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« on: July 27, 2005, 09:22:32 AM »


Pukarta hai dil mera,aakar tript isko kar do,
Ek halahal jeewan mera,chukar amrit isko kar do,

Kaise byatit jeewan hogajab man mera ekaki hai,
Sab kuch paya hai jeewan mein,ek tera milna baki hai,

Jeeta hu yu toh main phir bhi,mehfil hai ya tanhai hai,
Tum bin aisa kyu lagta hai,meri na koi parchai hai,

Yeh dishavihin jeewan mera,tu mera paras pathar ban ja,
Bhar le aagosh mein mujko, lohe ko tu kundan kar ja,

Mujhbin tu bhi toh tanha hai, na arth tera hai mere bin,
Kya wajood ho ishwar ka,bhakt na jiske mere jin,

Ab aa bhi ja aye pyar mere, tujhse bas yahi duhai hai,
Phir barsi sawan ki bunden, phir yaad teri hi aayi hai....
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Life is beautiful!!!

Patthar ke khuda,patthar ke sanam,patthar ke hi insaan paye hai,
Tum seher e muhabbat kehte ho,hum jan bacha kar aaye hai.


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« Reply #1 on: July 27, 2005, 09:39:40 AM »

Waah....bohot achcha likha hai Amit... too good.... !!!!!!
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« Reply #2 on: July 27, 2005, 09:51:56 AM »

Thanx a lot Talat ji............i am glad that u liked my creation................................
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Patthar ke khuda,patthar ke sanam,patthar ke hi insaan paye hai,
Tum seher e muhabbat kehte ho,hum jan bacha kar aaye hai.


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« Reply #3 on: July 27, 2005, 12:53:33 PM »

wowwwwwwww creater ji...really nice!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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at pado hal-e-dil mere chehre pe aye dost,
Ansowon ke lafz hai, behe jayenge....
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« Reply #4 on: July 27, 2005, 01:26:36 PM »

very nice thy...............................!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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« Reply #5 on: July 28, 2005, 09:53:43 AM »

Thanx a lot Meena and Nidhi ji..........this i wrote in train on my way home n i am glad u liked it........................ :lol:
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Patthar ke khuda,patthar ke sanam,patthar ke hi insaan paye hai,
Tum seher e muhabbat kehte ho,hum jan bacha kar aaye hai.


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« Reply #6 on: July 29, 2005, 06:45:08 AM »

jiyo.............................................

last line is very nice...
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« Reply #7 on: July 29, 2005, 06:55:59 AM »

Thanx a lot Amrita ji........apko accha laga......i am happy that my efforts have paid off..........;-)
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Patthar ke khuda,patthar ke sanam,patthar ke hi insaan paye hai,
Tum seher e muhabbat kehte ho,hum jan bacha kar aaye hai.


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« Reply #8 on: July 30, 2005, 05:33:45 AM »

oohh hooo...i din know my few words of appreciation mean so much to you amit..found a gf for yourself o wht..??mizaz aaj kal kuch jyaada hi aashiqana hai....

koi samjhaye meri afat-e-jaan ko
  ishq ki TADAP kya hoti hai
ek kabar hai mere pyaar ki
 jis mein mohobbat meri soyi hai

....(i have modified my grandfathers shayeri since i cudnt understand a few urdu words but i think i hav done justice to his shayeri)
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« Reply #9 on: July 30, 2005, 06:02:38 AM »

Quote from: "thycreator"

Pukarta hai dil mera,aakar tript isko kar do,
Ek halahal jeewan mera,chukar amrit isko kar do,

Kaise byatit jeewan hogajab man mera ekaki hai,
Sab kuch paya hai jeewan mein,ek tera milna baki hai,

Jeeta hu yu toh main phir bhi,mehfil hai ya tanhai hai,
Tum bin aisa kyu lagta hai,meri na koi parchai hai,

Yeh dishavihin jeewan mera,tu mera paras pathar ban ja,
Bhar le aagosh mein mujko, lohe ko tu kundan kar ja,

Mujhbin tu bhi toh tanha hai, na arth tera hai mere bin,
Kya wajood ho ishwar ka,bhakt na jiske mere jin,

Ab aa bhi ja aye pyar mere, tujhse bas yahi duhai hai,
Phir barsi sawan ki bunden, phir yaad teri hi aayi hai....


brilliant Thy....bahut hi acha likha hai aapne.....................
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« Reply #10 on: August 01, 2005, 03:01:41 AM »

Thanx a lot Nikki ji..............aur Amrita ji.....mai aur gf..........nahi ji...........shayad apke sath ka asar hai mujhpe ya phir shayad apki aawaz ka.................. ;-).............
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Patthar ke khuda,patthar ke sanam,patthar ke hi insaan paye hai,
Tum seher e muhabbat kehte ho,hum jan bacha kar aaye hai.


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« Reply #11 on: August 01, 2005, 03:10:51 AM »

"Yeh dishavihin jeewan mera,tu mera paras pathar ban ja,Bhar le aagosh mein mujko, lohe ko tu kundan kar ja,

Mujhbin tu bhi toh tanha hai, na arth tera hai mere bin,
Kya wajood ho ishwar ka,bhakt na jiske mere jin, "

just BEAUTIFUL lines!!!!!!!!
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size=13px]Happy moments, praise GOD. Difficult moments,  seek GOD.  Quiet moments,  worship GOD. Painful moments,  trust GOD. Every moment,  THANK GOD.[/size]



Jiss na chot na khayi ho woh chehra kya pehchanega [/b]
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« Reply #12 on: August 01, 2005, 04:14:19 AM »

amit 19th august ko rakhi hai tu mujhe kya de raha hai...??.......................


isha these lines are really very beautiful......
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« Reply #13 on: August 08, 2005, 07:29:35 AM »

Thanx a lot Isha......n Amrita Rakhi hamara festival thode hi hai........lolllzzzzz.....

Tu uss din mujhse na milna aur badle mein jo chahe milega.....lollzzzz
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Patthar ke khuda,patthar ke sanam,patthar ke hi insaan paye hai,
Tum seher e muhabbat kehte ho,hum jan bacha kar aaye hai.


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« Reply #14 on: August 11, 2005, 08:08:31 AM »

Quote from: "thycreator"

Pukarta hai dil mera,aakar tript isko kar do,
Ek halahal jeewan mera,chukar amrit isko kar do,

Kaise byatit jeewan hogajab man mera ekaki hai,
Sab kuch paya hai jeewan mein,ek tera milna baki hai,

Jeeta hu yu toh main phir bhi,mehfil hai ya tanhai hai,
Tum bin aisa kyu lagta hai,meri na koi parchai hai,

Yeh dishavihin jeewan mera,tu mera paras pathar ban ja,
Bhar le aagosh mein mujko, lohe ko tu kundan kar ja,

Mujhbin tu bhi toh tanha hai, na arth tera hai mere bin,
Kya wajood ho ishwar ka,bhakt na jiske mere jin,

Ab aa bhi ja aye pyar mere, tujhse bas yahi duhai hai,
Phir barsi sawan ki bunden, phir yaad teri hi aayi hai....



very good thy creator
nice one keep it up
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samet lo in lamho ke najuk palo ko
kya pata ye pal ho na ho
ye pal ho tobhi, inn palo me
hum ho na ho...........
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