Phir wohi raat ayi hai teri yaad lekar

by dhadkan on February 17, 2005, 11:57:48 AM
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Phir wohi raat ayi hai teri yaad lekar,
Khwab bhi ate nahi tujhe saath lekar,
Ashq bhi beh rahe hai sirf tera hi naam lekar,
Ab to chand bhi hans raha hai meri bebasi dekhkar..
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«Reply #1 on: February 17, 2005, 12:31:18 PM »
what is this???

howw can chand giv hansi?Huh? thts way too weird!
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«Reply #2 on: February 17, 2005, 01:13:21 PM »
Dear Priya,

This is just an imagination. I think u dont understand wat peoms r meant for. They r just the feelings of the writer.
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«Reply #3 on: February 21, 2005, 12:16:53 PM »
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Phir wohi raat ayi hai teri yaad lekar,
Khwab bhi ate nahi tujhe saath lekar,
Ashq bhi beh rahe hai sirf tera hi naam lekar,
Ab to chand bhi hans raha hai meri bebasi dekhkar..
subhan allah
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«Reply #4 on: February 21, 2005, 06:43:58 PM »
Dhadkan,

You talk like a 13 year school going girl. Let me correct you,

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Dear Priya,

This is just an imagination. I think you dont understand wat peoms r meant for. They r just the feelings of the writer.


Dear Priya,

This is just an imagination. I think, you don't understand what poems are meant for. They are just the feelings of the writer.

Please improve your english.
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«Reply #5 on: February 21, 2005, 06:46:06 PM »
Dhadkan,

Good day to you, Madam.
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«Reply #6 on: February 21, 2005, 11:26:02 PM »
Wahhh Dhadkan.....Buhat acha likha hai....
Priya let me tell u something...u dont have to be rude like this yaar....Plz...If u  dont like her poems..then dont reply...thts all i have to say...Sorry....But it was not nice of u saying like tht...
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«Reply #7 on: February 22, 2005, 01:50:14 AM »
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Phir wohi raat ayi hai teri yaad lekar,
Khwab bhi ate nahi tujhe saath lekar,
Ashq bhi beh rahe hai sirf tera hi naam lekar,
Ab to chand bhi hans raha hai meri bebasi dekhkar..


bhot khub likha  aapne..lekin yh baat kuch jami nhi kyunke chand itna bereham nhi ke auron ke dukh pe huss padega..isee baat pe kuch yaad aya...

log kehte hai ke wah kaisi shabnam chaayi hai....
 unhe kya malum chand ne mere sath roke raat bitaayi hai!!!
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