekar bidaai ka ehsaas.


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«Reply #1 on: February 06, 2010, 08:03:19 PM »
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bahot baot hi dard he is ghazal me.

awesome........

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«Reply #2 on: February 07, 2010, 09:32:25 PM »
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Bahut Khub Daljeet Sahab
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«Reply #3 on: February 09, 2010, 12:12:27 PM »
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Nice creation hai Daljeet Ji. Very beatiful.
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«Reply #4 on: February 09, 2010, 01:36:47 PM »
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Wah bahut khoob Daljeet ji.mindblowing creation.excellent
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