tu hogi mere dil ki raani....

by apriya on December 13, 2010, 05:33:52 AM
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sukh gayi hai aankhien
sukh chuki hai man ki wo daali
mit gayi wo chahat ki bagiya
jis baag ke the tum maali
aankho me aansu rah gaye
aur rah gaya hai dil ye sawali
khamosh hai ye jubaa
aur bolne ko hai ab khamoshi
ye rukhi sard bayar
aur shaswat yaad tumhari
mil kar bichadne ki wo
ghadi dukhdayi
in chand ghadiyo me humne
saari yaadie hai dohrayi
yaado ki bujhti raakh ne
uljhayi baatien saari
na kabile bayan hai
ab to halat ye hamari
us allah ke sajde me jab bhi jhukta hai ye sar
maangte hai hum salamati tumhari
kabhi jo hongi tujhse najre chaar
samajh jaaogi tum baatien saari
sulajh jaayengi uljhane tumhari
dur ho jaayenge saare gile shikwe
yaad aayenge pal wo bhule bisre
sayad
to dikh jaayega tujhe meri aankho ka paani
yaad aayengi tujhko chand baatein purani
sayad puri hogi tab ek adhuri kahani
ban jaaunga mai tere dil ka sehjada
aur to hogi mere dil ki raani...........

ANAND KUMAR"APRIYA"
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«Reply #1 on: December 13, 2010, 05:36:10 AM »
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maaf kijiyega meri har bhul ko
bhaiyo mai kalam ka thoda kachcha hu..
aap puraane lekhako ke saamne
mai abhi bachchha hu....
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«Reply #2 on: December 13, 2010, 11:26:07 AM »
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mai bhi ek bachha hu
    tumhare jaisa hi achha to nhi par sachha hu...!!!
dil ki kitabon me chapi koi tasveer hai
     lafzon me wo taseevr utaru kaise iss kaam me abhi kaccha hun...!!
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bahut khub Apriya ji
Likhte rahiye
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«Reply #3 on: December 13, 2010, 02:31:35 PM »
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KB bhaijee....aaap achchhe ho ya nhi ye dusro pe chhor do mai bhi khud ko bahut bura maanta hu.....aap likhta bada achchha hai......aapke comments mai apni har poem pe expect karta hu ummeed hai aap jarur karenge.....ek aur baar shukriya aapki tippaniyo ka.......
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«Reply #4 on: December 13, 2010, 02:48:53 PM »
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aap yun hi likhte rahiye ham aanand lete rahenge ..
comnts ki fikar kya hai wo to aate hi rahenge..
dil khol ke likhiye aap aur... hum gungunate rahenge..
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«Reply #5 on: December 13, 2010, 03:32:57 PM »
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thnxx a lot kb bhaijee........
bas aap yu hi protsahan dete rahiye
mai taumra likhta rahunga.....
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«Reply #6 on: December 13, 2010, 03:36:21 PM »
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«Reply #7 on: December 13, 2010, 03:45:14 PM »
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shukriya madhuwesh ji. achchha laga ki mereehsaas meri kavitao me jhalak rhe hai kaas ye kala kuchh saal pahle sikhi hoti.....
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«Reply #8 on: December 14, 2010, 02:36:36 AM »
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Good one Anand Ji

Bachcha hi hota hai kachcha
Par hota hai dil ka sachcha
Dhire dhire woh bhi ba.dhega
Phir kadam se kadam da.dhayega
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