Tumhare Kafan me...

by Saavan on July 28, 2012, 04:34:26 PM
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Tumhari 'aakhon' me meri 'aas' honi chahiye,
Tumhari Saanso me meri 'saans' honi chahiye,
Tum 'Beshak' chhod jao.. ye duniya Sahib..
Par Tumhare Kafan me meri bhi 'Laash' honi chahiye.
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«Reply #1 on: July 28, 2012, 04:39:10 PM »
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kya baat hai sawan ji bahut hi umda likha aapne ...... dhero daad aur mubarakbaad
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«Reply #2 on: July 28, 2012, 04:57:12 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: July 28, 2012, 06:53:33 PM »
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Tumhari 'aakhon' me meri 'aas' honi chahiye,
Tumhari Saanso me meri 'saans' honi chahiye,
Tum 'Beshak' chhod jao.. ye duniya Sahib..
Par Tumhare Kafan me meri bhi 'Laash' honi chahiye.


badii ajeed shart hai janaab. pahlii baar aisii baat nazar aayii.
   khuda raham kare kaise kaise ishq ke diwaane hain duniya mein
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«Reply #4 on: July 29, 2012, 02:24:52 AM »
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Savan sahab aadaab
Aapke es kalam kee tareef karne ke liye mere paas alfaaj nahee hai.
Deewandee ko aapne kuch naye andaaz me pesh kiyaa hai.
Par yhaa ak baat kahna chahoonga apne en jajbaato ko sirf sayaree tak hee rakhe to kitnaa achcha hoga.
Hai na.
.....masoom......
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«Reply #5 on: July 29, 2012, 05:18:54 AM »
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good ...   but savan jee kapda udhyog ka kyu ghata kara rahe HaiN Ek kafan MaiN do lasheN Rakhwakar....
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